绿底为优美,黄底为瑕疵,红底为错字(括号里边为间批),中间横线为删除,上标符号添加字,文下隔行写点评,点评内容用红字,红双线“‖”处段另起(分段).
假如你是温迪wendy,请根据下面的要点写一篇70词左右的报道。
要点:1、8月14日发生了一次山体滑坡(landslide);
2、连续两天大雨后,山体滑坡发生在第三天下午;
3、那天有个女孩与她母亲在家,中午父亲匆忙回到家,并叫她们赶快离开;
4、雨大,父亲告诉她们带好雨伞;
5、这时房子开始摇晃,人们非常害怕,迅速跑开了;
6、此后第二天上午回家时,女孩发现房子没了,到处是玻璃和砖块,女孩感到很悲伤。
Hello!I'mWendy.Iwanttotelleveryone,theAugust14thhappedlandslide,aftertwodaysofheavyrain,thelandslidehappedatthethreedayafternoon.Thatday,theyhaveagirlandhermotherathome,intheafternoon,herfathergotoworkhurryandtoldthemleft.Therainisheavily,fathertellthembringanumbrella.Atthemoment,thehouseisShake.Peopleareveryafraid,hurrytorunup.Atthesecondmorningthegobackhome,thegirlfindthehouseisn't,isfullofglassandbricks,thegirlfeltverysad.
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