ItookatriptoShanghaiwithmymotherduringtheseven-dayholiday.IttookusmorethantwohourstodrivetoShanghaifrommyhomeinHaimen.Westayedinalargehotelontheeighthfloor.
Onthefirstday,Ijuststayedinthehotelandrested.
Onthesecondday,mybrotherandIwenttoNanjingRoad.It’sthebusieststreetinShanghai.Whenwegotthere,therewerelotsofpeople.Wewalkedfromoneshoptoanother.IboughttwoT-shirtsandtwopairsoftrousersforthecomingsummer.TheT-shirtsandtrousersIbought（定从）areallwhitebecausewhiteismyfavoritecolor.Mybrotheralsoboughtsomeclothes.
Onthethirdday,mymothertookmetoJinjiangEntertainmentCentre.Itwasfullofpeople.Iplayedmanykindsofgamesthere.Ihadagoodtime.
Theotherdays,Iwenttosomeotherinterestingplaces,suchastheOrientalBrightPearlTVTower,theHuangpuRiverandShanghaiInternationalConferenceCentre.Ididn’tforgettodomyhomeworkintheevening.
Ihadafullandhappyholiday.
作文2：（过去时+表示感受的形容词）
Lastsummervacation，myfamilyandIwenttoQingdaobytrain.Therewasalwayssunshineandfreshair，whichmadeussocomfortable（定从）.Wewenttotheseaside，theseawasasblueasthesky，andbathing(沐浴)inthesunshineonthebeachwasreallyanenjoyablething.Ialsopickedupalotofcolorfulshellswithmylittlesister.Thereweboughtmanyinterestingsouvenirs，Iwasplanningtosendthemtomyfriends.Weatemanythingsthere，suchasfish，prawn，andsoon.Theyareverydelicious.Thenwelivedinacleanandtidyhotel，andthepricewasnotsoexpensive.IlikeQingdaoverymuch，andifIgotachance，Ihopetocomehereagain，itissuchabeautifulandinterestingplace.
Lastmonth,IhadatriptoBeijingwithmyfamily.Itwasreallyanimpressivetrip(令人印象深刻得旅行）.Weallhadagoodtimethere.
Atfirst,wewantedtogotherebyplane,buttheplaneticketsweresoexpensive,sowechosethehigh-speedtrainatlast.Ittookusabout8hourstogetthere.WhenwearrivedatBeijingrailwaystation,weweresotiredthatwetookataxitoahotel.Andweplanedtobeginourtripthenextday.
Onthefirstday,wegotupat2:30a.m.toseetheflag-raisingceremony.WhenwearrivedatTianan’menSquare,therewerealreadyalotofpeople.Whentheflag-raisingceremonybegan,peopleallmadeavideoexcitedly.Theflag-raisingceremonylasted（持续）onlyafewminutes.AndthenwewenttovisittheGreatWall.Itwassolongandsteep.wetookmanypicturesandweenjoyeddeliciousBeijingDuckatalocalrestaurantthatnight.
DoyouknowNiaochaoOurnationalstadium.Itwasverybigandfamous.Thebuildingwasbuiltin2003andfinishedat2008.Itsshapewasverypeculiar(不寻常的).Wetooksomepicturesthereonthesecondday.
Onthethirdday,wewenttoseetheTsinghuaUniversity----adreamschoolofmostChinesestudents.Oneday,IwanttostudyatTsinghuaUniversitytoo.
作文4：AtriptoBeijing(过去时+细节描述)
July14th,2006wasaveryspecialdayforme.IwenttoBeijingbytrainonthatday.IwasveryhappybecauseIwouldseethecapitalofChina---Beijing,areallygreatcityinChina!
BeijingisoneofthebiggestcitiesinChina.Therearelotsofplacesofinterest（名胜）,suchasthePalaceMuseum,theSummerPalace,andtheGreatWall·····LotsofvisitorsfromdifferentcountriescometoBeijingeveryyear.
IstayedinBeijingforthreedays.Duringthesedays,Ivisitedmanygoodplaces.WhenIwasinthePalaceMuseum,Ireallydidn'tknowthedirections（方向）.Itisverylarge.Peoplewillspendfourhoursiftheywanttotravelaroundit.Allthethingsinitareverynice.Althoughtheyweremademorethan500yearsago,theylookverybeautiful.WhenwewereinTaipeiPalace,wesawaspecialchair.Itwasfortheemperoranditwasmadeofgold.EachofthevisitorssaidthatitisreallyniceaftertheyvisitedthePalaceMuseum.
WhenwewenttotheGreatWall,Iwasveryexcitedbecauseitisthemostfamousplaceofinterest（名胜古迹）inChina.OnthewaytothetopoftheGreatWall,Iranveryfastallthetime.WhenIwasatthetopoftheGreatWall,IthoughtIwasahero!
Threedaysistooshortforme.Beijingisaverygoodandmoderncity.Iwanttomakeitmoreandmorebeautiful.Ishouldworkhard.IbelieveBeijingwillbethebestinthefuture.
Beijingisourcapitalcitywhichisfamousforitslonghistory（定从）.Nowwehaveaone-daytourplanforyou.
北京是我们的首都，以悠久的历史而闻名。现在我们为你制定了一天的旅游计划。
Inthemorning,youcanstartthedayattheGreatWall.It'soneofthegreatestwondersintheworld.It'ssomagnificent（壮丽的，宏伟的）thatyoucan'tgotoBeijingwithoutvisitingtheGreatWall.Atnoon,youcangototheSummerPalace.Therearesomanyinterestingsites(景点）,suchasWanshouMountain,KunmingLake,SuzhouStreet,andsomeotherancientpalaces.SoyoucanclimbWanshouMountainfirst.Theview(风景）onthetopissowonderful.Next,youcangoboatingonKunmingLake,andthen,walkonSuzhouStreettoenjoythelifeofregionssouth（南方地区的生活）oftheYangtzeRiver.Intheafternoon,youcangotohavealongwalkonTiananmanSquare,inordertoseethecitywell,andthenyoucanvisitthePalaceMuseum.Thereyoucanseedifferentobjectsofdifferentperiods（时期）.Theyareof（具有）greatvalue（价值）.Intheevening,theFrontGateWalkingStreetisagoodplacetogowhereyoucanbuyvariouskindsofsouvenirsandclothes（定从）.MostbuildingstherehavethetraditionalChinesestyles.MaybeyoucanknowsomehistoryofancientBeijing.
早晨你可以从长城开始新的一天。它是世界上最伟大的奇观之一。太壮观了，壮观到去北京不能不去参观长城。中午，你可以去颐和园。有那么多名胜古迹，如万寿山，昆明湖，苏州街，以及其他的一些古老宫殿。你可以先爬万寿山。山顶的景色是很美丽的。之后你可以去昆明湖划船，然后，走在苏州街来享受长江以南地区的生活。下午，你可以去天安门广场上散步，为了更好的看清楚这个城市，接下来你可以参观故宫博物馆。在那里你可以看到不同时期不同的物体。他们是很有价值的。晚上，前门步行街是一个很好的地方，在那里可以买到各种纪念品和衣服。那里的大多数建筑物都是中国传统风格。也许你可以了解到一些古老的北京城的历史。
Wishyouanicetrip.
祝你旅途愉快
作文6：（感受）
Thissummervacation，IwenttoBeijing.
Itwasaverygreatcity!
WewenttotheGreatWallfirst.Likeitsname，itwasverygreat.Wecanseemanymountainsaround.
ThenwewenttovisitSquare.Itwasalsofantastic.
WelivedinasmallhouseinaBeijingHutong，itwasatraditionalBeijingbuildingcalledfour-sectionpound.
Ienjoyedmyselfalot.
IloveBeijing!
作文7：（时空顺序、过去时+细节描述+词组+感受）
Iwenttothreecitiestoplayduringlastsummerholidays.TheyareBeijing,DalianandHuHehot.
IwenttoBeijingmorethaneighttimes.BeijingisthecapitalofChina.It’sabigcity.Iamveryfamiliarwith(熟悉）Beijing.IttakesanhourandfortyminutesfromNantongtoBeijingbyplane.TherearemanytallbuildingsinBeijing.It’samoderncity.MyfamilyvisitedtheGreatWall，theSummerPalace，thePalaceMuseum，theBeihaiPark，theSpaceMuseum，etc.IwenttothecountrysideofBeijingtogoboatingandfishing.Itwasveryinteresting.IwentshoppinginWangFuJing.Iboughtlotsofsouvenirsandotherthings.IlikeeatingBeijingsnacks（小吃）.Theyaredelicious.Don’tmisstheBeijingDuck.Itisreallynice.
Dalianisabeautifulcity.DalianisclosetoBeijing.Ispent50minutesontheplane.Dalianisnearthesea.Ismelledthesaltytasteintheair.Theroadsareclean.Therearesomefountains（喷泉）inoneoftheesplanades（广场）.Somepeopleflewkites.Therearelotsoftreesandflowersneartheroads.Therearemanyesplanades(海滨大道）andmanypeoplewalkedontheesplanades.Wewenttoseethebeachandthesea.Theseaisblue.Thereweremanyswimmersinthesea.Ilayonthebeachtoseethesky.Dalianisaveryniceplacetolive.
HuhehotisinInnerMongol.Therearelotsoflargegrasslands.Thegrasslandsareendless.Theskyisbrightblue.Therewerealotofhorsesandsheep.Theywererunningoreatinggrass.Irodeahorseonthegrassland.Ipickedsomecolorfulflowers.Wedranktheteawithmilk.Thereisasmalldesert，itwasveryhotwhenIwalkedonit.Thesandcouldsing.
Thesetripshelpedmeopenmyeyes.Ienjoyedmyday.
作文8：(词组+旅行的好处)
Ilovetraveling.Travelingnotonlybroadensmyhorizonsbutalsoopensmyeyestotheworld.What’smore，itrefreshesme.YoucangotoDisneylandandexperiencewhatitsliketobe“achildagain!”Youcanvisitoneofthe“sevenwonders(奇观）oftheworld，”suchastheGrandCanyonandfeel（感受）themagnificence（宏伟壮观）ofnature!Youcantastethe“magical”icewateronaglacier（冰川），whichcanhelpyoubemorebeautifulandmakeyoulivelonger（定从）.Justforgetalltrifles（琐事）andburdens（负担）thatyouhaveinyourmind（定从）.Experience（经历）isatypeoflivingknowledge.You’llbesuretoexperience（体验）manynewthingswhentraveling.Youdon’tevenneedatourguideifyoulongfor（渴望）morefreedom.Justdon’tforgettobringyourbackpack!
PlanforTwoDaysinBeijing
WarmlywelcomeallofyoutovisitChina.IhearthatyouareaCanadianhighschoolstudentsdelegationwhocometoChinatoexchangelearning（定从）.IsincerelyhopeyoucanhavefuninChina.
It'sagreatpitythatyouonlystayfortwodaysinBeijingthatyoucannotenjoyeverytouristattractions（旅游胜地）.Butyoucanstillvisittheattractionsofthemostrepresentative（典型的，有代表性的）.
Firstly,IsuggestyougoingtotheGreatWall,whichisthelongestwallandoneoftheeightwondersoftheworld（定从）.Itwasbuiltbyhandsonly,whichseemsunimaginable（难以置信的，难以想像的）(定从）.
Onthesecondday,youcanvisittheImperialPalacewhereyoucanlearnmoreaboutChinesehistory（定从）.Itwasbuiltin1406andtherewere24emperorslivingthere.AndthenyoucangototheSummerPalaceortheBeihaiPark.
Beijingisamoderncityaswellasahistoriccitywheretherearemanyplacesworthvisiting（定从）.Giventhechance,welcometotraveltoBeijinginthefuture.
热烈欢迎大家到中国来参观。我听说你们是来中国进行交换学习的加拿大高中学生代表团。我真诚希望你们在中国玩的开心。
遗憾的是你们只在北京呆两天，不能欣赏每一个旅游景点。但是你们仍然可以最具有代表性的景点。
首先，我建议你们到长城，它是最长的城墙，也是世界八大奇迹之一。它是人工建成的，这似乎无法想象。
第二天，你们可以参观故宫，在那里你们可以学习更多关于中国的历史。它是1406年建的，曾有24位皇帝住在那里。接着你可以去颐和园或者北海公园。
北京是一座现代城市，也是一座历史古城，有很多地方值得参观。如果有机会，欢迎以后来北京旅游。
作文10：(旅行的好处的词组+定从)
Helloeveryone，I’m…Youcancallme…Iamasunnyandhard-workinggirlfromClass...，Grade7of...MiddleSchool.It’smygreathonortotakepartinthisoralcompetition.Thetitleofmyspeechtodayis“TravelingandReading”
IhavebeentoBeijing，Nanjing，Shandong，Hangzhou，Suzhouandotherplaces.Atthesametime，Ihavebeenreadingmanybooksofdifferentworld-famouswriters.TheplacesI’vebeento（定从）andtheplacesIonlytravelonbooks（定从）bothimpressalotonme（留下深刻印象）.
TheaboveImentioned（定从）istwokindsofmytraveling.Wishyousharewithmemyexperienceoftraveling，nomatterWhethertravelingonfootoronbooks.Wishyouenjoymyspeechtoday.Thankyou!
作文11：（词组）
TravelsonHolidaysinChina
Nowadays，moreandmorepeopleliketotravelintheirholidays.TheotherdayIreadareportaboutthewayspeoplespendtheirholidays（定从）.Itisreportedthatinrecentyearsseveralnewholidayhabitshavebeendeveloped.Amongthem，themostinterestingoneisthegrowthoftheso-calledholidaycamps.
Fromthereportwecanseethatin20XX，40percentofpeoplestayedathomeforholidays.Butnowtheproportion(比例)hasreducedto9percent.Morepeoplegooutforfun.Theproportionofcampingandtravelingabroad（国外旅游）wasincreasingsteadily，from10percentin20XXto38percentin20XX，and12percentin20XXto26percentin20XXrespectively.Peopleenjoythefreshair，cleanWaterandgreenhillswhentheygocampinginthesuburbs（郊区）.In20XX，38percentpeopleenjoyedgoingtotheseasidewhilein20XXonly27percentprefertogothere.Whatgreatchanges!
WhydidthosechangesappearIthinkthereareseveralreasons.First，it’sbecausepeoplecanaffordtraveling（支付得起旅游）.Second,peopleprefertopursue(追求)ahigh-qualityandcolorfullife.Third，theirattitudes（态度）torelaxation（休闲）havechanged.Lesspeoplewanttosavemuchmoneybyleadingasimplelife（过简单得生活）.Inshort(总之），people'slivingstandard（生活标准）todayhasbeenrisinggreatly.
《二语写作》正在征稿，欢迎国内外专家、学者和广大外语教师及研究者扫码入群赐稿！（详情见最后一条推送）