Smokingshouldbebanned.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree
Nowhereintheworldhastheissueoftobaccobeensomuchdebatedasinoursociety.Nowadays,tobaccoismoreharmfulthandrugtopeople'shealth,thereforemanypeoplethinkthatsmokingisn'tbannedthatisadirectandprimaryreasontoinducethiskindofproblem.Theabovepointiscertainlytrue;thisessaywilloutlinethreereasons.
Themainreasonisthattobaccoisasilentkillertosmokers.Tobaccoisknowntobetheprobablecauseofsome25differentdiseases,andforsome,suchaslungcancer,bronchitisandemphysema,itisthemaincause.AccordingtoaWHOreportfourmillionpeopledieyearlyfromtobacco-relateddiseases,thatisonedeatheveryeightseconds.Tobaccoissignificantlybecomingagreatercauseofdeathanddisabilitythananyothersinglecause.
Anotherreasonisthatmoreandmoreyoungpeopleareunder18yearsoldwhosmokecigarettehavebeenblindedbythedeceitoftobacconists.Tobaccoamongadolescentsremainsstubbornlypersistent.Smokingamongadolescentsroseinthe1990sinseveraldevelopedcountries,suchasChina,VietnamandThailand.Whilenewmarketsarebeingopenedbythetobaccoindustryactions,oldmarketshavenotbeenclosed.Tobaccoisaglobalthreat.
Module(5)
Thesedaysweoftenhearthat(1)。
Itiscommonthat(2)。
Whydoessuchcircumstanceoccurinspiteofsocial
protectsForonething,(3)。
Foranother,(4)。Whatismore,
since(5),itisnaturalthat(6)。
Tosolvetheproblemisnoteasyatall,butisworth
trying。Weshoulddosomethingsuchas(7)
Trying.Weshoulddosomethingsuchas(7)
toimprovehepresentsituation,andidobelieveeverything
willbebetterinthefuture。
(1)提出论题
(1)Putforwardathesis
(2)说明现状
(2)Statethestatusquo
(3)理由一
(3)Reason1
(4)理由二
(4)Reason2
(5)理由三
(5)Reason3
(6)理由三引起的后果
(6)Reason3consequences
(7)解决方法
(7)Solutions
我写的模块(5)的相应的作文
Correspondingcompositionofmodule(5)Iwrote
pollutionofenvironment
Thesedaysweoftenhearthat(ourlivingconditionsaregettingmoreandmoreseriousbecauseofthedestructionofourenvironment)。Itiscommonthat(manytreesandanimalsarenearextinction,andtheall-importantfoodchainhasbeendestroyed。)。
Thesedaysweoftenhearthat(ourlivingconditionsaregettingmoreandmoreseriousbecauseofthedestructionofourenvironment)。Itiscommonthat(manytreesandanimalsarenearextinction,andtheall-importantfoodchainhasbeendestroyed。)
WhydoessuchcircumstanceoccurinspiteofsocialprotectsForonething,(thepopulationoftheworldisincreasingsorapidlythattheworldhasbeensocrowded。)。Foranother,(theoveruseofnaturalresourceshasinfluencedthebalanceofnaturalecology)。Whatismore,since(theindustrialrevolution),itisnatural
WhydoessuchcircumstanceoccurinspiteofsocialprotectsForonething,(thepopulationoftheworldisincreasingsorapidlythattheworldhasbeensocrowded。)Foranother,(theoveruseofnaturalresourceshasinfluencedthebalanceofnaturalecology)。Whatismore,since(theindustrialrevolution),itisnatural
that(agreatnumberoffactorieshavebeenspringinguplikemushrooms。Thesmokeandharmfulchemicalsreleasedfromfactoriesalsopollutetheenvironment)。
Class1,Grade7
BeijingSunshineSecondarySchool
SunshineTown
Beijing
April20
Dear__
Wearehappytoinviteyouto________________________________We’llhold___________from…to…(time).Wewillmeetat_________________(place)andhaveitat_________(place).We’lldo_______(activities).We’dlikeeveryone_____________(reminding).
Pleasecompletethenoteonthenextpagetotellusifyoucancome.Wehopeyoucancome.Welookforwardtoseeingyouatoutparty.Yoursfaithfully∕sincerely,
(Signature)(打印)
Amy(手写)
MonitorofClass1,Grade7
实用套语
1.Willyoudousafavorofjoiningourparty?您能光临我们的聚会吗?
2.MayItakethisopportunitytoinviteyoutoouruniversitytogivealecture?我可以借此机会邀请您到我们大学给我们演讲吗?
3.IfyouhavenootherplansforMonday,May15th,willyoucometoourpartyatmyhome?如果本周五,即五月15号,您没有其他安排的话,可以来我家参加我们的聚会吗?
4.Shallwehavethepleasuretoinviteyoutoourpartythisweekend?我们可以荣幸地邀请您参加我们本周末的聚会吗?
经典用语
1.Ifyouhaven’tmadeanydefiniteplanforthecomingweekend,I’dlovetoinviteyoutocometoourschoolandjoinusintheparty.如果您本周末尚无安排,我想邀请您来参加我们的晚会。
2.Ifyouhaven’tpromisedtojoinyourfriendselsewhere,weshallbedelightedtohaveyouwithus.如果您还没有答应别的朋友的邀请,我们将十分高兴地邀请您到我们这儿来。
3.Withyourpresenceonthisoccasion,wearesuretohaveamostdelightfulevening.您的到来一定会让我们的晚会增色不少。
4.Allofusherearelongingforthepleasureofseeingyou.您这儿的所有朋友都在盼望着能见到您。
推荐信
Addressofsender
Date
Name(Title)ofreceiver
Addressofreceiver
Dear_________(Greeting)
I’mwritingtorecommendsb.Tobecome/be______(Subject)
Para1:abilities
Para2:personalities
Para3:examplesofdetails
Para4:Ending:Weallthink…should…Para1---Para4:MessageYourssincerely,_____(Closing)
(Signatureofsender)((手写)
MonitorofClass1,Grade7(Titleofsender)
注意:
写推荐信的关键在于:
1.在新的主体部分的首尾各用一句话明确表示写此信的目的,如:
篇首:I’dliketorecommendsb.tobe/do…
篇尾:Weallthinksb.shouldbe…/shouldgetthereward
3.在用事例说明这个人的某个优点时,事例要与该优点相吻合。
1.Iwouldliketorecommendsb.tobe/become….我愿意推荐某人成为/当/做….
2.It’smypleasuretorecommendsb.tobe/become….我乐意推荐某人成为/当/做….
1.IamwritingtorecommendMarytobecomethenewchairpersonoftheStudents’Union.我写此信的目的是推荐玛丽当学生会的主席。
2.Mayisahard-workingandhelpfulstudent.梅是个努力且乐于助人的学生。
3.IthinkJohnisgoodenoughtobethechairperson.Ihopeyouwillagree.我认为约翰很适合主席这个职务。希望您能同意我的想法。
感谢信
Dateofwriting
Dear______(Greeting)
Iamwritingthelettertosaythankyoufor______(Subject)
Para1:reasonsforwritingtheletter
Para2:examplesordetails
Para3:Ending:Thankyoufor…Para1---Para3:Message
Yourssincerely,_____(Closing)
(Signatureofsender)(手写)
写感谢信应注意以下几点:
1.在新的开头,第一节中明确表示感谢,即“开头言谢”;
2.信的主体部分要写出感谢的原因。如果原因不止一个,要分段写。每段写一个主题句,表明一个原因,再辅以具体的事例进行说明,使感谢落到实处,不让人产生客套或做作的感觉;
3.在信的结尾,还要把感谢的话再说一遍,并加上对对方的祝福。
1.Withmanythankstoyouforentertainingmesogenerously.非常感谢您如此慷慨大方的招待。
2.IndeedIdonotknowhowtoexpressmyappreciationforyourvaluableservices.对您优质的服务我无以言谢。
3.Weexpressoursincereandheartythanksforthefavorsyouhavedoneforus.衷心感谢您为我们所做的一切。
4.ItwillgivememuchpleasuretodowhateverIcaninreturnforyourfavor.若能对您的好意有所回报,我将不胜荣幸。
1.Thankyoufromthebottomofmyheart,foryourletterandforyourkindnesstomeduringmylongillness.衷心地感谢您在我漫长的卧床期间给我来信,给我关心。
2.Iamgratefulforyourkindwishesformysuccess.感谢您对我成功的祝福。
3.Thankyouverymuchfortheletterofcongratulationandthenicegiftyousenttome.感谢您寄来的祝贺信及礼物。
模板一:
Dear___________,
Ireadfromtoday’snewspaperaboutrecent_________andIamwritingtoextendmydeepestcondolences.
Itbrokemyheartto__________.Icouldnotbelievemyeyeswhen_________,andIamreallyworriedaboutyouandyour_________Iamcrossingmyfingersforyounowinhopethat________.
Icanimaginehowdifficultitmustbeforyou,andIwanttoletyouknowthatyouhavemyfullsupport.Wearedonatingmoneyandnecessitiesto______.PleaseletmeknowifIcanhelpyouwithanythingelse.
Ifeelextrenelysorryforthetragedy,andIamconvincedthatyouwillovercomethedifficultyandembraceabetterlife.
Sincereyours,
____________
模板二:
DearJames,Intoday’snewspaper,IreadabouttherecenteventsinyourtownandIamwritingtoextendmydeepestcondolences.
Itbrokemyhearttoseeallthosepicturesofthosewhosehomeshavebeendestroyedinthetragichurricane.Icouldn’tbelievemyeyeswhenIsawalittlegirlcryingontheroofofherhouseaskingforhelp.Iamreallyworriedaboutyouandyourfamily,andallyourfriendsthere.Iamcrossingmyfingersforyounowinhopesthatyouareallsafeandsound.
Icanonlyimaginehowdifficultthistimemustbeforyou,andIwanttoextendtoyoumyunwaveringsupport.OurgovernmentandmanynongovernmentalorganizationsareinitiatingvariouscampaignstourgepeopletodonatemoneyandnecessarythingstosendtoAmerica.IdonatedallmyallowancethatIhavebeensavingforyears.
Ifeelextremelysorryforthistragedy,andIwillbelookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Pleasepassmyconcernontoyourparents.
1、Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,moreandmorepeoplebelievethat...随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为……(绝对经典,绝对万能,尤其在紧脏的头脑一片空白下使用也不失安全牌)
2、Manypeopleinsistthat...很多人(坚持)认为……(insist还是比较高大上的呢)
3、Alotofpeopleseemtothinkthat...很多人似乎认为……(seemto委婉的说法,也是讨喜的一种说法)
二、引出不同观点的万能模板:
2、Attitudestowards(drugs)varyfrompersontoperson.人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异。(towards,亮眼词)
3、Peoplemayhavedifferentopinionson...人们对……可能会有不同的见解。(may委婉用法)
4、Therearedifferentopinionsamongpeopleasto...关于……人们的观点大不相同。(asto用法较高级)
5、Differentpeopleholddifferentattitudestoward(failure).对(失败)人们的态度各不相同。(hold,亮点词)
三、得出最终结论的万能模板:
1、Takingallthesefactorsintoconsideration,wenaturallycometotheconclusionthat...把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论……("takesthintoconsideration"为固定搭配)
2、Takingintoaccountallthesefactors,wemayreasonablycometotheconclusionthat...考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论……("Takeintoaccountsth"再次提升了一个层次")
4、Thereisnodoubtthat(job-hopping)hasitsdrawbacksaswellasmerits.毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点。("thereisnodoubtthat"万能经典搭配;"drawbacks"与"merits"的使用提升档次)
5、Allinall,wecannotlivewithout...Butatthesametimewemusttrytofindoutnewwaystocopewiththeproblemsthatwouldarise.总之,我们没有……是无法生活的。但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题。(一般用于结尾,万能句式;copewith的出现比较亮眼)
四、提出最终建议的万能模板:
1、Itishightimethatweputanendtothe(trend).该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了。("Itishightimethat"后跟虚拟语气,即动词的一般过去式,表示“是做。。。的时候了”或者“是不做。。。的时候了”)
2、Itistimetotaketheadviceof...andtoputspecialemphasisontheimprovementof...该是采纳……的建议,并对……的进展给予非常重视的时候了。(注意"Itishightime"与"Itistime"的区别,前者接被动语态,后者接"todo"。)
3、Thereisnodoubtthatenoughconcernmustbepaidtotheproblemof...毫无疑问,对……问题应予以足够的重视。("thereisnodoubtthat"+被动为固定搭配,也不会落入俗套)
4、Obviously,....Ifwewanttodosomething...,itisessentialthat...显然,如果我们想做某事,我们需要……(essential至少比important高级)
5、Onlyinthiswaycanwe...只有这样,我们才能...(Only+倒装,绝对经典的万能句式)
6、Itmustberealizedthat...我们必须意识到...(berealizedthat比werealized隔着1000个Ithink的差距)