英语写作既是中学英语教学的重点,也是教学难点。
许多教师对此感到很头疼,学生写起作文来也感到痛苦,感到无话可说或不知从哪儿说起,从哪下笔,往往是「投入多、成效低」。
学生写作基本功不够扎实,字迹潦草,语法错误率高,汉语式的英语句子经常出现。那么如何才能提高其写作能力呢?
今天为大家带来的英语干货是18篇堪称满分的英语作文,18个写作体裁,内涵经典短语和句式,背会它们,将切实有效地提升你的英语成绩!
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2.Isincerelyinviteyoutowatchtheshowbecause…我诚挚地邀请您来看演出,因为…...
满分佳作赏析
假定你是李华。你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请外教Susan参加,要点包括:
2.地点:学生俱乐部
3.内容:唱生日歌、吃蛋糕、玩游戏等
4.要求:备小礼物
Hi,Susan,
WerethrowingasurprisepartyforXiaoming’sbirthday.
Asscheduled,alltheclassmatesinourclasswillgatherattheStudentsCentreat8pmthisFridayeveningtocelebrateXiaomingsbirthday.Wewouldfeelmuchhonoredifyoucouldcomeandenjoyit,whichistofinishat9,lastinganhour.
Whatsmore,asasurprise,wellallpreparesomesecretbirthdaygiftsforhim,anditllbegreattoseehowsurprisedhewillbeseeingthegifts.Asitsasurpriseparty,hewillknownothingaboutitbeforehand,andwedohopethatyoucouldmanagetoattendit.
Lookingforwardtoyourcoming.
Yours
LiHua
1.Iamwritingtoaskformoreinformationaboutit.我写信来询问更多关于它的消息。
3.Themostsignificantthingyoushouldkeepinmindisthat…你需要记住的最重要的事情是......
ENJOYARELAXINGSTUDYBREAK
INBEAUTIFULLANCASTER
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LANGUAGECENTREANDCOLLEGEOFARTS
UNIVERSITYOFLANCASTER
Languages*English*French*Spanish
Arts*Politics*Sociology*History
3wk,6wkand12wkcourses
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Reasonablefees
Accommodationservice
DearSir/Madam,
IamastudentinChinaandIplantogotoBritaintoattendasummerschoolduringthevacation.Iveseenyourad,andIdliketoknowsomethingmoreaboutyoursix-weekEnglishcourses.
First,whenwillthecoursestartandhowmanyClasshoursarethereperweekBesides,Iwishtherewouldnotbetoomanystudentsinaclass.IdalsoliketoknowhowmuchIhavetopayforthecourseandwhetheraccommodationisincluded.
Wouldtherebehostfamilyoruniversitydormitory
Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.
Yoursfaithfully,
1.Iwouldbeverygratefulifyoucould…如果您能……我将感激不尽。
2.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldoffermeahand.如您能帮助我,我将感激不尽。
4.Ifyouneedfurtherinformation,doletmeknow.如您需要更多的信息,请告知我。
假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信,告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会,带去他想要的那幅中国画,同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明:
李明:高个子,戴眼镜
航班号:CA985
到达:8月6日上午11:30
DearPeter,
Howareyoudoing?ImwritingtotellyouthatmyuncleLiMingisgoingtohaveameetinginyourcity.DoyouremembertheChinesepaintingIpromisedyoulastyearMyunclewillbringittoyousoon.Ihopeyouwilllikeit.
Iwonderifyoucoulddomeafavor.ThisisthefirsttimethatmyunclevisitstheUS,soIhopeyoucanmeethimattheairport.Hearrivesat11:30a.monAugust6thandhisflightnumberisCA985.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakehimtohishotel.Myuncleistall.Hewillbewearingdarkglassesandabluejacket.
Lookingforwardtoyourreply.
Yours,
1.Isincerelyhopethatmyapplicationcouldbefavorablyconsidered.我真诚地希望我的申请会被考虑。
3.Ireallywanttoobtainthispreciousopportunitybecause…我真的希望得到这次珍贵的机会,因为......
假定你是李华,从互联网(theInternet)上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营,欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容主要包括:
1.自我介绍(包括英语能力);
2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家);
3.希望获准。
DearSirorMadam:
TheotherdayIhappenedtoreadyouradvertisementontheInternet,sayingthatyouareholdingasummercampaimedatstudentsfromaroundtheworld,andIminterestedtoparticipateinit.
ImLiHua,amiddleschoolstudentinChina.Asateenager,Iminterestedinmakingfriendswithkidsofmyagefromaroundtheworld.YourcampwillprovideagoodchanceformetoknowalotaboutothercountriesandtellthemsomethingaboutChina.Whatsmore,IcanimprovemyEnglish,communicatingwithpeoplefromothercountries.
IdohopethatIcanbeluckyenoughtobeadmittedtoyourcamp.
Regards,
1.Almostperfectasitis,itshouldmakemoreimprovementinsomearea.虽然它近乎完美,但是它在一些方面也需要改进。
2.AndIvefoundthatmyproblemlieschieflyintwoaspects.Foronething,…Foranotherthing,…我发现我的问题主要在于两个方面。一方面,…...另一方面,…...
3.Ibelievethat,withthejointeffortsofbothteachersandstudents,ourschoolwillbecomeamoreenjoyableplaceinthenearfuture.我相信,有了老师和学生的共同努力,我们学校会在不久的将来成为一个更令人快乐的地方。
假定你是李华,你所喜爱的GlobalMirror周报正值创刊五周年之际征集读者意见。请你依据以下内容给主编写封信,内容主要包括:
1.说明你是该报的忠实读者;
2.赞赏该报优点
1)兼顾国内外新闻
2)介绍名人成功故事;
DearEditor-in-Chief,
Congratulationsonthe5thanniversaryofGlobalMirror!
I’maregularreaderofyournewspaper.Ilikeitverymuchmainlyforthefollowingtworeasons.First,itcoversbothnationalandinternationalnewssothat,bysimplyturningthepages,Icanlearnallimportantthingsthathavehappenedduringtheweek.
Equallyattractivearethesuccessstoriesofworld-famouspeople,whichhelpmeunderstandhowapersoncanworkhardtomaketheworldabetterplace.
Asayoungstudent,IsuggestthatGlobalMirrorcarryarticlestoguideusinourEnglishlearning,andIhopethatitwillbecomeevenmorepopular.
Sincerelyyours,
1.ImwritingthislettertoexpressmysinceregratitudetoyouforteachingmetheEnglishsong.我写信来达对你教我英文歌的衷心感谢!
2.Withoutyourhelp,theperformancecouldnthavebeenthatsuccessful.没有您的帮助,表演不会有那么成功。
3.Idliketoexpressmythanksforyourhospitalityandkindnesswhen|wasinAmerica.我想感谢您对我在美国时的好客和友好。
4.Inaddition,whathasimpressedmemostis…而且,最让我感动的是......
1.自我介绍;
2.祝贺苏琳生日;
3.感谢工作人员;
4.索取苏琳三岁生日昭
GreetingsfromChina!
ThisisLiHua,astudentinChina,Ivebeenfondofpandassincemychildhood.
Sincethreeyearsago,whenthepandaBaiyungavebirthtoababypandaSulin,Ihavebeenvisitingyourwebsitetokeepmyselfinformedabouthowthingsaregoingforthem.
IfIrememberclearly,shewillturnthreesoon.Iwanttosayhappybirthdaytoherandexpressmythankstoyouforyourhardwork,withwhichshehasbeenbroughtupandhasbeenlivinghappilywithherparentsintheUS.
Bytheway,IwonderifIcouldhaveaphototakenofSulinonherthirdbirthday.Thankyouverymuchinadvance.
Yourstruly,
1.Takingintoaccountallthreefactorsabove,Irequestthatthecompanyshouldhaveachangeofitformeassoonaspossible.考虑到以上的三个因素,我要求公司要为我尽快换一个新的。
2.Butweareregretfultofindthatitcannotworknormally.但是,我们很遗憾地发现它不能正常地工作。
4.Iamwaitingforareasonableexplanationandexpectinganearlyreply.我在等待一个合理的解释,并期待及早回复。
假如你是李华,昨天在商场购买了一台电风扇,回家后发现它不能运转。你回到店里与营业员交涉时,该营业员对你的态度恶劣,对你提出的问题不予受理。请你为此向经理写一封投诉信。
DearManager,
IfeelsorrytotroubleyoubutIamafraidthatIhavetomakeacomplaint.
YesterdayIboughtanelectricfaninyourshop,butwhenIgothomeandturnediton,itdidntwork.SoItookitbackandtalkedtotheassistantabouttheproblem.Tomysurprise,insteadofhelpingmesolvetheproblem,theman,inarudemanner,refusedtoexamineit.
Generally,yourshopiswell-knownforgoodserviceandthatiswhyIboughttheelectricfaninyourshop.Iwasreallyupsettofindthatsuchathingshouldhaveoccurredinyourshop.
Iamwaitingforareasonableexplanationandexpectinganearlyreply.
1.Ifeelterriblysorryformissingthechanceofansweringyourletterintime.我十分抱歉没有时向信。
3.Imawfullysorryforthesuddenchangeofplanfeelitagreatpitytomisstheopportunity.对突然的改变我感到十分抱歉,对错过这个机会感到很可惜。
假如你是新华中学的学生李华,你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件,询问你暑假里的打算,但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回封邮件:
1.未及时回信的原因
2.你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)。
DearTom
IImterriblysorryIcouldntreplytoyouremailwhichyousentmeaweekagoimmediately.Iwassooccupiedwiththefinalexams.
Asforthecomingsummerholiday,Iwillfirstdoaparttimejobinafast-foodrestaurant.NotonlywillIearnsomemoneybutIwillalsogainsomesocialexperiencethroughit.
Andthen|willgoonatriptoSichuan,wherethereareagreatnumberofplacesofinterest.Finally,gotoYaantoworkasavolunteer.Thereisnodoubtthatchildrentherearebadlyinneedofhelp.IhopewhatIwilldowillmakeagreatdifferencetothem.
Bestwishes.
Yourssincerely,
1.该谚语的含义;
2.体现该谚语含义的个人经历。
a)Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.
b)Wheretheresawill,there‘saway.
参考词汇:谚语proverb
AFriendinNeedIsaFriendIndeed
Alifewithoutfriendsisalifewithoutsunshine!Friendstrytheirbesttohelpyouwithoutthinkingofwhattheycangetfromit.
OnceIdoubtedtheusefulnessofstudy,losingmyinterestsanddirection,evenconfidence.Finally,Idecidedtostopstudying.Afterknowingthenews,myfriendencouragedmepatiently.SheinsistedonpersuadingmeuntilIpromisedtogiveupthisthought.
Later,Imadeupmymindtostudyhardsoastoentermydreamuniversity.
Manypeoplewillbeinandoutofyourlife,butonlytruefriendswillleavefootprintsinyourheart.Truefriendsalwayscometoyouwhenyouneedhelp.
WhereTheresaWill,Theresaway
Nothingisimpossibletoawillingheart.Aslongasyoukeeptrying,youllmakeit.
1.Withtheeconomydevelopingrapidly,Imgladtoseeourcityistakingonanewlook.随着经济的快速发展,我非常高兴地看到我们的城市呈现出新的面貌。
2.Overthepasttwentyyearsorso,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourlife.过去的二十年左右,我们的生活发生了重大的变化。
3.TiredasIwas,Ineverfeltsohappy.尽管很累,我没有觉得这么开心。
一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是“十年后的我”,请根据下列要点和你的想象完成短文。
1.家庭;
2.工作;
3.业余生活。
Ioftenimaginewhatmylifewillbelikeinthefuture.Iwouldliketogiveageneralpictureofmyfuturelifeintenyears.
Firstofall,Iwillhaveawarmfamilywherefamilymemberswillloveeachotherandcareabouteachother.Asforme,sincebeingateacherismydream,Imsurethatthisdreamwillcometruethen.
IwishtoteachforeignstudentstraditionalChinesecultureinacollegeatthattimeandIwillcertainlyintroduceChinatotheworld.Timepermitting,Iexpecttohavemoresparetimetospendwithmyfriendssothatwecanhaveabetterrelationship.
Suchwillbemyfuturelife,theoneIhavebeendreamingof.
1.Asthesayinggoes,wheninRome,doastheRomansdo.俗话有说,入乡随俗。
假设你是晨光中学高二(1)班的班长李华,得知美国学生Chris作为交换生,下学期将到你班学习。请你根据以下提示,给他写封邮件:
1.表示欢迎;
3.介绍本班情况。
参考词汇:交换生exchangestudent
DearChris
ImLiHua,themonitorofClassOneGradeEleven.
Imveryexcitedaboutyourcomingtoourschoolnexttermasanexchangestudent.
Firstly,Idliketotellyouabouttheweatherinmycity,whichisoftenwindyandcoldinwinter.Soyoushouldbringyourwarmclothes.
Secondly,wouldyoumindeatingnoodlesBecausepeopleheremainlyliveonwheatflour.However,dontworryaboutit.Youwillhavenodifficultyinfindingwesternfood.
Thirdly,Iwanttointroduceourclasstoyou.Theteachersinourschoolarenotonlyexperiencedandknowledgeable,butalsopatientandunderstanding.Everyoneinmyclassisactive.IhopeyouwillsoonbecomeamemberofourClass.
lmlookingforwardtoyourcoming.
1.TodayIamverygladtohavethechancetorunforthevicepresidentoftheEnglishClub.今天,我非常高兴有机会来竞选英语俱乐部的副主席。
2.Itwaswithsincerityandfaithfulnessthatwecreatedaharmoniousatmosphere.我们是带着真诚来创造一个和谐的气氛的。
3.Iamsurethatwithyourgreatefforts,youwillenjoyacolorfulandfruitfullifehere.我相信在您的不懈努力,您在这里会有一个丰硕多彩的人生。
1.个人的优势介绍(如性格、特长等):
2.工作设想:
3.表达竞选的愿望。
参考词汇:副主席vicepresident竞选runfor
Goodafternoon,mydearfriends.
MynameisLiHua.TodayIamverygladtohavethechancetorunforthevicepresidentoftheEnglishClub.Ifeelqualifiedtotakethejob.NotonlyhaveIgainedalotofexperiencefrommyjobasmonitorbutIamalsogoodatorganizingactivities.
IsincerelyhopeYOuwillgivemeachance.
Thankyou.
1.ThestreetistothesouthofTiananmenSquare.这条街在天安门广场的南边。
2.Itcandatebacktosixhundredyearsandhasalengthofabout800metres,alongwhichlie300shops.它可以追溯到600年前,有800米长,两边有300家商店。
3.Itsasmallflatof25squaremeters,withabedroomabathroomandakitchen.这是一个25平方米的小公寓,有一个卧室、一个浴室和一个厨房。
4.ThecitystandsonthebankoftheChangjiangRiver.这座城市坐落在长江边上。
假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Sarah打算暑期来北京旅游,来信询问改建后前门大街的情况。请你写封回信,简单介绍以下内容:
1.简况:长800余米、600多年历史、300余家商铺;
2.位置:天安门广场南面;
3.交通:公共汽车17、69、59等路,地铁2号线;
4.特色:步行街、当当车、茶馆、剧院等。
参考词汇:步行街pedestrianstreet当当车trolleycar地铁subway
DearSarah,
ThankyouforyourletteraskingabouttherebuiltofQianmenStreet.Hereissomethingaboutit.QianenStreetisafamousstreetofover600yearsold.Alongthis800-metrestreet,therearemorethan300shops.
AsthestreetisinthecenterofBeijing,justtothesouthofTiananmenSquare,itsveryconvenienttogettherebybus.YoumaytakebusesNO.11,69or59!
SubwayLine2hasastoptheretoo.QianmenStreetisapedestrianstreet,buttherearetrolleycarstotakeyounotonlytotheshops,butalsotothetheatersandteahouseswhereyoucanexperienceatrulyChinesewayoflife.Imsureyoulllikeit.
1.Thefollowingareourpreliminaryarrangementsforyourreviewandcomments.
以下是我们初步的安排,供您审阅和提建议。
2.Pleasefeedbackwhetheryouresatisfiedwiththisschedule,andwewillmakesomechangesifnecessary.
请反馈您是否满意这个安排,如果需要我们将会作出改变。
3.IfthereisanythingIcandoforyou,Iwouldbemorethangladtohelp.
如果有我可以帮忙的,我将非常乐意。
假设你是李华,加拿大一所学校将于今年暑假组织学生来你校访问。其间,Andysmith将借住你家。请你代表全家写信给Andy,欢迎他的到来,并告知有关事宜。信的要点如下:
上午:学校活动
下午:游览市区
晚上:看电视,玩游戏,聊天
参考词汇:安排arrange
DearAndy,
IamgladtolearnthatyouarecomingtoChinaandwillstayatmyhome.MyparentsandIareverypleasedtohaveyouwithus.Nowletmetellyouwhatwehavearrangedforyou.
Iknowtheschoolwillorganizealotofthingsforyoutodointhemorning,butintheafternoonshowyouaroundandtakeyoutosomeplacesofinterest.WellmostlystayathomeintheeveningwatchingTV,playinggames,andmeetingpeople.
Imsurewellhaveawonderfultimeandenjoyeachotherscompany.lmlookingforwardverymuchtomeetingyousoon.
1.Recently,asurveyhasbeendonetofindout…最近,进行了一次调查去了解......
2.OnethousandseniormiddleschoolstudentsfromtenschoolsinHuBeiProvincewereinterviewed.湖北省10间学校的一千名中学生参与了调查。
3.Thesurveyshowsthatmorethanhalfofthestudentsliketoreadnewsmost.调查发现超过一半的学生最喜欢读新闻。
4.Thesurveyshowsthathalfofthegirlschoose...,while48%oftheboys…调查发现一半的女生选...,而48%的男生...
5.Inordertocelebratethe90thbirthdayofourPartyandenrichourlives,ourschoolhasorganizedapatrioticsongconcertrecently.为了庆祝建党90周年,丰富大家的文化生活,我们学校最近举办了一次爱国歌曲演唱会。
受某英文报的委托,你最近对高中生的英语阅读兴趣做了一次调查。请根据以下信息,用英语为该报写一篇100词左右的短文。短文的标题及首句己为你写好。
调查范围:湖北省的10所中学
调查对象:高中生调查人数:1200
调查方式:访谈
ReadingInterestsofSeniorMiddleSchoolStudents
Recently,asurveyhasbeenontofindoutthereadinginterestsofseniormiddleschoolstudents.
lnthissurvey,onethousandseniormiddleschoolstudentsfromtenschoolsinHubeiProvincewereinterviewd.TheywereaskedwhichtheylikedreadingmostamongthefourcategoriesofEnglisharticles:news,stories,popularsciencearticlesandarticlesaboutlearningmethods.
Thesurveyshowsthatmorethanhalfofthestudentsliketoreadnewsmost.Twenty-sixpercentofthestudentssaythatEnglishstoriesaretheirfavorite.Onlysevenpercentofthestudentsaremostinterestedinreadingarticlesaboutlearningmethods.
However,thenumberofthestudentswhoenjoyreadingpopularsciencearticlesdoublesthatofthosewhopreferreadingarticlesaboutlearningmethods.
1.OurschoolislookingforanativespeakerofEnglishto…我们学校正在找一位英语母语者来......
2.Ifyouareinterestedinthejobinformation,pleasereplytomeassoonaspossible.如果你对工作信息感兴趣,请尽快回复我。
3.Youcanalsowritetoccc20091201@sina.comtoinformme.你也可以发邮件到CCC20091201@sina.com来通知我。
4.Themainresponsibilitiesoftheadvisorinclude...顾问的主要职责包括......
5.Ifyouareinterested,pleasecallLiHuaat13011223344foraninterview.如果您感兴趣,请致电13011223344找李华安排面试。
假设你是李华,你的美国笔友Peter表示希望来中国教书。你校现在需招聘外教,请给他写封信,告知招聘信息。内容主要包括:
1.教授课程:英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等;
2.授课对象:高中生(至少三年英语基础);
3.工作量:每周12学时,任选三门课,担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问(advisor)。
Irememberyoutoldmeyouwereinterestedteachinginchina.Now,hereissomegoodnewsthatIhopewillappealtoyou.
Yousee,ourschoolislookingforanativespeakerofEnglishtoteachsomecoursestotheseniorhighschoolstudents,whohaveatleastthreeyearsofEnglishlearningexperiences.
Thecoursesincludespeaking,writing,BritainTodayandAmericaToday,fromwhichyouareexpectedtochoosethreetoteach.Onceyouareemployed,youareexpectedtowork12hoursaweek.BesidesteachingyoualsohavetoworkasanadvisortoourStudentsEnglishCluborourschoolsEnglishnewspaper.
Ifyouareinterestedinthejobinformation,pleasereplytomeassoonaspossible.Meanwhile,Imalwaysreadytohelpyouwithquestionsyoumightcomeupwith.
1.Ashighschoolstudents,itsourdutytotelleveryonearoundustosavewater.作为高中生,告诉身边的每一个人节约用水是我们的责任。
2.Letsstartrightnowandsparenoefforttodoalittleeveryday,everyhourandeveryminute.让我们从现在开始每天努力一点点,抓紧每一天、每一小时、每一分钟。
假如你是育才中学学生会主席李华,针对目前一些地方血库纷纷告急的情况,请参照以下提示,用英文写一份倡议书,提倡无偿献血(donatebloodforfree)
要点提示:
1.社会上对献血的错误认识;
2.指出献血的意义;
Boysandgirls,
Recentlysomebloodbanksacrossthecountryarereportedtobeinshortsupplyofblood.
Somepeopleholdthewrongideathatdonatingblooddoesharmtothedonorshealth.Butthetruthisthatwhenasmallamountofbloodistakenout,thebodywillmakeaquickadjustmenttoworknormally.
Asweknow,donatingbloodisofgreatimportance.Bloodisimportanttopatients,withoutwhichmanycantsurvive.Amongyoungpeoplelikeus,donatingbloodisasocialresponsibility.
Weseniorhighschoolstudents,whohaveabetterunderstandingofmedicalknowledge,shouldsetagoodexampleforotherpeople.Fromnowon,ourschoolwillholdaseriesofactivitiestoexplainthebenefitsofdonatingblood.
Donatenowandsavealife!
TheStudentsUnion
1.Sinceyouwereout,Ihavetoleavethisnotetoyou.既然你出去了,我只好给你张便条了。
2.IamsorrythatIcantattendthepartytobeheldthisFridayatyourapartment.很抱歉我不能参加星期五在你公寓举办的派对。
3.Iwonderifitispossibleforthetalktoberecorded.我想是否有可能把讲座录音。
假定你是李华,正在英国接受英语培训,住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs.Wilson不在家,你准备外出,请给Mrs.Wilson写一留言条,内容包括:
1.外出购物
2.替房东还书
1)咖啡屋(BoltonCoffee)见面取消
2)此事己告知Susan
3)尽快回电
Mrs.Wilson
Imgoingoutshoppingandwontbebackuntilabout5:00pm.IhavetakenwithmethetwobooksyouaskedmetoreturntotheCityLibrary.
Atabout1oclockthisafternoon,Tracycalled,sayingthatshecouldntmeetyouatBoltonCoffeetomorrowmorningasshehadsomethingimportanttoattendto.
Shefeltverysorryaboutthat,butsaidthatyoucouldsetsomeothertimeforthemeeting.Shewantedyoutocallherbackassoonasyouarehome.ShehasalreadytoldSusanaboutthischange.
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