你校英语报拟开展“我最敬佩的改革先锋”征文评选活动。请从我国改革先锋中任选一位,撰稿应征。内容应包括:
1.最敬佩的人物及理由;
2.该人物对你的影响。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【高分范文】
TheReformPioneerinMyMind
Ofallthereformpioneers,Iadmirethe“IronHammer”LangPingmost,whotrainsandshapesChinawomen’svolleyballteam.Admittedly,ascoachofthenationalteam,LangPinghashelpedChinawinmanyworldtitlesandchampionships.Theteam’sseriesoftriumphsmakepeoplenationwidefallinlovewithvolleyball,andapartfromthat,bringusgloryandjoy.Tome,sheisnotonlytheprideofChina,butalsothesymbolofanera.
Allinall,LangPing’soutstandingskillsandcharmingmannerdeeplyinfluenceme.Herfightingspiritistrulyimpressive.“Itisyourhardesttimethatleadstothegreatestmoment.”ThisinspiresmetofacedifficultieswithcouragewheneverIamdepressed.
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记事
2.题目已为你写好。
AnUnforgettableSocialPracticeActivity
Lastwintervacation,Iparticipatedinanunforgettablesocialpracticeactivity—workingasavolunteeratDalianLibrary.
At8am,myclassgatheredandstartedworkingasscheduled.Wewereassigneddifferenttasks—cleaningrooms,sortingbooks,scanningbarcodesandsoon.Myjobwastohelpreaderslocatetheneededbooks.Theirsatisfiedsmileswhentheyfoundtheirbooksmademyday.
Thisexperiencemakesmerealizethehappinessoflaborandtheimportanceofservingthecommunity.
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通知
安排:
1.8:00在学校大门口集合,集体乘车去首都博物馆;
2.8:40在导游的带领下参观首都博物馆;
3.12:00参观结束,集体乘车返回学校。
要求:1.参观过程中请自觉遵守公共秩序;
2.馆内禁止拍照;
3.参观后每人写一篇日记。
2.通知的开头已为你写好。
Dearstudents,
Attention,please.Ihavesomethingtotellyou.InordertoknowmoreaboutBeijing,wearegoingtopayavisittotheCapitalMuseumthisSunday.Besuretoarriveattheschoolgatebefore8:00am.Wewillgotherebybusaltogether.Atabout8:40am,we’llvisitthemuseumfollowingaguide.Thevisitwillbeoverataround12:00,andthenwe’llreturnbybus.Pleaseobservepublicorder,keepquietandavoidrunning.Videorecordingandflashphotographyareforbiddeninthemuseumsoyou’dbettertakesomenotessincewehavetowriteadiaryafterthevisiting.
Hopeyouenjoythevisit.
That’sall.
Thankyou.
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发言稿
(2021·全国乙改编)
你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Besmartonlinelearners为题写一篇发言稿参赛,内容包括:
1.分析优势与不足;
2.提出学习建议。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.题目和首句已为你写好。
Besmartonlinelearners
Onlinelearninghasbecomeanimportantwaytolearnrecently.However,onlinelearninghasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.
Itsadvantagesareobvious.Itallowsustolearnanytimeandanywhere.Besides,wecanabsorballkindsofresourcestolearnmoreefficiently.However,itsdisadvantagescannotbeignored.Staringatthescreenisharmfultooureyes.Worsestill,wedon’thavemanyopportunitiestointeractwithourteachersandclassmates.
Thenhowtobesmartonlinelearners?First,weshouldbebravetodiscussourproblemswithothers.Second,itiswisetotakeashortbreakafterlearningfor30minutes.
Inconclusion,onlybybeingsmartonlinelearnerscanwetrulyenjoythebenefitsofmoderntechnology.
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申请信
假设你是李华,你校广播站正在招收英文编辑,请你根据以下提示,向负责此事的外教MrMark申请这一职务。要点如下:
职位要求:1.有很强的英语表达能力;2.关心时事。
个人优势:1.有做记者的经历,沟通能力强;
2.父亲是一位专职编辑,深受其影响。
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
DearMrMark,
I’mwritingtoapplytobeanEnglisheditorofthebroadcastingstationofourschool.Afullaccountofdetailswillbegivenasfollows.
ThereisnoescapingthefactthatthestrongcapabilityofspokenEnglishandconcernsaboutsocialissuesareobviouslyrequiredforthejob.Asforme,ontheonehand,equippedwiththeexperienceofbeinganeditor,Ihaveagoodcommandofcommunicatingskills,whichwillneverliveuptoyourexpectations.Ontheotherhand,whatdeservesagreatemphasisisthatitismyfather,whomakesagreatdifferenceonmeforthesakeofhisjobasaprofessionaleditor.Boastingmyabundanceinknowledgeofvariousaspects,Iwillneverfailtoreachyourstandards.
ShouldIbeemployedbythestation,Iwouldbemorethandelighted.
Yours,
LiHua
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推荐信
假设你是学生会主席李华,学校安排你给即将到你校任教的外籍教师Peter推荐一名学生助手(assistant),请根据以下要点给他写封推荐信。
1.推荐李梅为学生助手;
2.李梅的基本情况(17岁,高二学生,学校“十佳学生”之一);
3.李梅的优势(电脑技术、沟通能力、英语水平等)。
DearPeter,
IamLiHua,chairmanoftheStudents’Union.Havingknownthatyouareinneedofastudentassistant,IhappilyrecommendLiMeitoyou.
LiMei,a17--year--oldSeniorTwostudent,isqualifiedasoneoftheTopTenStudentsinourschool.What’smore,shehasagoodcommandofcomputertechnologyandEnglish,whichenablesherassistantworkexcellent.Toouramazement,itistheexperienceofbeingmonitoratherclassthatmakesherarmedwithexcellentcommunicationskills.Therefore,Iamconvincedthatyourcooperationwillbesatisfying.
Ihopeyouwillfindmyrecommendationhelpful.
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建议信
假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Mike来信说他的父母打算搬家到纽约,他感到很苦恼,因为他更喜欢目前的小镇生活。请给他写封回信,内容包括:
1.表示理解;2.你的看法及建议;3.表达祝愿。
DearMike,
Ireallyunderstandyoursituation.It’snevereasytoleaveafamiliarneighborhoodforanunfamiliarone.
Inmyopinion,urbanlifealsohasitsadvantages.Forinstance,citieshaveabetterlearningenvironment.Also,morejobopportunitiesareavailablethere.Maybethat’swhyyourparentshaveplannedtomove.Soyoushouldcommunicatewithyourparentsaboutthemoveandexpressyourself.Ifit’ssettled,you’dbetteradaptyourselfandgetreadyforthenewlife.
Pleasedon’thesitatetotellmeifthere’sanythingIcando.Mayyougetridofyourtroublesoon.
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邀请信
假定你是李华,你和几位朋友决定周末去参观当地博物馆举办的中国传统艺术摄影展,请给你的交换生朋友Cathy写封电子邮件,邀请她参加。内容包括:
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
DearCathy,
TheexhibitwillbeheldinthecitymuseumthiscomingSaturdaymorning,whereyoucouldenjoypicturesreflectingvariousaspectsoftraditionalChineseartlikefestivalsandcraftstakenbyprofessionalphotographers.We’llgatherattheschoolgateandstartoutat8:00am.Ourvisitwillbeginat9o'clockandlastaboutthreehours.
Ifyou’dliketocome,pleasekeepinmindthattakingpicturesisn’tallowedinthemuseum.Meanwhile,besuretotakeyourmobilephoneaswe’rerequiredtoscanthehealthQRcodebeforeentering.
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求助信
1.求助的原因;2.对杂志的要求;3.费用。
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
DearJimmy,
I’mwritingtoaskforafavorfromyou.TohelpusstudentsgainaglimpseintoAmericanculture,theStudentUnionisorganizinganAmericanCultureFestival.
We’renowinurgentneedofsomeAmericanpopularmagazinesthatcanreflectmodernAmericansociety.So,couldyoupleasehelpselectandbuysomeandsendthemtous?Besides,wewouldappreciateitifyoucouldseetoitthatthecontentsofthemagazinesaresuitableforChinesemiddleschoolstudents.Wewillcoveralltherelevantcosts.
Pleasereplyatyourearliestconvenience!Thanksalot!
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感谢信
假定你是李华,是一名高三学生。上周五,你校举办了一场英语演讲比赛,你荣获了一等奖。请根据下面的写作提纲,给外教SusanHill写一封感谢信。内容包括:
1.写信的目的;2.她如何帮助了你;3.再次表示感谢。
2.开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
DearSusanHill,
IamLiHua,astudentofSenior3.Iamwritingtoexpressmygratitudeforyourkindhelp.
Youdon’tknowhowexcitedIwastogetthefirstprizeintheEnglishSpeechContestheldinmyschoollastFridayandIoweittoyourkindhelp.Iusedtobetooshytospeakaloudinpublic.Luckily,youaskedmetopracticeseveraltimesinyourofficeandcorrectedmypronunciationandintonation.Imadegreatprogresswithyourkindhelp,withoutwhichIcouldn’thavegottheprize.
Thankyouagainforyourkindhelp!
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祝贺信
假定你是李华,近日与你一起参加全国中学生英语演讲比赛的同学David获得了一等奖。请根据所给提示给David写一封信,要点如下:
1.告诉他获奖的消息并表示祝贺;
2.回顾你们刻苦训练的过程;
3.表示感谢并向他学习。
3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
DearDavid,
IamwritingtotellyouthethrillingnewsthatyouhavewonthefirstprizeintheNationalHighSchoolSpeechContest.Therefore,I’dliketooffermycongratulationsonyoursuccess.
Asiswell-knowntousall,successcomesfromdiligenceandintelligence.ItwasintheearlymorningthatyoupracticedreadingEnglishaloudtillyouspeakEnglishasfluentlyasAmericansdid.What’smore,whenIfoundamistakeinyourEnglish,immediately,yourepaidwithappreciation.NotonlydidyoumakeyourEnglishimprovedeverydaybutalsoyouencouragedmetopracticemore.
WithmyEnglishimprovedalot,Ihopeyoucanacceptmygratitude.Iwilllearnfromyou.
Allthebest.
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咨询信
1.初学者是否可以参加学习?
2.是否有暑假班?费用如何?
3.是否需要自带材料?
DearSir/Madam,
Ihappenedtocomeacrossyouradvertisementonyourwebsite.Justplanningtotakeuppaintingthissummerholiday,Iamwritingtoyouinthehopethatyoucanprovidemewithfurtherinformationconcerningthecourse.
Firstofall,asabeginnerinpainting,IwonderwhetherIcantakeyourcourse.Besides,isthereacourserunninginthesummerholidayandhowmuchdoesitcostLastbutnotleast,willyourtrainingcenterprovidestudentswithbrushesaswellasdrawingpaperorIhavetotakesomemyselfIwouldappreciateitifyoucouldoffermetherelevantinformation.
I’mlookingforwardtoafavorablereplyatyourearliestconvenience.
Yourstruly,
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道歉信
假定你是李华,乘地铁时不小心遗失了交换生好友Mike借给你的英文版《三体》小说TheThreeBodyProblem。请给他写封道歉信,内容包括:
1.表达歉意;2.解释原因;3.补救措施。
I’mreallysorrythatI’velostthenovelTheThree-BodyProblemyoulentmelastmonth.SoI’mdroppingyouthislinetoexpressmysincereapologies.
Thebookisdefinitelyexcellent!SoattractedwasIbythefantasticplotthatItookiteverywhereIwentuntilyesterday.WhenIgotoffthesubwayIfounditnowheretobefound.Iimmediatelycontactedthesubwayservicedepartment,hopingtorecoverit,butinvain.Consideringthisisyourfavoritebook,I’veboughtthewholeseriesforyouascompensation.