短文写作总分20分。短文写作部分要求考生写出一篇80字左右的短文。题材以记叙文为主,试卷可能给出题目或规定情景或段首句。
短文写作的要求为:能够正确表达思想,意义连贯,无重大语言错误。
写作内容涉及生活,一般常识和私人信件。
短文写作中的题目我们也可以称作命题写作。
情景写作也就是便条写作。
段首句式的写作可以称为主题句式的写作。
一、英语写作训练的要点
英语写作最重要的一点是用英语思维进行写作。
通病:习惯于先把作文翻译成汉语,然后逐字翻译成英语。
在理解和使用英语词汇时,要注意英语和汉语在意义上的不同。
中文:我得努力学习,要不我就要落后了。
错译:Ishouldstudyhard,otherwiseIwouldbebackward.
正译:Ishouldstudyhard,otherwiseIwouldlagbehind.
说明:“backward”是形容词,意为落后的,向后的或缓慢的,(表示性质);“lagbehind”是动词词组,意为落后,落在后面(表示动作或行为)。
中文:你不要学我样,你身体没有我好。(指:情况不一样。)
错译:Neverlearnfromme,sinceyouarenotsostrongasIam.
正译:Don'tfollowmyexample,sinceyouarenotsostrongasIam.
说明:“Learnfromsb.”指“向某人学习”,并不是“照我一样做”的意思。
错译:Duetothetime,Ishouldstophere.
正译:Astimeisup(or:limited),IamafraidIhavetostophere.
说明:“dueto…”是“由于……之故”而导致某种结果的意思,本句用dueto不合逻辑。
accept和receive,permit和promise,callone'sname和callonebyname.
accept收到(接受)
receive收到(不一定接受)
permit允许别人做某事
promise允许为别人做某事
callone'sname骂某人
callonebyname叫某人的姓名
所以我们在从事英语写作训练的时候:
1.要明确英语写作的意义。
2.要学习和掌握必要的写作理论。
3.要通过大量的阅读,新概念第二册比较适合。
二、如何限题和写提纲
定题:选择恰当的题目。
命题:“Teaching”
过于笼统:Teaching
仍较广泛:TeachingNumberConcept
范围缩小:TeachingNumberConcepttoChildren
范围明确:TeachingNumberConcepttoChildrenatFive
命题“ChildBehaviour”
过于笼统:ChildBehaviour
仍较广泛:HowChildrenPlayTogether
范围缩小:HowGirlsPlayTogether
范围明确:PatternsofPlayAmongPrimarySchoolGirlStudents
写提纲的好处:1.可以扩大思路
2.可以按次序排好素材
4.明确写作的中心思想
“TheAdvantagesofTravel(旅行的益处。)”
根据这一题目,在构思时可能会想到以下内容:
1.seeingstrangeanddifferentthings(看到各种奇异的东西)
2.meetingpeoplewithdifferentinterests(遇到有各种不同兴趣的人)
3.keepingusfitandhealthy(有助于身体健康)
4.enjoyingbeautifulscenery(欣赏各地美景)
5.understandinghowpeoplelive(了解人们怎样生活)
6.visitingfamouscitiesandscenicspots(浏览名城和名胜)
7.tastingdifferentfoodsandlocalflavours(品尝各地风味)
8.gettingideasoftheconditionsandcustomsofotherpeople(了解各地风土人情)
9.arousingtheferventloveforourmotherland(激起对祖国的热爱)
10.gainingknowledgeofgeographyandhistory(获得地理历史知识)
11.makingonelessnarrowminded(使人心胸开阔)
12.gainingotherknowledge(获得其他方面知识)
13.seeingplacesreadofinbooks(目睹曾在书上读到过的地方)
I.enjoyplacesofinterest
a.enjoybeautifulsceneryindifferentplaces(4)
b.seeplacesreadofinbooks(13)
c.visitfamouscitiesandscenicspots(6)
II.knowpeopleandtheircustoms
a.meetpeoplewithdifferentinterest(2)
b.seestrangeanddifferentthings(1)
c.getideasoftheconditionsandcustomsofotherpeople(8)
d.tastedifferentfoodsandlocalflavours(7)
e.understandhowpeopleliveindifferentways(5)
III.benefitusbothmentallyandphysically
a.gainknowledgeofgeographyandhistory(10)
b.gainotherknowledge(12)
c.arousetheferventloveforourmotherland(9)
d.keepushealthy(3)
e.makeonelessnarrowminded(11)
TheAdvantagesofTravel
Travelisbeneficialtousinatleastthreeways.
First,bytravelingwecanenjoythebeautifulsceneryindifferentplaces.Wewillseewithourowneyesmanyplacesreadofinbooks,andvisitsomefamouscitiesandscenicspots.
Second,wewillmeetpeoplewithdifferentinterestsandseestrangeanddifferentthingswhenwetravel.Wecangetideasoftheconditionsandcustomsofotherpeople,tastedifferentfoodsandlocalflavoursifwelike.Inthisway,wecanunderstandhowdifferentlyotherpeoplelive.
Third,travelwillnotonlyhelpustogainknowledgeofgeographyandhistoryandotherknowledge,whicharousestheferventloveforourmotherland,butwillalsohelpuskeephealthyandmakeuslessnarrow-minded.Traveldoesbenefitusbothmentallyandphysically.
Withalltheseadvantagesoftravel,itisnowonderthattravelhasnowbecomemorepopularthaneverinChina.
在写100字左右的作文,我们也强调三段论。第一句话或第一段我们强调我们要写的内容,第二段找一些例子阐述一下。第三段再次把我们强调的内容引申的说一下。
引言introduction
正文body
结束语conclusion
1.Whenyouarewaitinginfrontofatheatreoratthetrainterminals,youwillrealizehowimportantpunctualityis.Punctualityisreallyavirtue,especiallyinabusycitylikeShanghai.Perhapsifeverybodywerepunctual,therewouldbelesssufferingandsorrow.
2.Punctualityisthemainconstituentofgoodcharacter.Aperson,whoisalwaysintimeforhisappointment,showsrealconsiderationforothers.Ontheotherhand,apersonwhoisalwayslateshowshisselfishnessandthoughtlessnessandheisnotworthytobefriendwith.
constituent构成
selfishness自私
3.Somepeopleoftensaythattheycannotalwaysbepunctualsincetrafficissoheavythesedays.Ithinktrafficcongestioncannotbeanexcuseforbeinglate.Aseverybodyknowsthatwemightmeetanunexpectedcongestionontheroads,weshouldleaveabitearlierfortheappointmenttoensurethatwewouldnotbelate.
trafficcongestion交通堵塞
4.Somepeoplealwayshavealotofexcusesforcominglate.Whentheyfinallyarrive,theykeeponsayingsorrytotheirfriendsandthenexplain.Theexcuseisnotalwaystrafficcongestion,sometimestheycomplainthattheyhavemetafriendontheroadorhavehelpedablindmantocrosstheroad.Somealsoliketoblametheirwatches,theclocksathomeorintheoffice.Tosuchpeople,wecannothelpbutsaysorrythatwehavecometooearly.
keepondoingsth.一直做某事
5.Yetafterallsuchsmartfellowswillsoonfindthatgraduallytheirfriendsbecomefewerandfewer.Perhapsatthattime,theywouldrealizehowimportantpunctualityis.
6.Tobeornottobepunctualisahabit.Sowhenweareyoung,weshouldtrytobepunctualeverytimeandneverbelateforitismuchmoreeasilyacquiredinyouththanwhenweareolder.
ThepersonIshallneverforget
ThepersonIshallneverforgetisQingfengxiang.Sheisthebestfriendinmylife.
Sheoftenlistenstomewhenmymoodisbad.Moreover,sheusuallygivesmesomeadvicesifIneedhelp.Sometimes,shelendsmoneytomeifIwanttobuysomenewclothes.
IwillneverforgetherhelpeventhoughIalreadyleftWuhancity.Ithinkthatshewillbeoneofthemostimportantpersonduringmylife.Ihopethatthefriendshipofuswillkeepforever.
修改后
IwillneverforgetherhelpeventhoughIhavealreadyleftWuhancity.Ithinkthatshewillbeoneofthemostimportantpersonsinmylife.Ihopethatthefriendshipofuswillkeepforever.
SheoftenlistenstomewhenI'minabadmood.Moreover,sheusuallygivesmesomeadvicesifIneedhelp.Sometimes,shelendsmoneytomeifIwanttobuysomenewclothes.
WhyWeLearnEnglish
Englishisaninternationallanguagenow.EveryoneneedstoknowEnglish.
Whenwewillvisitagreatnumberofdifferentplacesintheword,weneedtotalkaboutlocalpersonwithEnglish.Weareinterestinginbooks,otherwisenowadaysmanyofthevaluablebooksarewritteninEnglishortranslatedintoEnglish.Weinordertogothroughones,soweshouldhaveagoodcommandofEnglish.
WeshouldtryourbesttolearntheEnglishlanguagewell.
Whenwevisitagreatnumberofdifferentplacesintheworld,weneedtotalkaboutalocalpersoninEnglish.NowadaysmanyofthevaluablebooksarewritteninEnglishortranslatedintoEnglish,soifweareinterestedinbooks,weshouldhaveagoodcommandofEnglish.
WeshouldtryourbesttolearnEnglishwell.
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