第一部分、四六级作文:记叙文题型作文DIY写作步骤
第一段、总结描述
主题句
第二段、具体描述
具体描述事件发生的原因、经过和结果
起因+经过+结果
第三段、对事件的分析
分析句1+分析句2+分析3
第二部分、记叙文题型作文DIY写作范文练习
[实战演练]
Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteacompositiononthetopicTheDayMyClassmateFellIll.
1、简单描述一下这位同学生病的情况;
2、同学、老师和我是如何帮助他的;
3、人和人之间的这种相互关爱给我的感受是....
[DIY写作模板:架构阶段]
第一段:
开篇句:About_____O'clockoneeveningin_______,_____.
扩展句:________.(展开描述一下事件)
第二段:
主题句:Withouthesitation,_____.Itwasn'tlongbefore_____.
扩展句:1、One______.
2、Another_______.
3、Ourteacher_______.
第三段:
结尾句:Is_______WhocantellBut______.
扩展句:1、When____,peopleshowed_____spiritregardlessof____.
2、Thiskindofcarebetweenpersonsistheverykindgiving,unselfishandpricelessdevotionorsacrifice.
3、Anditisjustbecauseofthiscarethatwecanhavewarmfamilies,ahappylifeandabeautifulworld.
[DIY写作模板:填充阶段]
开篇句:AboutnineO'clockoneeveninginMay,myroommateLiMingwaslyinginbed,tremblingwithcoldandhavingacough.
扩展句:Hisheadwasachingsointenselythathekeptgroaning.Hisforeheadfeltveryhot.Wetookhistemperature.Itwas38.5℃.(展开描述一下事件)
主题句:Withouthesitation,Idialed"120".Itwasn'tlongbeforeanambulancearrived.
扩展句:1、Oneroommatebroughtablanketforhim.
2、Anothersupportedhimintheambulance.
3、Ourteacherinsistedongivinghimsomemoney.
结尾句:IsheasuspedtedSARSpatientWhocantellButwedid'tretreat.
扩展句:1、WhenthesavageSARSwasspreading,peopleshowedfearlessspiritregardlessofdangerstotheirownhealth.
第三部分、范文
AboutnineO'clockoneeveninginMay,myroommateLiMingwaslyinginbed,tremblingwithcoldandhavingacough.Hisheadwasachingsointenselythathekeptgroaning.Hisforeheadfeltveryhot.Wetookhistemperature.Itwas38.5℃.
Withouthesitation,Idialed"120".Itwasn'tlongbeforeanambulancearrived.Oneroommatebroughtablanketforhim.Anothersupportedhimintheambulance.Ourteacherinsistedongivinghimsomemoney.
IsheasuspedtedSARSpatientWhocantellButwedid'tretreat.WhenthesavageSARSwasspreading,peopleshowedfearlessspiritregardlessofdangerstotheirownhealth.Thiskindofcarebetweenpersonsistheverykindgiving,unselfishandpricelessdevotionorsacrifice.Anditisjustbecauseofthiscarethatwecanhavewarmfamilies,ahappylifeandabeautifulworld.