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学习范文或掌握优秀作文是打破提高自己传统写作语言的第一步。下面我们通过20xx年12月四级范文，分析学习如何提纯范文中的“谋篇、段落、句子、措辞”并加以利用，使其变成自己的语言。
ShouldtheUniversityCampusBeOpentoTourist
1.名校校园正成为旅游新热点
2.校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同
3.我认为…
ShouldtheUniversityCampusBeOpentoTourists
Nowadays,manyfamousuniversitycampuseshavebecomeoneofthepopulartouristattractions.IthasbeenshownonTVandontheradiothateveryyearthousandsandthousandsofmiddleschoolstudentsvisitTsingHuaUniversityandPekingUniversityandotherfamousuniversitiesinChina.Intheplacefarawayfromthecapitalcity,thelocalstudentsalsovisittheuniversitiesfamousintheirownprovince.
Sofarasthepresentsituationisconcerned,isitagoodorbadthingtoopentheuniversitycampusfortouristsDifferentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Ononehand,somepeoplearguedthatitisagoodthingforthestudentstovisitthefamousuniversitycampusinthatitcanenablethemiddlestudentstogetmoreinformationabouttheuniversityandtheycanhaveenoughtimeandopportunitytopreparethemselveswiththechancetogetintotheuniversity.Ontheotherhand,somepeopleholdanegativeviewaboutthisphenomenon.Intheiropinion,thepublictourismwillhavenegativeeffectontheuniversitiesbecauseitwillnotonlydoharmtotheenvironmentbutalsototheintellectualatmosphere.
Inmyopinion,thetourismtotheuniversitiesisnotagoodthing.Thecampusismainlyaplaceforstudy.Withtheincreasingtourismonthecampus,itwillruinthespiritualatmosphereinthislearningfield.
首先，提纯范文“谋篇布局”及结构模板。
第一段：提出问题或现象。Nowadays,……havebecomeoneofthepopular…….IthasbeenshownonTVandontheradiothat…….
第二段：正反列举人们的看法。Sofarasthepresentsituationisconcerned,isitagoodorbadthingto……Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Ononehand,somepeoplearguedthatitisagoodthingfor……inthat…….Ontheotherhand,somepeopleholdanegativeviewaboutthisphenomenon.Intheiropinion,……willhavenegativeeffecton……becauseitwillnotonlydoharmto……butalsoto…….
第三段：摆明自己观点。Inmyopinion,……isnotagoodthing.……Withtheincreasing……,itwillruin…….
其次，提纯范文“段落写作”。
段落写作分为统一性，连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity)：段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛，也不可太具体，做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题isitagoodorbadthing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明，另一方面从坏的方面说明。
完整性(completeness)：以设问句“Sofarasthepresentsituationisconcerned,isitagoodorbadthingtoopentheuniversitycampusfortourists”开头，这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式——设问法。“Ononehand…….Ontheotherhand,…….”是段落写作分类列举法的典型用法。
再次，提纯范文“句子写作”。
1.Ithasbeenshownthat……
类似句型：Itisknowntousthat……
Itissaidthat……
Itisreportedthat……
Itiscontroversialthat……
2.“……TsingHuaUniversityandPekingUniversityandotherfamousuniversities……。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单，注意练习并接句的使用，会使句子显的更加饱满。
3.enablev.使…能够
Igavehimfulldirectionstoenablehimtofindthehouse.
4.inthat=because
表“因为”的连词还有since,for,as，如：
Theboywasabsentbecausehewasill.=Theboywasabsentsincehewasill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头，句式简单，我们可以通过把since提前改变句式，如：
Sincetheboywasill,hewasabsent.句式多样化。
最后，提纯范文“措辞”。
1.attractionn.具有吸引力的事情。
2.thousandsandthousands成千上万的
形容“多”的表达方法：millionsandmillions
amultitudeof
agreatdealof
alargeamountof
plentyof
manya
3.“somepeoplearguedthat……”中的“argue”并不是“讨论，辩论”的意思，而是“认为”。
Iarguethat……
Imaintainthat……
Iclaimthat……
Iinsistthat……=Ithinkthat……
Iholdthat……
Iassertthat……
Iassumethat……
4.negativeadj.否定的，相反的
holdnegativeview=holdoppositeopinions
5.phenomenonn.现象
socialphenomenon社会现象
naturalphenomenon自然现象
6.intellectualadj.聪明的=intelligent,bright,clever
(选词策略：使用最近所学的单词，如intellectual>intelligent>bright>clever)
在分析并掌握范文之后，我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用20xx年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了20xx年12月的四级作文，以供参考：
1.许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会
2.但有些人提出取消春节晚会
3.我的看法
Nowadays,theSpringFestivalEveninghasbecomeoneofthepopulartopicandattractionsduringeverytraditionalNewYear’sEve.IthasbeenshownonTVandontheradiothateveryyearthousandsandthousandsofChinesepeopleappeartobeaccustomedtoenjoyingthesightsandsoundsofabrilliantfeast,whilegatheringwiththeirbelovedfamily.
However,anincreasingnumberofpeoplehavevoiceddifferentopinionstowardsit.Sofarasthepresentsituationisconcerned,isitagoodorbadthingtocanceltheSpringFestivalEveningDifferentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Ononehand,somepeoplearguedthatitisagoodthingtoamusetheaudienceinthatitiscomposedbyanumerousadequateprograms,suchastheemotionalsong,thegracefuldance,thefunnyshortsketch,theamusingcomicdialogue,thedelightfulmagic,andthemarvelousacrobaticsandsoon.Ontheotherhand,somepeopleholdanegativeviewaboutthisphenomenon.Intheiropinion,theSpringFestivalEveningwillhavenegativeeffectonthefamilyharmonybecauseitwillnotonlydoharmtohavingthetalksbetweenfamilymembersontheSpringFestivalEvebutalsotoenjoyingthegourmetmealinafancyrestaurant.
Inmyopinion,theSpringFestivalEveningisagoodthing.Itmaynotremainamustforallpeople,butitcanbringusastrongsenseoffestivityandserveasanalternativeamongthevarietyofholidayactivities.WiththeincreasingaudienceoftheSpringFestivalEvening,itwillruinadistinctivecultureduringtheSpringFestivalvacation.