3.收尾段落的思考针对第二段分析的原因提出合理建议,基本思路可遵循以下两点:政府指定法律法规扭转(推进)现有局面;个人树立某种意识主动参与解决问题。最后展望一下人类解决问题后的美好明天,一篇议论文的格局已了然于胸。
(二)图画作文
2.透过表象看本质,精确图片象征意义图画作文关键在于透过表面看实质,精确地点出图画的象征寓意,构思联想不到位会导致跑题或无话可说的尴尬局面。如前题的例子,要毫不犹豫地把图画和所定题目挂钩联想,并要以小见大把握象征意义,美国女孩代表着西方文化或西方人,传统中国少数民族服装则是个象征符号,代指典型的传统中国文化。女孩面带微笑正好传达出西方人接受或热爱中国文化、世界经济文化融合和中国文化走向世界的深刻意义。
1.写出提纲规范内容有把握的同学可以立即动笔创作,把已定的思路充分表达出来。但思路还是不清楚、害怕跑题或无话可说的同学应把提纲丰富起来,如用汉语简单写出每段的三个方面,用简洁的词或符号代替即可,提纲具体化可以让自己沿着一个严谨的框架前行,避免天马行空、意识流主宰思维的危险。
2.控制段落数字,尽量言简意赅200词的作文不等于长篇大论,又有明确的提纲控制,考生必须做到言简意赅。达到字数要求不难,要看自己有限的语言是否言之有物,表达切题且有力度。对规模作出合理控制只需有以下的意识:3段式作文开篇段落引出话题,评价现状或描述图画图表,尽量用3-4句完成任务,其中设置一个长句,使得第一段达到50—60个单词。
中间拓展段是论述主题并展现实力的黄金段落,要阐明图画图表寓意并且深刻分析原因背景,点出几个方面,结构有层次感,语言有闪光点和深度,写出7-8句比较合理,总字数控制到80-100字。
结论段不止下结论,还要提出2-3点解决问题的建议。并且设置一个漂亮的结束句,使用排比、强调、倒装、虚拟句型体现句式变化,写出5-6句不算太多,总字数在70-80字左右。
4.分层次表达的启承转合表达英语议论文写作讲究拓展阐述部分有段首句和支持段首句的若干论据。分层次表达又要避免数字排列的机械感,讲究启承转合的多样化表达,因此2、3两段就有可以依据的优秀表达模型。
十大考研英语大作文模板
1.图画作文
Itseemstomethatthecartoonistissendingamessageabout_______(图画主题),whichis______________(进一步的说明)。Heseemstobesayingthat_______________(给出细节)。Inmyopinion,___________(个人阐述)。
Thissimplepictureisawakeupcallfor______(所涉群体,如thewholeofthehumanrace)。Therefore,itisimperativeforustotakedrasticmeasurestoputanendto_____________(问题所在)。Onetheonehand,wemust_________________(建议一)。Itisclearthatthedraweroftheillustrationisurgingusto_________(进一步说明)。Ontheotherhand,________________(建议二)Onlyinthiswaycanwe___________(展望前景)。
2.图表作文
Thechartgivesusanoverallpictureofthe____________(图表主题)。Thefirstthingwenoticeisthat_______________(图表最大特点)。Thismeansthatas__________,_________________(进一步说明)。
Judgingfromthesefigures,wecandrawtheconclusionthat___________(结论)。Thereasonforthis,asfarasIamconcernedisthat_____________(给出原因)。/ItishightimethatweVed(发出倡议)
3.利弊型作文
Recentlytheissueofwhetherornot______(讨论话题)hasbeeninthelimelightandhasarousedwideconcerninthepublic.Therearetwomajorargumentsthatcanbemadefor_________.Foronething,__________canbring____to_____________(优点一)。Foranother,itiswidelyholdthatpeopleusually____when________________________________(优点二)。
Butwemustnotlosesightofthefactthattherearealsodrawbacksto__________,amongwhichare____________(列举缺点)。Forinstance,itcanbe__________to_____________(举例说明)。Inaddition,manypeoplefindit________(形容词)to_______________(第二个缺点)
Whenaskedto__________,Itendto____________.ThisisbecauseI_______________(原因一)。Furthermore,_______________________(原因二)。Finally,______________(原因三)。
4.展望未来型
Theeffects___________hasproducedon____________canbeboileddowntotwomajorones.
First,__________________(影响一)。Moreimportantly,________________(影响二)。Hence,Ibelievethatwewillseea____________(提出展望)/Nevertheless,Idonotthinkwewillseea______(或反面展望)
Therearenumerousreasonswhy____,andIwouldliketoexploreafewofthemostimportantoneshere.Thefirstisthatthemore(比较级)_____,themore(比较级)。Inaddition,weallaGREethat________________________(第二个原因)
5.告示
Youshouldwriteabout100words.Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter.UseDepartmentofChineseLanguageandLiteratureattheendoftheannouncement.
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6.职业道德
thecartoonsvividlydepictpeopleinexpandingnumbersareengagedinopenandrampantcheatinginbusiness.Inthefirstdrawing,aboyhasnocouragetohavedinnerinfrontofdeliciousfoodsinthattheremayexistpesticidepollutionorpoisonouselementsinthefoods.Inthesecondpicture,theadministrativeoffice,salesmen,breedingfamiliesandforageshopsarelaughingatthehangingofapoisonousduck.
Professionaldishonestyhasaverydamagingeffect.Inthefirstplace,sincecheatinginbusinessrevealsthemoraldeficienciesaswellasthehumanityweaknessofthosebusinessmenwhoengageinit,thedishonestpracticewillultimatelyexertsaperverseinfluenceonthewholesociety.Inthesecondplace,itnotonlyputshonestbusinessmenatacompetitivedisadvantage,encouragingthosewhodidnotcheattoadoptsimilarpracticeslater,butunderminestheveryfoundationofprofessionalethicsinbusiness.
Itisoftenpainfultoimposesanctionsinaspecificcase.Butitisworthwhile.Foronething,toeliminateprofessionaldishonestythoroughly,seriousformsofpunishmentforawillfuloffense—asuspensionoftheoffenderfrombusiness—shouldbeapplied.Foranother,sincetheincentivestoengageincheatinginbusinessaremainlyduetoalackofadequateprecautions,drasticactionsshouldbetakentopreventoneformofcheatingoranother.
7.投诉信
Directions:Youliveinaroomincollegewhichyousharewithanotherstudent.Youfinditverydifficulttoworktherebecauseyourroommatealwayshasfriendsvisitingandhaspartiesintheroom.
WritealettertotheAccommodationOfficeratthecollegeandaskforanewroomnextterm.Youwouldpreferasingleroom.Explainyourreasons.
DearSirorMadam,
Iamwritingtoexpress/airdissatisfaction/disappointment/concernregardingaccommodation.Iwouldprefertomoveintoasingleroomnextsemester,asIfindthepresentsharingarrangementinconvenient.
Imustexplainthatthereasonformydissatisfactionismyroommate‘sinconsideratebehavior.Foronething,hisfriendsareconstantlyvisitinghim;foranother,heregularlyholdsnoisyparties.
Tosolvethisproblem/surmountthisdifficulty/improvethissituation/crackthishardnut,Ihopetodrawtheattentionoftheauthoritiesconcerned.IamsureyouwillaGREethattheonlysolutionformeistomoveintoaroomofmyown.Therefore,Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldfindasingleroomforme,preferablynotinthesamebuildingbutasneartothecollegecampusaspossible.
Yourssincerely,
LiMing
8.网络问题
Inrecentyears,peoplearedevelopinganinseparablerelationshipwithInternet.Asisvividlydepictedinthepicture,itisconvenientforustoclickthemousewhensurfingonline,eithertoentertainourselvesortomeetthework‘sneeds.Actuallyon-linevisitinghasbecomearoutineactivityinoureverydaylife.However,itseemsratherironictouseachaininsteadofnormalwiretoconnectwiththemouseinthispicture.TheexaggerativeandimpressiveportrayalhassubtlyrevealedthedualityoftherelationshipbetweenmanandInternet.
Discussiononthedualityhasbecomeverypopularinnewspapersorinpeople‘schats.Ontheonehand,noonedeniesthatInternetiscurrentlyoneofthemostusefulmediainourdailylife.Peoplefromallwalksoflifearebenefitingconsiderablyfromitspowerfulfunctionofinformationcommunication.Butontheotherhand,aGREatmanypeopleadmitthattheyaretoomuchaddictedtoInternettomaintainaregularandwholesomelifestyle.Cyber-livingresemblestheexperienceoflookingconstantlyintoakaleidoscopewhichdisplaysbothcoloredpatternsandillusions.Suchawasteoftimeinevitablyleadstotheirfailureintheirlifeandwork.
Accordingly,itisnecessaryforustouseInternetinareasonablewayandrestrainfromoverindulgence.Foronething,collegestudentsinexpandingnumbersgetonlineeverydaytolearnthenews,tostudyEnglishbyregisteringforwebcourses,toexchangeinformationthroughe-mailswiththeirnetfriendsandtodownloadtheirfavoritemusic,FLASH,filmandpictures.Beingveteranon-lineshoppers,theyfrequentlypurchasebooks,CDsatmuchlowerprices.Foranother,onceindulgedinthefictitiousworld,peoplecanbarelyconcentrateonreallife.Consequently,manystudentsjustchatonlineorplaycomputergamesimmoderatelyeveryday,skippingmanyessentialclasses.Afterall,Internetisinventedtoenrichourlife,toconnectyouandme,andtoimprovetheefficiencyofourworkratherthanshackleuswithachain.
9.环境问题
thepicturessymbolicallyillustratepollutionisbecomingincreasinglyseriousaroundtheglobe.Inthefirstcartoon,amanisscorchingtheearthonachimney.Inthesecondone,afamousancientChinesepoet,WangBoisastonishedbytheheavysmokepouredbychimneysintotheairanddirtyriverpollutedbyafactory.Weareinformedthat“theautumnriveristhesamecolorwiththesky”。
thedrawerissendingamessageaboutthesignificanceoftheneedforeveryonetofightagainstthedangerofenvironmentalpollution.Thereisnodenyingthattheindustryisindicationsofcivilization,proGREssanddevelopment.Unfortunately,asindustrydevelops,sowillthenumberoffactories,andtheamountofindustrypollutants.Wearesodevelopment-orientedthatwealmostcansacrificeourblueskyandpurewaterinordertoobtainalittlematerialgain.
Asaconsequence,itisimperativeforustotakedrasticactions.Ontheonehand,thefactoriesshouldbeequippedwithdeviceswhichcandisposeofwastegasandwatersoastopreventthemfrompollutingourplanet.Ontheotherhand,thereshouldbeanincreasinglyloudvoicefromthepublicforfirmactionsagainstpoisonousgassentoffandunhealthywaterpollutedbyfactories.
10.提纲式议论文
Directions:
A.Title:AirTravel
B.Timelimit:40minutes
C.Wordlimit:about200words
D.YouressayshouldbewrittenclearlyonANSWERSHEET2.
E.Youressayshouldbebasedontheinformationgivenbelow.
现在许多人愿意乘飞机旅行。随着我国民航事业的迅速发展,全国各大城市兴建了许多现代化的机场。乘飞机旅行有许多长处(方便、快捷、省时、舒适等);但是,空中旅行也有许多不足之处(机票价格贵,有的旅客不适应空中旅行,常常感到身体不适,甚至有人还担心发生空难)。请你简单阐述上述两个方面。最后请你说明你的看法。
(Compositionforreferenceonly)
Manypeopleprefertotravelbyair.Thisisbecauseairtravelhassomeadvantages.Inthefirstplace,airplane,themiraclecreatedbyman,isthefastestmeansoftransport.Ittakestheleasttimeforonetotravelbyairfromoneplacetoanother.Secondly,travelingbyairisconvenientandcomfortable.Friendlyairhostessesareaffectionateandconsiderate.Theylookafterpassengersallthewaytotheirdestinations.Moreover,onlongdistanceflightstherearefilmsandmusicforpeopletoentertainthemselves.
Asapopularsayinggoes,“Everythinghastwosides.”Thesameistrueofairtravel.Ithassomedisadvantages,too.Foronething,airtravelcostsaGREatdeal.TheaverageChinesearenotrichenoughtoaffordexpensiveairfares.Sotheyprefertotaketrains,whichsavealotofmoney.Foranother,althoughpassengersareassuredoftheirsafety,theyarestillworriedaboutitduringthejourneybecauseflyingalwaysinvolvesmoreorlessrisk.
AsfarIamconcerned,theadvantagementionedaboveexceedthedisadvantages.IfIweregivenchoicebetweentravelingbytrain,Iwouldcertainlyprefertheformer.Forme,timeismoneyanditisthemostimportantthingIhavetotakeintoconsiderationwhateverIdo.(216words)
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