英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者,使人读后感到真实可信,如身临其境。如:
Theotherday,Iwasdrivingalongthestreet.Suddenly,acarlostitscontrolandrandirectlytowardsmefast.IwassofrightenedthatIquicklyturnedtotheleftside.Butitwastoolate.ThecarhitmybikeandIfelloffit.
LittleTomwasgoingtoschoolwithanumbrella,foritwasraininghard.Ontheway,hesawanoldwomanwalkingintherainwithnothingtocover.Tomwentuptotheoldwomanandwantedtosharetheumbrellawithher,buthewastooshort.WhatcouldhedoThenhehadagoodidea.
2.动词的时态
在记叙文中,记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高,且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的'是动词的过去的,这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化,正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3.叙述的顺序
4.叙述的过渡
Inmysummerholidays,Ididalotofthings.Apartformdoingmyhomework,readinganEnglishnovel,watchingTVanddoingsomehousework,IwentonatriptoQingdao.Itisreallyabeautifulcity.Therearemanyplacesofinteresttosee.Butwhatimpressedmemostwasthesunrise.
ThenextmorningIgotupearly.Iwasveryhappybecauseitwasafineday.BythetimeIgottothebeach,thecloudsonthehorizonwereturningred.Inalittlewhile,asmallpartofthesunwasgraduallyappearing.Thesunwasveryred,notshining.Itroseslowly.Atlastitbrokethroughtheredcloudsandjumpedabovethesea,justlikeadeep-redball.Atthesametimethecloudsandtheseawaterbecameredandbright.
Whatamovingandunforgettablescene!
5.叙述与对话
Iwasinthekitchen,andIwascookingsomething.SuddenlyIheardaloudnoisefromthefront.Ithoughtmaybesomeonewasknockingthedoor.IaskedwhoitwasbutIheardnoreply.AfterawhileIsawmycatrunningacrosstheparlor.Irealizeditwasthecat.Ifeltreleased.
这本来应是一段故事性很强的文字,但经作者这么一写,就不那么吸引人了。原因是文中用的都是叙述模式,没有人物语言,把“悬念”给冲淡了。可作如下调整:
Iwasinthekitchencookingsomething."Crash!"aloudnoisecamefromthefront.Thinkingsomeonewasknockingatthedoor,Iasked,"Who"Noreply.Afterawhile,Isawmycatrunningacrosstheparlor."It'syou."Isaid,quitereleased.
二、写好记叙文的基本要领
1.头绪分明,脉络清楚
2.突出中心,详略得当
Onenightamancametoourhouseandtoldme,"Thereisafamilywitheightchildren.Theyhavenoteatenfordays."Itooksomefoodwithmeandwent.
WhenIfinallycametothatfamily,Isawthefacesofthoselittlechildrendisfigured(破坏外貌)byhunger.Therewasnosorroworsadnessintheirfaces,justthedeeppainofhunger.
Igavethericetothemother.Shedividedthericeintwo,andwentout,carryinghalftherice.Whenshecameback,Iaskedher,"Wheredidyougo"shegavemethissimpleanswer,"Tomyneighbors—theyarehungryalso!"
3.用活语言,准确生动
记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动,又要表现力强,这样才能把人、事描写得具体生动,其可读性才强。试比较下面一篇例文修改的前后效果。
原文:
OnedayXiaoqiangwaswanderingaway.Hewassoonlostamongpeopleandtraffic.Hecouldnotfindthewaybackhomeandstartedcrying.Justthen,twoyoungstudentswhowerepassingbyfoundhimstandingaloneinfrontofashopandcrying.TheywentuptoXiaoqiangandaskedhimwhathadhappened.Xiaoqiangtoldthemhowhegotlostandwherehelived.Thetwostudentsdecidedtotakehimhome.MotherwaspleasedtoseeXiaoqiangcomebacksafeandsound.Sheinvitedthetwostudentsintothehouseandgavethemsomemoney,buttheydidn'ttakeit.Sheservedthemwithteabuttheyleft.
修改后:
Theotherday,five-year-oldXiaoqianglefthomealoneandwanderedhappilyinthestreet.Aftersometime,hefelthungrysohewantedtogobackhome.Buthefoundhewaslostamongthecrowdedpeopleandheavytraffic.Whenhecouldnotfindthewayhome,hestartedandcrying.Justthen,twoyoungstudentswhowerepassingbyfromschoolfoundhimsandingcryinginfrontofashop.Theyimmediatelywentuptohim.
"Littleboy,whyareyoustandingherecrying"theyasked.
"IwantMom,Igohome."saidtheboy,stillcrying.
"Don'tworry,we'llsendyouhome."
Andtheyspentthenexttwohourslookingfortheboy'shouse.Withthehelpofapoliceman,theyfinallyfoundit.
Whentheworriedmothersawhersoncomebacksafeandsound,shewassothankfulandsheinvitedthestudentsintoherhouse.Gratefully,sheofferedthemsomemoney,sayingitwasawaytoexpressherthanks,buttheyoungstudentsfirmlyrefuseditandleftwithoutevenacupoftea.
记叙的英语作文(2)
Thelongsummervacationonlylastedafewdays,andIstayedathomedoingnothing.SoIdecidedtocallmylittlebuddytofindasummerjob.Thehotwindblowinginthehotsummerwasjustafewminutesaway,andmybodybegantosweatconstantly.
Weknowthatthejobisnotsoeasytoimaginenow,wesawalotofthestreetbetweentheHumanResourcesInc,althoughtherearealotofrecruitmentinformation,butmanypaniesdonotrecruitsummerworkersonlyrecruitpermanentjobs,someforasummerjob,toofar,screeningforsolongnooneforusatthistime,inthefiercesun,wealreadysweating,butwestillinsist,finallypaysoff,wefinallyfoundasuitableforoursummerjobs,butthepanyissoclosetoourhome,wehavetowalkwithlongtime.
Butthispanywillalsosignthecontractthroughtheinterview,andI'mexcitedandexcitedbymylittlepanion.Wedon'thaveanyworkexperience.Thisisourfirstinterview.
Wefoundthatwhenwaitingfortheinterview,teamshavetoldusaboutmanyoftheolderstudents,theyarelikeus,finallyitwasmyturntogototheinterview,sittinginsideaperson,Ithinkheisprobablyamanager,actuallyalsodoesnothavethatwhatwewanttointerviewthemanageraskedtheplex.Afewsimplequestions,suchasyousatisfiedwiththesalary,youdonoteatthebitterofsuchproblems,interview.
Themanagerwillannouncetheresultwhenalltheinterviewsarefinished.Whenthemanagercameout,IwassonervousthatIcouldfeelmyheartbeatingfast,andIwasrelievedwhenhereadmyname.Ipickedupwithmylittlefriends,butinfact,wefoundthatmostofthecandidateswereselected.
Afteraday'straining,wewillbereadyforworkinafewdays.Infact,thetrainingisonlyabriefnoteofattention,theallocationofshifts.Whenwearehesitanttoworkinthedaytimeornight,therearealotofstudentschosethenightshift,becausetheyfeelcoolatnightthanduringtheday,whentheworkisnotsohot.Sowedecidedtotakethenightshift.
WhenIgothome,ItoldmymotherthatIwasgoingtoworkonthenightshift,andmymotherwasinabadmood.ShesaiditwashardworkonthenightshiftandaskedifIcouldholdon.Iwasfullofconfidenceandsaidtherewasnoproblem,butIgotthefirstdayofwork,althoughitwasalittlecoolerthanthedaytime,buttheworkshopwasquietandterribleatnight.
WhenIthoughtitwasaboutdaybreak,ItookalookatthetimebeforeIfoundoutitwaslessthan12inthemiddleofthenight.Oh,myGod,howlongisitWhattimedoesitbreak!Aftermidnightwecangotothedininghall,butinsidethedishweflattered,seewhatnoappetite,wehurriedlypickingafewmouthfulsofricedonotwanttoeat,itcantakeafewegggo,orwe'llbehungrywork.
Althoughthisworklooksveryeasy,istogivethemilkpacking,butonlyafewdaysmyfingersbegantoblister,andatnighttosleepduringtheday,Iwasinthedayisverydifficulttosleep,notthespiritoftheworkatnight.Istartedeatingwithmylittlebuddy,andjustaweekafterwedecidedtoquit.
Fortunately,thatcontractatleastaweektopay,wejustworkforaweek,orwedon’tnothingforthisweek,whenIgotthemoney,theheartisfeeling,themoneyisreallynoteasy,thisworkwasaexperience.AndIalsoknowhowharditisformyparentstowork.IthinkonlybyworkinghardcanIfindagoodjobinthefuturetorepaythem.
记叙的英语作文(3)
MynameisTomLee.Iamfourteen.IstudyatNo.4ICTSchool,notaverybigschool.Thereareaboutsixhundredstudentsinmyschool.Thereisonlyonebuildinginourschool,butwehaveaverybigplayground.Therearetencomputerlabsandonelibraryinthebuilding,andtherearemanycomputerbooksinthelibrary.Weoftengothereintheafternoon.
我的名字是汤姆李。我十四岁。我在第二通信学校学习,不是非常大的一个学校。在我学校大约有六百名学生。我们学校只有一栋楼,但是我们有一个非常大的操场。在楼里面有十间电脑室和一个图书馆,图书馆里也有很多计算机的书籍。我们经常在下午去那里。
Wearebusyeveryday.Wehavefourclassesinthemorning,andtwointheafternoon.
我们每天都很忙。我们上午有四节课,下午两节。
ICTismyfavoritesubjectandourICTteachersareverypatientandhelpful.IamgoodatICT,butbadinhistory.
通信是我最喜欢的学科而且我们学学校的通信老师是很有耐心也很乐于助人的。我的通信学得很好,但是历史则学得不好。
IhavecomebackfromtheUSA.FrommydiaryyouwillknowthatI’vebeentomanyplacesintheStatesandI’vetrieddifferentmeansoftransportation.Hereisalist:
我从美国回来了。从我的日记中你会知道我在美国去过很多地方,坐过不同的交通工具。这里是一个单子:
IhavetakenthesubwaytotheCentralParkandIhaveenjoyedthebeautifulviewsthere.
我坐地铁到中央公园,我喜欢那里的美景。
IhavetakenaferrytoLibertyIslandandIhavevisitedtheStatueofLiberty.
我坐渡轮到自由岛,参观过自由女神像。
IhavetakenabiketoChinatownandIhaveeatendifferentkindsofChinesefood.
我乘自行车去唐人街,我已经吃了各种各样的中国菜。
IhavefliedtoSanFranciscoandIhavewalkedontheGoldenGateBridge.
我飞到过旧金山,也走过金门大桥。
LastSaturday,myparentsandIwenttovisitmygrandma.Mygrandmawasgladaboutourcoming,soshehadalreadypreparedalotoffreshfruitsanddeliciousdishes.Wehadahappytimeatthetable.
上周六,我和父母一起去看望我奶奶。对于我们的到来,我奶奶很高兴,所以她准备了很多新鲜的水果和美味的菜肴。我们吃饭的时候过得很开心。
Intheafternoon,weclimbedDamingMountain.Thescenerytherewassobeautiful.Thenwehaddinnerinarestaurant.Afterdinner,wewenttoseeafilm.Howinterestingitwastoseeafilmintheopenair!Everyonewassocheerfulthatlaughedsohappily.
下午的时候我们去爬大明山。那里的风景太美了。之后我们在一家餐馆吃晚饭。晚饭后,我们去看了一场电影。在户外看电影是多么有趣啊!每个人都非常高兴,都笑得那么的开心。
WhatawonderfulweekendIhad.Iwouldrememberitforever.
这是一个多么美好的一个周末。我会永远记住的。
记叙的英语作文(4)
Inlife,therearemanygoodthingstopraise,tolearn.Thesegooddeedsmaketheworldabetterandmorebeautifulworld.Thegoodpeoplearoundushavealotofgoodthings,everywhere.
Inlife,weshouldnotonlybegoodatdiscoveringthesegooddeeds,butalsotobeagoodperson.Letourworldisfulloflove.
ItwasonedaymorninginMay.XiaoHanpaidavisittohisfriends.Onhiswayhefoundacrowdofonlookershadgathered,thenhejustwentandinvestigate.Hesawawomanlyingonthestreet,forbeinghurtinthetraffic
accident.Hecalledthedrivertostoprightawayandsenthertothehospital.Thenhepaidthetreatmentexpensesbyhimselfandtriedtocontactherfamily.Afterall,herhusbandgottothehospitalandhaslearntthatwhathadhappenedtohiswife.Whenhewaswillingtoexpresshisthankstohim,XiaoHanhadalreadygone.
记叙的英语作文(5)
2014年已经告别我们了,我们将迎来新的一年。2014年我学会了许多东西,也改掉了许多坏习惯。2014年我学会了什么呢?我学会了帮妈妈做家务,比如自己叠被子、自己穿衣、扫地、拖地……我的坏习惯也改掉了不少。比如以前做作业慢吞吞的,做作业马马虎虎的,现在作业效率变快了,准确度也提高了不少呢。我还学会了英语,从一开始的一窍不通到后来我慢慢地熟悉了英语。以前觉得很难,现在觉得非常容易,因为我知道了它的诀窍。
我的足球也踢得越来越好。以前总是被教练凶,现在不仅踢好了,而且越来越快了。我还在空闲时帮助妈妈带我的弟弟,让妈妈歇一歇。
我的2014年学到了许多东西,希望在新的一年里我学到的东西会更多,再见2014。