建议信(1)-----阐释原因;提出建议类
请你代表你班同学给校长写一封信,反映一下你校食堂的几点问题,以引起学校重视,并针对问题提出两条合理建议。问题包括:
1.菜价昂贵,菜市单一;
3.味道不佳,浪费现象严重。
注意:1.词数不少于120;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;3.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:食堂canteen
DearPrincipal,
Recently,manystudentsarediscussingtheproblemsofthecanteen.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Isincerelyhopeyoucanadoptmysuggestions.Thankyou!
Yours,
LiHua
作文范文:
Recently,manystudentsarediscussingtheproblemsofthecanteen.Theproblemsareasfollows.
Somestudentsthinkthepricesofthedishesaretoohighandthatthechoicesaretoolimited.Anotherconcernisthatthetimespentinwaitingissolongthatwehavelesstimetohavearest.Meanwhile,somestudentsthinkthatthetasteofthefoodisawful,whichleadstoalotofwaste.
AsfarasI’mconcerned,measuresaresupposedtobetakentoimprovetheconditionsofthecanteen.Firstofall,it’ssuggestedthatthepricesbemorereasonableandthechoicesofdishesbemorevarious.Inaddition,it’sbettertoopenmoreservicewindowstoreducewaitingtime.
Isincerelyhopeyoucanadoptmysuggestions.Thankyou!
需注意的词汇、表达:
1.deliciouswaitingtaste(n.味道)tasty(adj.
可口的)cook(n.厨师)cooker(n.炊具)
price价格
2.lower/bringdowntheprice降低价格
3.atalower/reasonableprice以较低的价格
4.varietiesofdishes种类多样的菜品
5.Foronething,…….Foranother,……
6.makesb(not)dosth
7.wait/standinline/inaqueueforalongtime
8.Thekindsoffoodarefew.
表达食堂出现的问题:
9.Thepricesofdishesaresohighthatmanyofus
can’taffordthem.
10.Therearesofewdishestochoosefrom,which
isfarfromsatisfactory./whichcan’tsatisfy
ourneeds.
11.Ittakesussomuchtimetostandinline,
whichdecreasesourtimeofrestatnoon.
12.Thefoodinthecanteendoesn’ttastegood./
nice.
Thetasteoffoodinthecanteenisn’tgood.13.Thefoodinthecanteentastessobadthata