注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
思路点拨本文是一篇电子邮件类应用文写作。餐桌礼仪也是考生比较熟悉的话题。成文时注意以下几点:一、内容要点要齐全:
【满分作文】DearTerry,HowareyoudoingLearningthatyouareabouttopayavisittoaChinesefriendandconfusedabouttheChinesecustoms,Iamwritingtoputforwardsomeadvice.Firstly,Iwould1iketosuggestthatyouarrive5to10minutesearlier,whichiscommoninChinesetraditionalculture.Secondly,ifIwereyouIwouldbringsomeappropriategiftswithme,suchassouvenirsfrommyowncountry.Besides,tablemannersarealsowhatyoushouldpayattentionto.Forexample,youarenotsupposedtostickyourchopsticksintoyourfood.Instead,layingthemonyourdishisasmartchoice.Ifyouhaveanyotherproblems,pleasedon’thesitatetocontactme.
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2.如果有专属地域文化特色的礼物是最好的。如果朋友家有长辈,带点烟酒和茶叶或一些老人家用的保健品等;如果朋友家有小孩,带点儿童玩具或买箱牛奶,然后加点茶叶啥的;不要送钟、梨、伞等这些东西,被认为不吉祥。
3.主人会请客人入座上席,再请长辈入座客人旁。入座的时侯要从椅子的左边进入。在中餐结束时,筷子应整齐地放在靠碗右边的桌上,并应等客人们都放下筷子以后,主人示意离席后方可以离开,不能自己吃完了放下筷子就走,这样做是很没礼貌的表现。
常用词语和句子准时:ontime/punctually餐桌礼仪:tablemanners合适的、恰当的:appropriate拜访:
payavisittoYouaresupposed/expected/requiredtodo…It'sagoodideato…It'sappropriate/suitabletodo…It'ssensible/reasonable/advisabletodo…It'sgoodmannerstodo…It'snoteworthythat…Ithinkitwouldbemorehelpfulifyoucoulddo…Itwouldbewiseofyouto…It'sdesirabletodo…It'sinappropriatetodo…It'simpolitetodo…It'sunwise/inadvisabletodo…
Never(助动词/系动词/情态动词)主语+谓语动词…It'snotsuitableforyoutodo…insuchasituation.
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写作点拨
英语书面通知的时态应该以一般将来时为主,多使用被动语态、简单句。在通知中不应当过度的使用较复杂的词语和读起来拗口的句子。
第二个注意点:层次一定要清晰,一个层次要表达一件事情,使人看起来一目了然。
满分范文
Notice
Boysandgirls,MayIhaveyourattention,pleaseRecently,anoutstandingmoviewillbeshowninourcampus.Welcometojoinusendenjoyit!Herearesomerelevantdetailsaboutit.Tobeginwith,thenameofthemovieisGrowingtogether,whichisaboutthedevelopmentofourbelovedschool;asaresult,itwillbenotonlymeaningfulbutalsointeresting.Besides,itwillbeinthelibraryfrom2:00to4:00intheafternoononJune9th.What’smore,everyoneofyouwillbewelcometotakepartinit,enjoyingthemovie,havingaheateddiscussionafterwardsandgivingyourowncomments.Hopefully,youwouldmakeittoouractivity.Ihavetheconfidencethatyouwillhaveagreattime.
TheStudentUnion
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假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信,内容包括:1.学校的体育场馆;2.主要的运动项目;3.你喜欢的项目。注意:1.词数100左右:2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
思路点拨本题作文为提纲式作文,形式依然是书信,即给英国朋友Peter介绍学校体育运动情况,属于学校生活话题。这一话题贴合学生生活的实际,学生并不陌生,有话可说。
满分范文DearPeter,Iamexceedinglydelightedtohearfromyou.Youaskedmeinyourlastletteraboutthephysicalexerciseinourschoolandthefollowinginformationmaygiveyouaroughsketch.Tobeginwith,afabulousnewstadiumhasbeenbuiltup,whichhasbecomethenewlandmarkinourschool.Moreover,withthestadiumsetup,awiderangeofsportseventsareabletobeheld,ofwhichping-pong,footballaswellasrunningcompetitionsenjoygreatpopularity.Asforme,I’mintoxicatedwithbasketballsinceithasbeengivingmestrengthtoconfrontthechallengesinmylife.Allinall,Isincerelyinviteyoutocometoourschoolandseeforyourself.
Yours,LiHua
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满分范文DearSirorMadam,MynameisLiHua.AndIamwritingtoapplyforbeingavolunteerofourschoolEnglishassociation.IhaveagoodcommandofEnglishandhavebeentotheUSAtwice.SoIcancommunicatewellwithnativespeakersofEnglish.What'smore,Iamkindandfriendlytootherpeople.SoIcaneasilygetalongwithforeignstudents.I'mparticularlyinterestedinthisjobbecauseIwanttofurtherimprovemyoralEnglishcapabilitiesandinterpersonalcommunicationskills.HopefullyIcanreceiveyouracceptance.
Yoursfaithfully,LiHua
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试题回顾读后续写:阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.
注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
根据第一段所给首句Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.这一句是故事发展的转折点,可从rabbit出现后带来的反应扩展开,可以写马的反应,也可以写人的反应,但要注意与第二段首句相呼应。第二段首句是Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.这一句呼应前文UnclePaul的叮嘱——不要误吃晚饭,可从如何寻路返回农场去写。
续写时注意要使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语,我们要熟悉所给划线词语,恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右;续写完成后要用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
满分范文Suddenlyalttlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Myhorseturnedtothe1efttoavoidtheittlerabbitasIheldontightlyandtriednottofall.Thenmydadturnedaroundandshouted,Hoidon!AllofasuddenthehorsebegantorunMydadtriedtokeepupbehindus.Forafewminutesmyhorsesloweddowntoatrotandthenstoppedbesideariver.Ilookedaroundandrealizedthatwewerewayoffthetrack.Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Luckilythestarscameoutandgaveusalittlelightwhenwewerelookingforthewaytothefarmhouse.Afterwhatmusthavebeenseveralhours,wesuddenlyheardthesoundofsheepinthedistance.MydadandIbothrodeourhorsestowardsthesoundofthesheep.AswegotcloserwesawUnclePaulwithaflashlightwavingusover.Whatanight!
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注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:世界青少年机器人技能竞赛theWorldAdolescentRoboticsCompetition
DearChris,Ihavegoodnewstotellyou.I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.
Yours,LiJin
满分范文DearChris,Ihavegoodnewstotellyou.TheWorldAdolescentRoboticsCompetitionwillbeheldinTianjinattheendofJuly.HearingthatyouoncetookpartinaRoboticsSkillsCompetitionandwonanaward,I,onbehalfoftheRoboticsHobbyGroup,intendtoinviteyoutojoinourteaminthecomingcompetition.Iamsurethatyourinvolvementwillnotonlyhelpusinwinningtheawardbutalsoenhancethefriendshipbetweenourtwoschools.WiththisemailIalsosendyouourtrainingplan,aboutwhichIwishtogetyouradvicebecauseyouaremoreexperiencedthanus.Wesincerelyhopethatwecanparticipateinthecompetitionasteampartners.I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.
Yours,
LiJin
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1.表示欢迎;2.推荐他上哪所大学;3.建议他做哪些准备工作。注意:
1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。DearJim,Yours,LiHua
满分范文DearJim,I'msogladtohearyourfutureeducationplaninBeijinginyourlastletter.FirstIwouldliketoexpressmywarmestwelcometoyouandIamsureyouwillhavethemostunforgettableexperienceduringyourcollegeinBeijing.LearningyourkeeninterestinChineseculture,IsuggestyouapplyforPekingUniversity,oneofthebestuniversitiesinChina.ItsChineseLiteraturemajoris,perfectforyouwhereyou.canbecompletelysoakedinChineseprofoundhistoryandrichculture.AsforpreparationsomereadinginadvanceinneededlikeTheStoryoftheStonewhilesomeonlinecoursesofspokenChinesecanbehelpfulforyoutoadaptintotheChineselanguageenvironment.Isincerelyhopeyourdreamwillcometrueandit’smypleasuretoshowyouaroundinBeijingwhenthatdaycomes.Ifyouhavefurtherquestions,pleasefeelfreetoletmeknow.
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假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,记述你们上周接待外国学生,带领他们体验中国茶文化的过程。注意:词数不少于60。
思路点拨本文为图片介绍类作文,这类作文是根据给出的一幅或几幅图画所提供的信息写短文。此类题的体裁较广泛,可以是记叙文、说明文,也可以是议论文。按照本文的要求可知,是写一篇记叙文。1.认真读图,把握中心。根据提示可知,内容是带领外国学生体验中国茶文化的全过程,介绍了茶具,泡茶,沏茶,品茶的过程,所以这是这组图画所要表达的中心。
【亮点说明】
使用非谓语动词,使句子表达更简洁:Onarrivingattheteahouse…
Igavethemavividandinformativeintroductionofteaculture,includingitsprofoundhistory,itsrichvariety,
Absorbedineverymoveofmine,theforeignstudentswereonceagainamazedbythisuniqueculture
holdingtheteabagsinourhands,wetookapicturetomemorizetheunforgettableday.
使用倒装句突出重点。NextcamethemomentwhenIaskedthemtohaveatrythemselves.
使用it做形式主语,使表达更地道。Itsuddenlyhitmethattraditionalcultureliketeaculturewasofgreatcharmandhugevalue.
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写作内容:
1.用约30个词概括上述利用排名(ratings)进行消费的现象;2.谈谈你如何看待消费排名,然后用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。写作要求:1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;3.不必写标题评分标准:内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
思路点拨先用30词概括阅读材料,然后针对材料中的话题写一篇议论文谈看法。首先要认真阅读两段有关消费排名现象及观点的纯文字材料,然后进行比较和分析,表明态度,作出价值判断。
然后写你对onlinerating的看法,表明观点,注意用2-3个论据来支撑自己的看法。
Therefore,weshouldgiveasecondthoughttotheseratingswheneverwegoshopping.