高考读后续写|亲情类阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Jennywastheonlychildinherhome.Shehadaquarrelwithhermotherthatafternoonandsheranoutofthehouseangrily.Shecouldn'thelpweepingwhenshethoughtofthescolding(责骂)
fromhermother.Havingwanderedinthestreetforhours,shefeltalittlehungryandwishedforsomethingtoeat.Shestoodbesideastandforawhile,
watchingthemiddleagedsellerbusydoinghisbusiness.However,withnomoneyinhand,shesighed
(叹气)
andhadtoleave.Thesellerbehindthestand(摊位)
noticedtheyounggirlandasked,"Hey,girl,youwanttohavethenoodles""Oh,yes...butIdon'thavemoneyonme,"shereplied.“That'snothing.I'lltreatyoutoday,"saidtheman."
ein."Thesellerbroughtherabowlofnoodles,whosesmellwassoattractive.Asshewaseating,
Jennycriedsilently.“Whatisit"
askedthemankindly.“Nothing,actuallyIwasjusttouchedbyyourkindness!"
saidJenny."
Evenastrangeronthestreetwillgivemeabowlofnoodles,whilemymotherdrovemeoutofthehouse.
Sheshowednocareforme.Sheissomerciless(残忍的)
paredtoastranger!"Hearingthewords,thesellersmiled,"Girl,
doyoureallythinksoIonlygaveyouabowlofnoodlesandyouthankedmealot.Butitisyourmotherwhohasraisedyousinceyouwereababy.CanyounumberthetimesshecookedforyouHaveyouexpressedyourgratitude(感激)toher"Jennysatthere,speechlessandnumbwithshock;sherememberedMother'sfamiliarfaceandweathered(饱经风霜的)
hands."
通过问题帮助学生搭建第一段写作思路。例如:
(1)WhatwouldJennydonext
(2)WhydidJennytakeadeepbreath
(3)WhatdidJennythinkinhermind
问题(1)(2)主要根据第一段提示句进行推断,问题(3)根据第二段提示句推导Jenny的思绪,三个问题为学生搭建续写第一段结构框架即内容要点——knockedatoropenedthedoor/whatshesaw/whatshethought。范文一Nearingthedoorway,Jennytookadeepbreath.
Notknowingwhat
wouldhappennext,Jenny,gatheringhercourage,pushedthedoor
open,
onlytofindtherewasnobodyhome.Anxietybegantocreepuponher."WhereismyMomIsshestillstillangrywithme",Jennycouldn'thelp
thinkingaboutallthese.Havingwanderedoutsideforawholeday,Jenny
feltabittired.Sittingonthesofa,shebegantoshedtearsofregret,lostin
deepthought.Agentletouchonherhaircalledhermindback.
Raisingherhead,Jenny
foundhermotherstandingbehindher."Mom,Iamsorry.Ishouldn'thave
beensorudetoyou.Iknowfullywellallthatyoudidwasforme."Jenny
said,withtearsalreadyfallingdownhercheeks."It'sfinethatyouareback!I
havebeenlookingforyoueverywhere."mothersaid.Deeplymoved,Jenny
threwherselfathermotherandtheyhuggedtightly.Itwasnotuntilthat
momentthatJennyrealizedthatwhateverhappened,hermotherwould
alwaysbethereforher!范文二Nearingthedoorway,Jennytookadeepbreath.Whenshepushedthedooropenandenteredthehouse,shefoundhermotherwasnotin.Tiredandsad,shesankdownontothesofa.“Wherecouldmymotherbe”shewondered.“Wasshestillangrywithme”Again,thesceneofthequarrelappearedinhermind.Sherememberedherrudenesstohermother.Realizingthatallthescoldingfromhermotherwasduetothefactthathermotherreallycaredalotabouther,sheratherfeltashamed,andtearsbegantorolldownhercheeks.Agentletouchonherhaircalledhermindback.
sheraisedherheadandsawthefamiliarfaceofhermother.“Hereyoue!I'vebeenlookingforyou.”shesaid,tiredandrelieved.Jennycouldn'thelpthrowingherselfintohermother'sarms.“Mum,I'msosorryandthankyouforallyouhavedoneforme.”Sheexpressedhersincereapologyandgreatgratitude.Hearingthis,hermothersmiled,pattingherbackgently.
范文三Approachingthedoorway,Jennytookadeepbreath.
Withpalmssweatingandthroattightening,sheopenedthedooratlast.“Mom,”shesaidweakly.However,nobodyanswered.Shecouldn’tfindhermotheranywhereathome.Whathermotherdidforhersprangupinhermind,likecookingforher,washingherclothesandsoon.Heartbeatingpainfullyandbangingagainstherribs,shewasstruckdeadwithregretduetotakingMother’sloveforgrantedandforgettingtoconveytimelygratitude.Theideathatit’snevertoolatetomakeasincereapologyhither.Agentletouchonherhaircalledhermindback.
Raisingherheadup,Jennycaughtsightofafamiliarface.Itwasherbelovedmotherthatlookeddirectlyintohereyeswitharadiantsmile.Urgedbytheforcetorightthewrong,shespokeupwithafirmtone,“Mom,I’mdeeplysorryformyrudeness.Itwon’thappenagain!Ipromise!Wouldyouforgiveme”Shecouldfeeltearswellingupinhereyes.“Youarealwaysmylittlegirl!”MomeyedJennytenderly.Asthesettingsuncastagoldenglowonbothoftheirfaces,theyembracedeachothertightly.Andthen,handinhand,theysteppedintothehouse.范文四Nearingthedoorway,Jennytookadeepbreath.Notknowingwhatwouldhappennext,Jenny,gatheringhercourage,pushedthedooropen,onlytofindtherewasnobodyhome.Anxietybegantocreepuponher"WhereismyMomIsshestillstillangrywithme",Jennycouldn'thelpthinkingaboutallthese.