1、大纲式命题作文,Directions:Inthissection,youareaskedtowriteacompositledshouldpeoplewncarsornot?yorrcomportionshouldbebesdontheutlinegivenbelow.yorcomportionshouldbeatleast120words.outline:1赞成购买个人汽车。2、也有人持相反的意见。3、你的意见。shouldpeopleleonwncarsornot?shouldpeopleleonwncarsornot?nowhavingacarismorealndmor
2、epopular,sommanyfamilyswanttobyacar.theythinkitsuseful.somyoungsthinkitscoolandmanypeoplethinkitsconventwhentheyhaveaprivatecar.tbus/sotheycangotoworkflowontime.itsavethetime.andtheyalsocandriverthecargowhevetheywantto.afamilycanhaveatraveltothter.itscomfovitionprovityoftheirlifewithar.especise
3、lityhincreateringofprivatecarcanprotetheeconomic.itcontanddeteddeveourcountrysdevelo14分美丽:切主题,表达思想清晰,文字连贯,一贯性好,基本上语言无误。11清晰:主题清晰,表现思想清晰,文字一贯,但有一点语言错误。8点马、马、虎、虎、虎、虎、虎、虎、虎、虎、虎、虎、虎、虎、虎、虎、虎、虎、虎、虎、虎、虎、虎、虎、虎、虎、虎、虎、虎、虎、虎、虎、虎、虎、虎、虎、虎、虎、虎、虎、虎、虎、虎、虎、5模糊:基本问题、表现思想不清楚、一贯性差、严重的语法错误很多。两点一点混乱:情节不清楚、想法混乱、语言零散
4、,或者大部分句子都有错误,而且很多都是严重的错误。Praise,manpportittiffomepoplethinkthatcritismchangeonesoflife.however,manypeopleleaguethatprtingeismoreimportant.inmyopinionpraisismorprooftitablethanchritism.prisisislikereshair,withoutit,orurifillisbleconnundtringprisisonstothegiveeraslot,but.thereceivercanlearnmuch.
5、therearemanypeoplewhosuceedatlastwithaprais发生了takemyselfforexample.thougithi的irememeritclearly.itwassaspotemetingandinatedtenit.atfirst,iwasveryconfidentdthoughtiwasoIhadnotraining.Thetruthwas,duringtherace,manystudentsleftmebehind.theniwanttogiveupwasfrusted.Fortunaely,mypetechercameandspatted
7、theproblemofhasarousedpeoplesconcrn.hasbeenplayinganincreatingryimprontrolingtronourdailylife.ithasbortheatoffenitshlems.aswell.nowadayshasbecomeaproblemwehavetoface.itiscommonlybelievedthat/itisacommonbeliefthatmanypeopleinsistthatwithementofsciencesandtechnologymorealndmorepeoplebelieethatalo
8、toffpeopleseemtocinktakinillsefactorsintocontiderationwefinfindlycommetethattingintoaccountalhesefactors,wemayreandlycommeteteconnclusterthence/thereforewedbetterarriverattheconclusionthantthereisnodoublehat(joB-hopping)hasitsdrawbacksaswellasmerits.alliinall,wecannotlivewithoutbutatthesam
9、etimewemusttrytoindnewwaystocopewitheproblemsthatwouldarise.写作类型,原因类(现象解释型)观点类对立观点(问题解决型)问题类(问题解决型)观点类事物的性质和利害类的论证类、观点论证类、各种类型的创作方法、现象解释型:基本的方法是记述现象分析原因预测现象,还是促进(限制)这一现象的进一步发展。比较选择型:基本的方法是陈述某个观点或态度,表示该观点或态度正确的理由第二(相对或相反)观点或态度,说明该观点或态度正确的理由的个人表示支持或反对上述观点或态度,并说明原因。问题解决型:基本的方法是提出问题分析问题来解决问题。观点论证型:
10、基本的方法是,通过分析主题得出结论的例子来得出结论(证明观点的正确性)。三段式作文的结构表明了、对立双方的观点,表明个人的态度和理由,总结自己的立场,联系现实,展望未来。的双曲正切值。我呼吁行动。以事实论证、实例论证、因果论证、背面论证等方式论证,总结自己的立场,结合现实,展望未来。的双曲正切值。表示个人见解的inmyopinionfrommypointofviewasfarasiamconcrned,Asforme,icanotenternityleagewheideathatpersonally,iamstandingonthesideoffinallytospeakfra
11、nkly,thereisalsoamoreacticalreasonwhyisincerlybelieethat,论证方法、论点:反对论证、实例论证、事实论证、因果论证、论证方法实例论证:forexample、forinstancetoillustrate,asinilustraticationcinfornbetitillustrationofthispointh.itconnanmistitsflbestititinnestertociteallthesexamplesofthissportigoodcaseinpointis.画作事实论:noonecandenythefac
15、eswholesociety.whyarethermanyfakecomodities?“第一版,我的mind,isthatsomepoderreargemoferaninglargesumofmoneyeasilyandquickly.furthermorethegranicallocatiomposphereissomethunhealthy-maancetomneyinstedofhonesty.lastbutnotleastsomegovernmentofficialsarenotdoingtheirjobs.HarmfulnessofFakeCommodities,t
16、heharmmulnessoffakecommoditiesshasbecomemrethanobviousatthemoment.firstofall,theconsumersarethededirectvictimshesecondprlace,theauthenticproducercersalsosuffearea.thirdlyfakecommoditiesmayevenbedaneroussometimes、suchasfakefoodandmedici
17、ne,whichareathattopeleshealth.consequentlyitishightimethatwemadegeatefortstoputandtofakecommodities.见解类对立的观点、myvisonoppotunity12我的意见3的结论是,MyViewonOpportunity,wheinnitcomestooppotunity,peoplelesopinionsdiffer.somepolethinkthattherearefewopportunitiesintheworldwhilethersarguethanteverybodywillhavemekindofopprasfara