Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,inventionshaveplayedanimportantroleinthesocietyandevenchangedourworld.Asastudentinmiddleschool,IwanttobeaninventorlikeEdison.ButhowcanIletmydreamcometrue?Inmyopinion,first,wemuststudyhardtogetmoreknowledge.It'simpossibleforustoinventanythingwithoutknowledge.【高分句型】(努力学习,获得更多的知识)Second,weshouldhaveaninterestininventing.Whenweareinterestedinsomething,wecandoitwell.【高分句型】Interestisthebestteacher(感兴趣)Third,weneedtobecreative.Weshouldalwayscomeupwithnewideasandtrynewthings.(有创造力,尝试新事物)TheMostimportantthingisthatweshouldkeeponandnevergiveup【高分句型】.(坚持永不放弃)
点评这是一篇图画作文,动笔前应认真看图,了解图画内容,展开合理想象.然后根据材料内容组织语言,列出简单提纲,确定句子的时态,关键单词等问题.此类作为首先要做的就是认真阅读材料,不能跑题偏题.写作中注意一些基础的写作常识,不犯低级错误.
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