3.谈谈你的观点和看法。(最好写成4段)
实例二99年6月真题
ReadingSelectivelyorExtensively
Outline:1.有人认为读书要有选择2.有人认为应当博览群书3.我的想法
Score:8分
Somepeoplethinkreadingshallbechosen.Becausesomebooksaregoodtohumanbeingsandsomebooksareharmfultopeople.
Somepeoplethinkthatmenshouldreadbookswidely.Becausewidereadingcanhelpmangetmuchknowledge.Andmancanuseittochangetheworld.
Itismypointthatreadingmustbeselectively.Becausereadingisimportanttoman.Somebookscanhelpmanbutsomebookscanleadsomepeopletocrime.ItcanbeseeninthenewspapersandwatchedonTV.Wecanmakefulluseofsomegoodbooksandgainmoreusefulknowledge.Itcanmakeourlifemorebeautiful.Wemustgiveupthoseunhelpfulbooks.Theyarenotgoodtous.Readingthemiswastingtimeandmoney.Soreadingselectivelyisanimportantpartinreading.
失分原因：结构失调，表述方式单一
(启)ParagraphⅠ：
(2)简明扼要地提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同看法。
Score:14分
HowshouldwereadShouldwereadselectivelyorextensivelyEveryonehashisownview.(启)
注：第一句提出问题，第二句提出两种见解
(承)ParagraphⅡ：
(1)提出一种观点或优点；
(2)本段的支持性分论点；
(3)本段总结(可以省略)。
Somepeoplethinkweshouldreadselectively.Theyarguethatwiththedevelopmentofmodernscienceandtechnology,moreandmorebooksarepublished.Itisimpossibleforustoreadallthebooks.What'smore,therearemanybadbooksthatarepoisonoustoourmind,andweshouldn'treadthem.Sincewecan'treadallthebooksandweshouldn'treadbadbooks,wemustreadselectively.(承)
注：1.本段总分总结构
2.theyarguethat=theythinkthat
3.withthedevelopmentof……随着……的发展
4.what'smore递进关系，moreover
5.bad=pornographic色情的&violent暴力的
(转)ParagraphⅢ：
(1)承上启下的过渡句；
(2)提出另一种观点或缺点；
(3)本段的支持性分论点；
(4)本段总(可以省略)。
Butothersmaynotagree,theyemphasizethattoday'ssocietyisnotwhatitwas.Ifonemanhasmanykindsofknowledge,hewillhavemorechancestosucceed.Ifamanknowsmuchinonefieldbutknowsnothinginotherfields,hemaybeuseless.Sincewemusthavemanykindsofknowledge,wemustreadextensively.(转)
注：1.But转折词(信号词)
2.theyemphasizethat=theythinkthat
3.today'ssocietyisnotwhatitwas现代社会今非昔比
4.许多知识awiderangeofknowledge/alargescopeofknowledge/muchknowledge；获取知识acquire/getknowledge
5.knowsnothing→little；hemaybeuseless→hemaynotbeofgreatusetothesociety后者比前者更委婉，尽量不要绝对化
(合)ParagraphⅣ：(1)平衡两种看法；(2)给出自己的观点。
Who'srightIthinkbothofthemhavesomethingright.ButIthinkweshouldreadextensivelyfirst.Weshouldreadbooksinmanyfields,andreadselectivelyinonefield.(合)
Score:11分
Whenitcomestoreading,somepeoplethinkthatreadingselectivelyisagoodway,butsomeotherpeopledonotagreewiththem,theythinkthatreadingextensivelyisbetter.
注：结构非常好，可以套用。
Thosepeople,whothinkthatreadingselectivelyisbetter,believethatgoodbooksareasmanyasbadbooks.Thosegoodbookscangiveuspleasureandknowledge,whilethosebadbookscanonlyleadustothewrongway.So,theysuggestthatweshouldonlychoosethegoodbookstoreadandnevertouchthebadbooks.
注：1."people,who……,"应去掉逗号，改为限定性定语从句。
2.asmanyasbadbooks改为asmanyasbadones
3.leadustothewrongway改为leadsb.astray
4.theysuggestthat=theythinkthat
5.touch碰(闪光点词汇)
But,theotherpeople,whoholdthatreadingextensivelyisbetter,thinkthatonekindofbookscanonlygiveusoneaspectofknowledge.Eventhebestbookonlycontainsonefieldofinformation.So,theycaneasilycometotheconclusionthat"toknowmore,toreadmore".Sotheybelievethatreadingextensivelyisbetter.
注：1.hold"认为"同样表示"think"的词还有argue,emphasize,believe,suggest,claim,insist,maintain,agree,hold
2.thebestbook在西方国家是"圣经"的意思
3.toknowmore,toreadmore错误，中式英语
Tomypoint,weshouldchoosegoodbookstoreadandreadgoodbooksasmanyaspossible.Bythisway,wecanincreasethequalityandquantityofreading.
范文IsTelevisionaBlessingoraCurse
Now,itisgenerallyacceptedthattelevisionplaysanimportantpartinpeople'slives.But,thereisanongoingheateddiscussionastowhethertelevisionisablessingoracurse.
注：itisgenerallyacceptedthat人们通常认为
Asisoftenpointedoutbysomepeople,televisionkeepsonebetterinformedaboutcurrentevents,allowsonetofollowthelatestdevelopmentsinpoliticsandscience,andoffersanendlessseriesofprogramswhicharebothinstructiveandstimulating.
注：1.Asisoftenpointedoutbysomepeople=Somepeoplethinkthat
2."使……"不用make，而用keep,allow,offer
However,otherpeopleinsistthattelevisionisacurseratherthanablessing.Theyarguethatithasbroughtaboutmanyseriousproblems.Themajoroneisitseffectsonyoungpeople.Theyarenowsousedtogettingtheirinformation,educationandentertainmentfromtelevisionthattheirliteracyaswellasphysicalabilityhasbeengreatlyweakened.
Insummary,televisionhasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.Whatevereffectsithas,onethingiscertain,televisioninitselfisneithergoodnorbad.Itistheusethatdeterminesitsvaluetosociety.
范文Traveling
Peoplewholiketravelinghavetheirreasons.Theymaintainthattravelingcanhelpthemexpandtheirscopeofknowledge,especiallygeographicalandhistoricallearning.Theygoontopointoutthattouringwillprovidemorechanceforthemtoenjoyfoodandtryonclothesthattheyotherwisecannotpossiblyhave.
注：geographicalandhistorical押尾韵，如：押头韵clean&clear
Thosewhodisliketravelinghavetheirreasons.Theywouldarguethattravelingmeansaconsiderableamountofmoneyandenergy.Forexample,trafficandaccommodationrequiremoneyandwalkingwhileseeingsightsoftentiresyou.
Inpractice,travelingdoesmoregoodthanharm.Ifyourfinanceandhealthpermit,youmightaswelldosometravelingfromtimetotime.Itwillatleastenableyoutogetfamiliarwithpeopleandthingsthatyouwillprobablygrowtolikeandlove.
注：1.inpractice=I
2.doesmoregoodthanharm好处比坏处多，其他表达方法：besuperiorto/inferiorto比如：Theadvantagesaresuperiortothedisadvantages.