Youhaveaskedmeforsomeadviceonhowtoimprove….Iwilltrytogivesomeusefulsuggestions.
IamwritingtoyoutopresentwhatIthinkonthefurtherimprovementof…soasto…
Iwouldliketomakearecommendationthat…
Iamwritingtoadviseyouof…
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MayIsuggestthat…
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Thankyouforyourattention.
Pleasetakegoodconsiderationofmyadvice.Thanks.
Itrustyouwilltakemysuggestionintoaccount.
Ihopethatmysuggestionsarehelpfulforyourdecision-makinganyway.
Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestions/proposals/recommendations(建议)helpful/practical/useful(有帮助的，实用的).
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DearJohn,
Youaskedforadviceconcerningwhetheryoushouldstudyhistoryorcomputerscienceatuniversity.Iwilltrymakingsomesuggestions.
Ofcourse,Iwouldrecommendthatyoukeepupyourreadingofhistoryinyoursparetime.
Yourssincerely,
LiMing
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亲爱的约翰：
你问我关于该学历史还是计算机的看法，我将尽力给你一些有用的建议。
首先，你必须牢记的是，你在大学所受的训练是为了将来的职业做准备的。毫无疑问，计算机科学将比历史提供更广泛的工作机会。我们都处在高科技的时代，在不久的将来，每个人为了谋生还需要具备计算机技能。