2.要准确使用语法和词汇;使用一定的句型、词汇,清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思;
3.词数:100个左右。开头已给出,不计词数。
DearMr.Wang,
We’resopleasedthatyouarewillingtoshareourviews.
Inthecourseofthegeneralrevision,whatweneedissolidfoundation.
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范文(Onepossibleversion)
Inthecourseofthegeneralrevision,whatweneedissolidfoundation.Asyouknow,wedidn’tlearnwellenoughinthefirsttwoyears,sopleaseslowdownandmakesurewehavereallymasteredsomething.Besides,weneedalittlemoretimetothinkforourselves.Asforthoseimportantpointswhichalsomakeusconfused,wouldyoupleasegiveusmorepracticeincaseweforgetMeanwhile,weneedyourinstruction,forexample,inhowtowriteinnaturalEnglish.Istillhaveanotherrequest:assignuslesshomeworkinorderthatwecandoitmoreefficiently.
Bytheway,weoftenfeelfrustrated,whichhasaverybadeffectonourstudy.Wewouldappreciateitifyouwouldgiveussomeencouragementfromtimetotime.
英语作文建议(2)
英语作文建议(3)
IamLiMingofSeniorThree,GuangmingMiddleSchool.Iamwritingtotellyouaboutsomesymptomsofanxietyamongusstudentsbeforeexams.
Mostofusfeelnervouswheneverwe’retakinganimportantexam.Somewillfeeldizzyortired,somewillsufferfromlackofsleep,andsomewilllosetheirappetite.Infact,allthesesymptomshaveterribleeffectsonourexamsandwearealleagertogetridofthem.
Firstofall,inmyopinion,it’simportantforustohaveafightattitudetowardsexams.Theyareonlyameansofcheckinghowwearegettingalongwithourstudies,sothereisnoneedtoworrytoomuchabouttheresults.Studyhardeverydayandmakecarefulplansforeveryexam.Inthiswaywecanavoidsufferingfromthepressureofexams.
Besides,enoughsleepcanmakeusenergeticandenableustoperformwellinanexam.Therefore,duringtheperiodofexams,weshouldnotstayuptoolate.Wecanalsotryawarmbathoracupofwarmmilkbeforegoingtobed.Theymighthelpustohaveasoundsleep.
(We’dbettergooutforawalkordosomeoutdoorexercisesbeforeandduringanexamsothatwecankeepourselvesrelaxedandthenconcentrateourselvesonexams.)
英语作文建议(4)
优点:1.话题广泛;
2.图片丰富;
3.有助于提高学习兴趣。
建议:适当降低词汇难度。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数。
满分作文
DearEditor,
Asastudentreader,IamwritingtotalkabouttheEnglishtextbookspublishedbyyourhouse.
Inmyeyes,thesebookshavealotofadvantages.Tobeginwith,therearesuchawidevarietyoftopicsinthebooksthattheycansatisfystudents’curiositybetter.Inaddition,thepicturesinthetextbooksareveryinterestingandattractive.Notonlycantheydrawstudents’attention,buttheycanalsoarouseourinterestinlearningEnglish.Inshort,wehavebenefitedalotfromthesebooks.
However,inmyopinion,therearestillsomeshortcomingsinthetextbooks.Wefindsomewordsareabitdifficulttoremember.Therefore,Isuggestthatyoucanmakethemeasiertounderstand.
Bestregards,
LiHua
亲爱的编辑。
作为学生的读者,我写了一个关于你家出版的英语教材的作文。
在我的眼里,这些书有很多优点。首先,他们可以更好地满足学生的好奇心,有这样一个各种各样的主题的书籍。此外,在教科书中的图片是非常有趣和有吸引力的。他们不仅能吸引学生的注意力,而且能激发我们学习英语的兴趣。总之,我们从这些书中受益匪浅。
然而,在我看来,教科书中仍有一些不足之处。我们发现有些话是有点难以记住。因此,我建议你可以让他们更容易理解。
最好的问候。
李华
英语作文建议(5)
Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning_____(对象).Inthefirstplace,Iwouldliketosaythankyouforthehelpandeverythingelseyouhavebeenofferingtous.Meanwhile,Ialsowanttomakesomesuggestions.
Firstly,wehavefoundthat_____(建议一).Secondly,wewantto______(建议二).Finally,wehopethat_______(建议三).
Iamlookingforwardstoyourconsiderationaboutmyproposals.Thanksinadvance.
Yourssincerely,
LiMing
作文要点点拨
concerning关于,论及,就…而言:
thehelpandeverythingelseyouhavebeenofferingtous
你一直向我们提供的帮助及其它事情。
proposals提议,建议
inadvance预先,提前
建议信写作建议
然后,针对具体的问题,给出具体的建议,一般是给出二到三建议就行了。(这里真的只能是具体问题具体分析,没有看到作文主题,老师也无能为力,提前帮你弄好。只能靠自己了,加油。)
最后,还是套路,希望认真考虑你的建议,表示感谢。
英语作文建议(6)
提示:1.要走路去上班,而不是开车或坐车;
2.每周至少去体育馆锻炼一次,或打球、或游泳;
3.饮食要健康;
4.不要工作太晚,要早休息。
要求:1.短文结构完整,意思连贯,语言流畅,语法准确,符合逻辑;
2.80—100词左右;
3.开头和结尾部分已给出,不计入总词数。
【例文】
DearDad(Mum),
You’resobusyeverydaythatyoudon’tpaymuchattentiontoyourhealth.I’mworriedaboutyourhealthallthetime.I’dliketogiveyousomesuggestions.Ihearwalkingisthebestsport.Yourcompanyisn’tfarfromhome,isitWhynotwalktotheofficeYou’dbettertakeexerciseatleastonceaweek,suchasplayingtennisinthegym.Goingtoswimisalsoanicechoice,too.What’smore,it’snecessarytohavehealthyfood.Trynottostayuptoolate.Havingenoughsleepcanhelpyourbrainworkbetter.
Dad,pleaseacceptmyadvice.Ireallywishyouhealthy!
Yourlovingson(daughter)
Tom(Mary)
【翻译】
亲爱的爸爸(妈妈)。
你每天这么忙,以至于忽视了健康。我始终对你的健康感到担心。我想给你一些建议。我听说走路是最好的运动。您的公司里离家并不远,不是吗为什么不步行到办公室吗你最好每周至少锻炼一次,如在健身房打网球。去游泳也是一个不错的选择。更重要的是,记得吃健康的食物。尽量不要熬夜太晚。有足够的睡眠可以让你的大脑工作得更好。
爸爸,请接受我的意见。我真的希望你健康!
您的爱子(女)
汤姆(玛丽)
高中英语作文范文带翻译:美丽的回忆
BeautifulMemoryWhenIwassmall,Ilivedinmyhometown,itisasmallvillage,butthesceneryissobeautiful,thetreesaresogreenandthewaterissoclean.ButwhenIwenttoprimaryschool,Imovedtothecitywithmyparents,Imissedthetimeinmyhometownsomuch.WhenIwasinmyhometown,Iwokeupearlyinthemorning,somepeopletookawalkandsomeweredoingtheirfarmwork.Iwouldalwaysgotothemountainwithmygrandma,wetookcareofthefruittrees.Thelittledogwouldcomewithme,whenmygrandmawasdoingherwork,Iplayedwiththedog,howhappyIwas.SometimesIwouldgototheriverwithmyfriendstocatchthefish,Isawthefishclearly.Thesearebeautifulmemoryforme,Ikeepitallthetime.
当我还小的时候,我住在家乡,那是一个小村庄,但是风景很美,树木很绿,水很清澈。但是当我上初中的时候,我随父母搬到了城市,我很想念在家乡的时光。我在家乡的时候,我早上起得很早,一些人在散步,还有一些人在干他们的农活。我总会跟我的奶奶去山上,我们在料理果树。小狗会跟着我,在我奶奶干活的时候,我和小狗在玩耍,多么开心啊。有时候我会和朋友到河边抓鱼,我能清楚地看到鱼。这些对于我来说都是美丽的回忆,我一直都铭记着。
高中英语作文范文带翻译:高考冲刺
TheSprintinCollegeEntranceExam
Theperiodofhighschoolstageisthepreparationforcollege,allthestudentsworkhardinthepurposeofthebetterfuture.Inthisstage,theyholdthesametarget,fightingfortheCollegeEntranceExam,especiallyinthethirdyear,thesprintisveryimportant.Therearesomesuggestionsforabettersprint.First,studentsshouldtakearegularworkschedule,itisveryimportanttosleepintime,sothatstudentscanwakeupearlyinthemorningandthenworkwithefficiency.Secondistokeepthebalanceddiet.Studentsshouldpayattentiontowhattheyeat,thenutritionshouldbeenough,sotheycankeepabettermind,thinkinginaquickway.Thelastyearofhighschoollifemustbehardandtedious,theonewhokeepsholdonwillgainwhattheywant.Iftheydoasthementionedsuggestions,theycanworkbetter.
高考冲刺
高中阶段是为大学做准备的阶段,所有的学生都努力学习,希望能有个好的将来。在这个阶段,他们都有同样的目标,为了高考奋斗,特别是在第三年,冲刺是很重要的。为了更好的冲刺,一些建议被提出来。第一,学生应该按时作息,按时睡觉很重要,这样学生就能早点起来,同时也能有效率的学习。第二,保持平衡饮食。学生应该注意他们吃的,营养要充足,这样能保持良好的精神状态,思维运转得快速。高中生活的最后一年肯定是很艰苦和乏味的,谁能坚持下来,谁就能实现他们想要的。如果他们按照上面提到的建议做,他们的效率更高。
高中英语作文范文带翻译:信息爆炸的影响
TheImpactofInformationExplosion
信息爆炸的影响
Inaneraofinformationexplosion,peoplecaneasilybedistractedbyirrelevantinformation.Itisparticularlywell-knownthatawealthofinformationcreatesapovertyofattention.
在这个信息膨胀的时代,人们很容易受到不相干的信息的困扰,众所周知,过于丰富的信息反而导致注意力的缺失。
Admittedly,aconsiderationamountofinformationexpandsourhorizonandgivesusconvenience.Justwithasimpleclick,wecangetaplentyofinformationfromtheInternet.Wearesoskilledatsearchinginformationonline.Nevertheless,weseematseaofinformationinvariablywhenweopenwebpagesforwhichtheinformationistooabundantandmuchofthemturnouttobeuseless.Howcanweavoidbeinglostinawealthofinformation
可以肯定的是,一定量的信息可以开阔我们的眼界,给予方便。只是简单地敲击按键,我们就能从网络上获得大量的信息。我们是如此的熟悉搜索网络信息。尽管如此,当我们打开网页浏览这大量的信息时候,我们好像处在信息大海之中,而这些内容很多都是无用的。我们如何才能不迷失在这海量的信息之中
Firstofall,ensuringwhatinformationyouwantandmakealistofthem.Thenyoucansaveusefulwebpageswhichgetyououtofthetime-consuminginformation.Lastbutnotleast,weshouldbeself-controlandneverbeattractedbythedistractinginformation.Aslongasyoufollowthosetips,youwillgetwhatyouwantefficiently.
首先,确定好你想要找的内容并做好清单。然后你可以保存好那些有用的网站,这样你就能摆脱不相干信息的干扰。最后同样重要的是,我们要自我控制,不被那些转移注意力的信息给吸引。只要做到这几点,你就能有效地找到你想要的信息。
高中英语作文范文带翻译:春天
Spring
Whenyoulookaround,youwillfindthatthespringiscoming.Thebreezeisgentlybrushingyourface.Theblueskyisaboveyou.Afterraining,theflowersarebloominginthegarden.Thelivingbeingsstarttogrow.Everythingisfullwithvigorandfragrance.Thebestseasonofthisyear,youcann’tmissitandyouwillloveit.
Thespringiscoming,itbringsgreentothetreesandgrass,pinkandyellowtotheflowers.Activenesstotheanimals.Hopestothehumanbeings.Thebirdsstarttosing,thefarmersbegintoplantcropsinthefields.Inspring,everywhereisfullofhope.Peopleusuallysaythatagoodbeginningishalfdone,whilespringisthebeginningofayear.Soweshouldappreciateitandmakethemostuseofit.Trythebesttospreadseedsinspringandyouwillgetagoodharvestinautumn.Thenyouwillseehowimportantspringisandhowlovelyitis.
春天
当你环望四周,你就会发现春天来了。微风轻拂你的脸颊。湛蓝的天空在你头上。春雨过后,花朵在园子里开放。生物开始生长。所有的一切都富有活力和香气。这是一年中最好的季节,你不会错过它,更会爱上它。
春天来了,它把绿色带给了树木和青草;把黄色和粉色带给了鲜花;把活力带给了动物;更把希望带给了人们。小鸟开始唱歌,农民开始在地里耕作庄稼。在春天,一切都充满着希望。人们都说好的开始时成功的一半,那么春天就是一年的开始。所以我们更应该好好珍惜春天,过好每一天。在春天的时候努力播种,秋天时便会有所收获。然后你就会看到春天是多么的重要,多么的可爱了。
高中英语作文范文带翻译:出名趁早
ToBeFamousintheEarlyAge
Today,asthemediadevelopfast,peoplecanfindthefamouspeopleeverywhere,theyareinthecommercial,intheTVandthemovies.Themassmediaprovidesomanychancesforpeoplewhowanttobefamous.Manyyearsago,theageofbeingfamousisabout23,butnow,wecanfindalotofstarsgettingfamousintheearlyage,nowtheaverageageis17.Itistheageforteenager,manypeoplebelievethattheearlytobefamous,thebetter,becausetheyouthpassesawayquickly.Asforme,Ithinkbeingfamousintheearlyagemeanstheteenagershavetogiveuptheirstudy,theyneedtoacceptthecompany’straining,forthepurposeofmakingtheircareerperfect.Mostpeopledon’thavethechancetobeingfamous,astheydon’tgethigheducation,sotheyliveahardlife.Ithinkteenagershouldfocusonstudyfirst.