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2023.11.06上海
雅思小作文范文
Thebarchartcomparesthenumberofincidentsandinjuriesforevery100millionpassengermilestravelledonfivedifferenttypesofpublictransportin2002.
Itisclearthatthemostincidentsandinjuriestookplaceondemand-responsevehicles.Bycontrast,commuterrailservicesrecordedbyfarthelowestfigures.
Atotalof225incidentsand173injuries,per100millionpassengermilestravelled,tookplaceondemand-responsetransportservices.Thesefigureswerenearlythreetimesashighasthoseforthesecondhighestcategory,busservices.Therewere76incidentsand66peoplewereinjuredonbuses.
Railservicesexperiencedfewerproblems.Thenumberofincidentsonlightrailtrainsequalledthefigurerecordedforbuses,butthereweresignificantlyfewerinjuries,atonly39.Heavyrailservicessawlowernumbersofsucheventsthanlightrailservices,butcommuterrailpassengerswereevenlesslikelytoexperienceproblems.Infact,only20incidentsand17injuriesoccurredoncommutertrains.(165words,band9)
雅思图表作文真题：柱状图：各地房价
Thechartbelowshowsinformationaboutchangesinaveragehousepricesinfivedifferentcitiesbetween1990and2002comparedwiththeaveragehousepricesinxxx.
雅思小作文范文：
Thebarchartcomparesthecostofanaveragehouseinfivemajorcitiesoveraperiodof13yearsfromxxx.
Wecanseethathousepricesfelloverallbetween1990and1995,butmostofthecitiessawrisingpricesbetween1996and2002.Londonexperiencedbyfarthegreatestchangesinhousepricesoverthe13-yearperiod.
Overthe5yearsafterxxx,thecostofaveragehomesinTokyoandLondondroppedbyaround7%,whileNewYorkhousepriceswentdownby5%.Bycontrast,pricesrosebyapproximately2%inbothMadridandFrankfurt.
Between1996and2002,Londonhousepricesjumpedtoaround12%abovethexxxaverage.HomebuyersinNewYorkalsohadtopaysignificantlymore,withpricesrisingto5%abovethexxxaverage,buthomesinTokyoremainedcheaperthantheywereinxxx.ThecostofanaveragehomeinMadridrosebyafurther2%,whilepricesinFrankfurtremainedstable.
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雅思图表作文真题：饼状图：垃圾处理
Thepiechartsbelowshowhowdangerouswasteproductsaredealtwithinthreecountries.
ThechartscompareKorea,SwedenandtheUKintermsofthemethodsusedineachcountrytodisposeofharmfulwaste.
ItisclearthatinboththeUKandSweden,themajorityofdangerouswasteproductsareburiedunderground.Bycontrast,mosthazardousmaterialsintheRepublicofKoreaarerecycled.
Lookingattheinformationinmoredetail,wecanseethat82%oftheUK’sdangerouswasteisputintolandfillsites.Thisdisposaltechniqueisusedfor55%oftheharmfulwasteinSwedenandonly22%ofsimilarwasteinKorea.Thelattercountryrecycles69%ofhazardousmaterials,whichisfarmorethantheothertwonations.
While25%ofSweden'sdangerouswasteisrecycled,theUKdoesnotrecycleatall.Instead,itdumpswasteatseaortreatsitchemically.ThesetwomethodsarenotemployedinKoreaorSweden,whichfavourincinerationfor9%and20%ofdangerouswasterespectively.(159)
雅思图表作文真题：饼图：三地用水
ThepiechartsbelowcomparewaterusageinSanDiego,Californiaandtherestoftheworld.
Thepiechartsgiveinformationaboutthewaterusedforresidential,industrialandagriculturalpurposesinSanDiegoCounty,California,andtheworldasawhole.
ItisnoticeablethatmorewaterisconsumedbyhomesthanbyindustryoragricultureinthetwoAmericanregions.Bycontrast,agricultureaccountsforthevastmajorityofwaterusedworldwide.
InSanDiegoCountyandCaliforniaState,residentialwaterconsumptionaccountsfor60%and39%oftotalwaterusage.Bycontrast,amere8%ofthewaterusedgloballygoestohomes.Theoppositetrendcanbeseenwhenwelookatwaterconsumptionforagriculture.Thisaccountsforamassive69%ofglobalwateruse,butonly17%and28%ofwaterusageinSanDiegoandCaliforniarespectively.
Suchdramaticdifferencesarenotseenwhenwecomparethefiguresforindustrialwateruse.Thesameproportionofwater(23%)isusedbyindustryinSanDiegoandworldwide,whilethefigureforCaliforniais10%higher,at33%.
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雅思图表作文真题：饼图：服务问卷
ThechartsbelowshowtheresultsofaquestionnairethataskedvisitorstotheParkwayHotelhowtheyratedthehotel'scustomerservice.Thesamequestionnairewasgivento100guestsintheyears2005and2010.
Thepiechartscomparevisitors’responsestoasurveyaboutcustomerserviceattheParkwayHotelin2005andin2010.
Itisclearthatoverallcustomersatisfactionincreasedconsiderablyfrom2005to2010.Whilemosthotelguestsratedcustomerserviceassatisfactoryorpoorin2005,aclearmajoritydescribedthehotel’sserviceasgoodorexcellentin2010.
Lookingatthepositiveresponsesfirst,in2005only5%ofthehotel’svisitorsrateditscustomerserviceasexcellent,butthisfigureroseto28%in2010.Furthermore,whileonly14%ofguestsdescribedcustomerserviceinthehotelasgoodin2005,almostthreetimesasmanypeoplegavethisratingfiveyearslater.
Withregardtonegativefeedback,theproportionofguestswhoconsideredthehotel’scustomerservicetobepoorfellfrom21%in2005toonly12%in2010.Similarly,theproportionofpeoplewhothoughtcustomerservicewasverypoordroppedfrom15%toonly4%overthe5-yearperiod.Finally,afallinthenumberof'satisfactory’ratingsin2010reflectsthefactthatmorepeoplegavepositiveresponsestothesurveyinthatyear.(193words,band9)
雅思图表作文真题：饼图：游客分析
ThechartbelowshowstheresultsofasurveyofpeoplewhovisitedfourtypesoftouristattractioninBritainintheyear1999.
ThepiechartcomparesfiguresforvisitorstofourcategoriesoftouristattractionandtofivedifferentthemeparksinBritainin1999.
Itisclearthatthemeparksandmuseums/gallerieswerethetwomostpopulartypesoftouristattractioninthatyear.BlackpoolPleasureBeachreceivedbyfarthehighestproportionofvisitorsinthethemeparksector.
Lookingattheinformationinmoredetail,wecanseethat38%ofthesurveyedvisitorswenttoathemepark,and37%ofthemwenttoamuseumorgallery.Bycontrast,historichousesandmonumentswerevisitedbyonly16%ofthesample,whilewildlifeparksandzoosweretheleastpopularofthefourtypesoftouristattraction,withonly9%ofvisitors.
Inthethemeparksector,almosthalfofthepeoplesurveyed(47%)hadbeentoBlackpoolPleasureBeach.AltonTowerswasthesecondmostpopularamusementpark,with17%ofthesample,followedbyPleasurelandinSouthport,with16%.Finally,ChessingtonWorldofAdventuresandLegolandWindsorhadeachwelcomed10%ofthesurveyedvisitors.
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雅思图表作文真题：表格题：骑车上班
ThetablebelowshowschangesinthenumbersofresidentscyclingtoworkindifferentareasoftheUKbetween2001and2011.
ThetablecomparesthenumbersofpeoplewhocycledtoworkintwelveareasoftheUKintheyears2001and2011.
Overall,thenumberofUKcommuterswhotravelledtoworkbybicycleroseconsiderablyoverthe10-yearperiod.InnerLondonhadbyfarthehighestnumberofcyclingcommutersinbothyears.
In2001,wellover43thousandresidentsofinnerLondoncommutedbybicycle,andthisfigurerosetomorethan106thousandin2011,anincreaseof144%.Bycontrast,althoughouterLondonhadthesecondhighestnumberofcyclingcommutersineachyear,thepercentagechange,atonly45%,wasthelowestofthetwelveareasshowninthetable.
BrightonandHovesawthesecondbiggestincrease(109%)inthenumberofresidentscyclingtowork,butBristolwastheUK’ssecondcityintermsoftotalnumbersofcyclingcommuters,with8,108in2001and15,768in2011.Figuresfortheothereightareaswerebelowthe10thousandmarkinbothyears.
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雅思图表作文真题：表格：贫困家庭
ThetablebelowshowstheproportionofdifferentcategoriesoffamilieslivinginpovertyinAustraliain1999.
ThetablegivesinformationaboutpovertyratesamongsixtypesofhouseholdinAustraliaintheyear1999.
Itisnoticeablethatlevelsofpovertywerehigherforsinglepeoplethanforcouples,andpeoplewithchildrenweremorelikelytobepoorthanthosewithout.Povertyrateswereconsiderablyloweramongelderlypeople.
Overall,11%ofAustralians,or1,837,000people,werelivinginpovertyin1999.Agedpeopleweretheleastlikelytobepoor,withpovertylevelsof6%and4%forsingleagedpeopleandagedcouplesrespectively.
Justoveronefifthofsingleparentswerelivinginpoverty,whereasonly12%ofparentslivingwithapartnerwereclassedaspoor.Thesamepatterncanbeseenforpeoplewithnochildren:while19%ofsinglepeopleinthisgroupwerelivingbelowthepovertyline,thefigureforcoupleswasmuchlower,atonly7%.(150words,band9)
雅思图表作文真题：线图：老龄人口
Thegraphbelowshowstheproportionofthepopulationaged65andoverbetween1940and2040inthreedifferentcountries.
Thelinegraphcomparesthepercentageofpeopleaged65ormoreinthreecountriesoveraperiodof100years.
Itisclearthattheproportionofelderlypeopleincreasesineachcountrybetween1940and2040.Japanisexpectedtoseethemostdramaticchangesinitselderlypopulation.
In1940,around9%ofAmericanswereaged65orover,comparedtoabout7%ofSwedishpeopleand5%ofJapanesepeople.TheproportionsofelderlypeopleintheUSAandSwedenrosegraduallyoverthenext50years,reachingjustunder15%in1990.Bycontrast,thefiguresforJapanremainedbelow5%untiltheearly2000s.
Lookingintothefuture,asuddenincreaseinthepercentageofelderlypeopleispredictedforJapan,withajumpofover15%injust10yearsfrom2030to2040.By2040,itisthoughtthataround27%oftheJapanesepopulationwillbe65yearsoldormore,whilethefiguresforSwedenandtheUSAwillbeslightlylower,atabout25%and23%respectively.(178words,band9)
雅思图表作文真题：线图：价格变动
Thegraphbelowshowschangesinglobalfoodandoilpricesbetween2000and2011.
Thelinegraphcomparestheaveragepriceofabarrelofoilwiththefoodpriceindexoveraperiodof11years.
Itisclearthataverageglobalpricesofbothoilandfoodroseconsiderablybetween2000and2011.Furthermore,thetrendsforbothcommoditieswereverysimilar,andsoastrongcorrelation()issuggested.
Intheyear2000,theaverageglobaloilpricewascloseto$25perbarrel,andthefoodpriceindexstoodatjustunder90points.Overthefollowingfouryearsbothpricesremainedrelativelystable,beforerisingsteadilybetween2004and2007.By2007,theaverageoilpricehadmorethandoubled,tonearly$60perbarrel,andfoodpriceshadrisenbyaround50points.
Adramaticincreaseinbothcommoditypriceswasseenfrom2007to2008,withoilpricesreachingapeakofapproximately$130perbarrelandthefoodpriceindexrisingto220points.However,bythebeginningof2009thepriceofoilhaddroppedbyroughly$90,andthefoodpriceindexwasdownbyabout80points.Finally,in2011,theaverageoilpriceroseonceagain,tonearly$100perbarrel,whilethefoodpriceindexreacheditspeak,atalmost240points.(211)
雅思图表作文真题：线图：企业垃圾
Thegraphbelowshowstheamountsofwasteproducedbythreecompaniesoveraperiodof15years.
Thelinegraphcomparesthreecompaniesintermsoftheirwasteoutputbetweentheyears2000and2015.
Itisclearthatthereweresignificantchangesintheamountsofwasteproducedbyallthreecompaniesshownonthegraph.WhilecompaniesAandBsawwasteoutputfalloverthe15-yearperiod,theamountofwasteproducedbycompanyCincreasedconsiderably.
In2000,companyAproduced12tonnesofwaste,whilecompaniesBandCproducedaround8tonnesand4tonnesofwastematerialrespectively.Overthefollowing5years,thewasteoutputofcompaniesBandCrosebyaround2tonnes,butthefigureforcompanyAfellbyapproximately1tonne.
From2005to2015,companyAcutwasteproductionbyroughly3tonnes,andcompanyBreduceditswastebyaround7tonnes.Bycontrast,companyCsawanincreaseinwasteproductionofapproximately4tonnesoverthesame10-yearperiod.By2015,companyC’swasteoutputhadrisento10tonnes,whiletherespectiveamountsofwastefromcompaniesAandBhaddroppedto8tonnesandonly3tonnes.(192words,band9)
雅思图表作文真题：混合图：温度与降水
TheclimographbelowshowsaveragemonthlytemperaturesandrainfallinthecityofKolkata.
ThechartcomparesaveragefiguresfortemperatureandprecipitationoverthecourseofacalendaryearinKolkata.
ItisnoticeablethatmonthlyfiguresforprecipitationinKolkatavaryconsiderably,whereasmonthlytemperaturesremainrelativelystable.RainfallishighestfromJulytoAugust,whiletemperaturesarehighestinAprilandMay.
BetweenthemonthsofJanuaryandMay,averagetemperaturesinKolkatarisefromtheirlowestpointataround20°Ctoapeakofjustover30°C.Averagerainfallinthecityalsorisesoverthesameperiod,fromapproximately20mmofraininJanuaryto100mminMay.
Whiletemperaturesstayroughlythesameforthenextfourmonths,theamountofrainfallmorethandoublesbetweenMayandJune.Figuresforprecipitationremainabove250mmfromJunetoSeptember,peakingataround330mminJuly.Thefinalthreemonthsoftheyearseeadramaticfallinprecipitation,toalowofabout10mminDecember,andasteadydropintemperaturesbacktotheJanuaryaverage.(173words,band9)
雅思图表作文真题：混合图：独居人口
ThebarchartbelowshowstheproportionsofEnglishmenandwomenofdifferentageswhowerelivingalonein2011.Thepiechartcomparesthenumbersofbedroomsintheseone-personhouseholds.
LivingaloneinEnglandbyageandgender,ofbedroomsinone-personhouseholds(England,2011)
Thetwochartsgiveinformationaboutsingle-occupanthouseholdsinEnglandintheyear2011.Thebarchartcomparesfiguresforoccupants'ageandgender,andthepiechartshowsdataaboutthenumberofbedroomsinthesehomes.
Overall,femalesmadeupahigherproportionofpeoplelivingalonethanmales,andthisdifferenceisparticularlynoticeableintheolderagecategories.Wecanalsoseethatthemostcommonnumberofbedroomsinasingle-occupanthomewastwo.
Asignificantmajorityofthepeopleaged65oroverwhowerelivingaloneinEnglandin2011werefemale.Womenmadeuparound72%ofsingleoccupantsaged75to84,and76%ofthoseaged85orover.Bycontrast,amongyoungeradultsthefiguresformaleswerehigher.Forexample,inthe35-49agecategory,menaccountedfornearly65%ofpeoplelivingalone.
Inthesameyear,ofone-personhouseholdsinEnglandhadtwobedrooms,whileone-bedroomandthree-bedroomhomesaccountedfor28%andofthetotal.Under7%ofsingle-occupanthomeshadfourormorebedrooms.
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①.图表作为书面表达的一种信息提示方式，显得简洁明了，正被越来越多的各级各类英语考试所采用。但是，在阅卷中，我们发现情况并不理想，问题主要集中在三个方面：。
②.写作模板——图表式作文Itisobviousinthegraph/tablethattherate/number/amountofYhasundergonedramaticchanges.Ithasgoneup/grown/fallen/dropped。
④.Hello!MynameisTom,I'mastudentofMiddleschool,Ilikemyschool,。8:00.Ihavefourclassesinthemorning.IstudyEnglish,Chinaese,math,biology,history。
⑤.gameofliving.Inthecent。
这个饼状图比较了1999年英国的四类旅游景点和5个不同主题公园的游客人数。
很明显，主题公园和博物馆/画廊是那一年最受欢迎的两个旅游景点。在主题公园中，黑潭快乐海滩获得的游客比例是最高的。
更详细地看这些信息，我们可以看到，38%的受访游客去了一个主题公园，其中37%的人去了博物馆或美术馆。相比之下，只有16%的样本参观了历史建筑和纪念碑，而野生动物公园和动物园则是这四种旅游景点中最不受欢迎的，只有9%的游客。
Inthethemeparksector,almosthalfofthepeoplesurveyed(47%)hadbeentoBlackpoolPleasureBeach.AltonTowerswasthesecondmostpopularamusementpark,with17%ofthesample,followedbyPleasurelandinSouthport,with16%.Finally,ChessingtonWorldofAdventuresandLegolandWindsorhadeachwelcomed10%ofthesurveyedvisitors.(181words,band9)
在主题公园领域，几乎一半的被调查者(47%)曾经到过布莱克浦的快乐海滩。奥尔顿塔是第二大最受欢迎的游乐园，有17%的样本，其次是在索斯波特的娱乐公园，占16%。最后，查辛顿冒险世界和乐高和温莎的游客都欢迎10%的游客。
线图：企业垃圾
Heresmyfullanswer:ThelinegraphsshowtheaveragemonthlyamountthatparentsinBritainspentontheirchildren’ssportingactivitiesandthenumberofBritishchildrenwhotookpartinthreedifferentsportsfrom2008toisclearthatparentsspentmoremoneyeachyearontheirchildren’sparticipationinsportsoverthesix-yearperiod.Intermsofthenumberofchildrentakingpart,footballwassignificantlymorepopularthanathleticsand2008,Britishparentsspentanaverageofaround￡20permonthontheirchildren’ssportingactivities.Parents’spendingonchildren’ssportsincreasedgraduallyoverthefollowingsixyears,andby2014theaveragemonthlyamounthadrisentojustover￡atparticipationnumbers,in2008approximately8millionBritishchildrenplayedfootball,whileonly2millionchildrenwereenrolledinswimmingclubsandlessthan1millionpractisedathletics.Thefiguresforfootballparticipationremainedrelativelystableoverthefollowing6years.Bycontrast,participationinswimmingalmostdoubled,tonearly4millionchildren,andtherewasanearfivefoldincreaseinthenumberofchildrendoingathletics.
第一句：
In1980,energyfromnuclear,hydro-andsolar/windpowerwasequalatonly4q.发现了它们三个起点相同，可以放在一起写。
第二句：
Nuclearhasrisenby3q,andsolar/windby2.发现nuclear和solar都是增长，放在一起写。
第三句：
第四句：
Itisexpectedtomaintainthisleveluntil2030,whiletheothersshouldriseslightlyafter2025.这一句话把三种能源在08年以后的趋势都描述出来了，一个不变，两个有增。试想如果按部就班把三种能源分开说，都要描述2008年以后的趋势，会啰嗦很多。
这里还有一点值得注意，范文一个句子里包含的信息很多，但是并不是每一个信息都必须是带数字的。在刚开始写小作文的时候，感觉要写某个信息，就一定得把具体数值写进去。
按照评分标准，写小作文的确要有数据支持，但是这并不意味着所有信息都得带上数字。
比如我们来看上面例子里的第四句，范文只是说一个保持，另两个稍稍上升，并没有说具体从多少上升到了多少。纵观整个折线图，这个具体数值其实也并不重要，所以完全可以像范文这样写。这样写的好处当然就是涵盖的信息点更多，同时没有因为不重要的细节而使得句子很长。
范文只是一个示范，对于信息的归类当然可以有所不同，但是我们写的目标就是像范文一样，一个简洁的句子里包含很多信息点！觉得要做到这个就需要反复练习，练的多了，就能体会到该怎么安排信息。
还有一个心得，是有关结尾段的。
结尾段的作用是对图表所要表达的信息做一个概括，
总结图表中的重要feature，并且常常需要将这些feature做一个对比。
我一开始比较困惑，觉得主体段里有很多feature，不知道哪个最重要，要说哪一个，如果逐条列出来就成了重复主体段，不是总结了。
后来渐渐找到了感觉，写结尾段的时候可以回顾一下全篇以及图表，
在脑子里这么想：
还拿刚才那个题举例子。
范文的结尾段：Overall,theUSwillcontinuetorelyonfossilfuels,withsustainableandunclearenergysourcesremainingrelativelyinsignificant.
首先，这里又有一个很好的信息归纳，就是将化石能源归在一起，可再生能源归在一起，这样用两个词就把这好几种能源全包括了，省掉很多字。其次就是刚才说的对比，通过对比，表现出两类能源在未来的比重。这种在结论段做对比在剑桥范文里很常见。
小作文训练方法：多看范文，尝试默写
小作文比较容易提高，那些基本的套路在很多资料里都可以找到，比如开头段怎么写之类的。
我前面总结的几点都是在备考过程中自己的一些体会，算是一些没有在辅导书中一下就学会的东西，其实总结下来就是如何归纳信息，并且言简意赅的表达出来。
剑桥雅思6test1大作文范文，剑桥雅思6test1大作文task2高分范文真题答案实感。考试的时候一直是考官给我的，因为我觉得我应该是最棒的。但我自认为我是个非常棒的中国人，我自认为是非常有发挥的一个部分，我的大部分分数也就是。首先，我要说的是，我想说，这是一个雅思写作考试。这里我想说一下，如果想得到8分以上，一定要有好的结构。首先，我们来说说雅思写作。雅思写作考试分为两个部分：一部分是图表分析，一部分是图表分析。我们在写作文的时候，一定要注意图片分析。这也是我们在备考的时候一定要注意的。首先，要明白雅思写作评分的标准：图表的准确性是非常重要的。所以我们应该在考试时，把图表分别描述一下。
由于大作文备考体系内容超载，目前以独立的链接发布。▲建议大家认真学习完本篇小作文的系统攻略后，再跳转到以下链接↓↓↓
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时常发现各位烤鸭们的备考资料实在太多，尤其是小作文，各种表格、各种范文，可是很多时候，看得越多，越是一脸懵逼，因为资料太多太乱了，而不会分类归纳和总结。
小作文需要的准备、资料、模板其实不在于多，而在于精，关键是对写作思路有清晰了解，也就是在什么地方应该写什么内容，以及对核心写作语言的融会贯通。
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ThemapshowsthegrowthofavillagecalledChorleywoodbetween1868and1994.
Itisclearthatthevillagegrewasthetransportinfrastructurewasimproved.Fourperiodsofdevelopmentareshownonthemap,andeachofthepopulatedareasisneartothemainroads,therailwayorthemotorway.
From1868to1883,Chorleywoodcoveredasmallareanexttooneofthemainroads.ChorleywoodParkandGolfCourseisnowlocatednexttothisoriginalvillagearea.Thevillagegrewalongthemainroadtothesouthbetween1883and1922,andin1909arailwaylinewasbuiltcrossingthisareafromwesttoeast.Chorleywoodstationisinthispartofthevillage.
TheexpansionofChorleywoodcontinuedtotheeastandwestalongsidetherailwaylineuntil1970.Atthattime,amotorwaywasbuilttotheeastofthevillage,andfrom1970to1994,furtherdevelopmentofthevillagetookplacearoundmotorwayintersectionswiththerailwayandoneofthemainroads.
Somepeoplesaythatolderpeopleshouldlivewiththeiradultchildren.Otherssaythattheyshouldn't.Whichdoyouthinkisgoodpractice.
Oneofthetopicsindailylifeiswhetherornottheolderpeopleshouldlivewiththeiradultchildren.Myansweristhequestionisthatitisbetterforthemnotto.
Firstly,peopleofdifferentageshavedifferentwaysoflife.Theoldpeoplelikeaquiet,peacefulandregularlifewhereastheyoungprefernoises,activitiesandunrestrainedenjoyment.Iftheylivetogether,oldmayfeelthattheyarealwaysdisturbedandtheyoungmayfeelthattheyareoftenhandicapped.
Secondly,peopleofdifferentgenerationshavedifferentviewsandvalues.Whatisquitenormaltotheparentsmayseemtobeold-fashionedorwrongtothechildren.Whentheylivetogether,theymaydisagreeonmattersrangingfromminordomesticmatterstonationalandinternationalissues.Consequently,familylifemaybeunpleasantorevenunbearabletoboththeoldandtheyoung.
Lastbutnottheleast,adultchildren,liketheirparents,loveindependenceandfreedom,buttheirparentsstilltakethemaschildrenandunintentionallyinterfereintheiraffairs.Thesituationwillbeworseiftheadultchildrenarealreadymarried.Inthiscase,thechildrenhavealreadybuiltanewandclosedworldandanyoutsideinterferencemayleadtoconflicts.
Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaysafelydrawtheconclusionthatiftheparentsandtheiradultchildrendonotlivetogether,boththeoldandtheyoungcanenjoycompleteindependenceandfreedom,livealifetheylike,andkeepintacttheiraffectionsforeachother.
IamwritingtoseekaccommodationintheSnowyMountainsforagroupofstudentsfromPerth.
WeexpecttobetheSnowyMountainsbetweenJune1andJune12.Therearefourteenpeopleinourgroup,fivemenandsevenwomen,andamarriedcouple.Thefivemenwillacceptdormitoryaccommodation,andthewomenarehappytosharerooms,butthemarriedcouplewouldlikeadoubleroom.Wehopetokeepourexpensesaslowaspossible.
Pleasetellmeaboutrecreationalservicesinthearea.Thegroupwillbringtheirownbootsforbushwalking,butwearehopingtohireequipmentforothersports,likeskiing.Someofourgroupwillwanttohiregeologicalpicksandotherequipment,ifpossible.Wealsoneedtoknowaboutaccesstocavesandotherinterestinggeologicalfeaturesinthearea.
IamlookingforwardtoreceivinginformationabouttheStudentHostelServicesandotherfacilities.
一、线形图数据的描写
有些烤鸭们会准备一大张纸，上面抄满了各种表示不同特征的词和句式，到考试前就背呀背，其实这不一定是好的办法。
英语谚语有云Lessismore（少即是多），我的经验是：不要太多，不要太多！每一类的表达，掌握三个就足够了。因为各种表达如果太多的话，到了考场真正考试时可能会记不住，就算是记住了，记得越多，使用时混淆或者用错的可能性就越高。
线形图里最基本的特征是升高和降低，可以用“动词副词”或“形容词名词”这两种表达，他们可以相互转化：
还有线形图常出现波动、保持平稳、到达最高或最低点，这样的表达每一类能记住两个就可以了。
二、描述线形图的句型
相信大家在看过不同种类的范文后发现，在描述数据时，其实可以有非常多的句式，其中有些简单，有些复杂，不易归纳。
小轩总结了五种描写线形图中最实用、最经典的句型：
比如分别用这五种句型来描述下面的图：
句型一：Thepriceoftextbooksfellsharplyin2019.
句型二：Therewasarapiddecreaseinthepriceoftextbooksin2019.
句型三：Theyear2019witnessedadramaticdropinthepriceoftextbooks.
句型四：Asharpfallinthepriceoftextbookstookplacein2019.
句型五：Thepriceoftextbooksshowedadownwardtrendin2019.
记住，每一种句型之间都是可以相互转化的，目的就是写作时能做到每种句型的运用游刃有余。
各位需要多加练习和运用，目的是做到能在写作时随便就可以写出来，这样你必定是烤鸭界里最靓的仔！
三、多点数据的连接方式
因此，我们还需要用适合的方式把这些不同的数据串联起来，使句子变长变复杂，更符合英语的习惯。
我总共总结了六种数据间的连接方式，下面画一个简单的图来讲解：
连接方式一：现在分词作状语：startingat,beginningfrom，通常可以在描述数据的开头时使用
如果把第一个句子也加上的话，就会变成：
连接方式三：表示并列或转折的连词：but,however,and,inaddition
连接方式四：过去分词作状语：followedby（紧接着...），后面接名词性的短语
先hold住跳动的小内心，下面小轩使用范文来详细介绍五大句型和六种连接方式具体是怎么使用的。
四、线形图的写作步骤
3.描述每一项（通常是每一条线）的“重要数据”。
记住千万不要想覆盖到图里的每一个点、每一个数据！这是很多刚入坑的烤鸭都有的强迫症。
正确的做法是只写重要数据：开始点、结束点、相交点、大致趋势、转折点、最大最小值。
比如下面这副线形图，我把全部“重要数据”都圈了出来：
五、典型例题和范文
我们来看一个例题：
写作步骤：
2.读图：看到图里有三条线，分别表示的是nationalrailnetwork,Londonunderground,lightrail&metrosystems三种交通工具使用人数的趋势。
总体来说，nationalrailnetwork,Londonunderground在1950到1980年的使用人数都是不同的，但是，在1980年后，使用这两种交通工具的人开始相同，然后开始一起升高。因为他们有交点，而且在1980年后的趋势大致相同，所以可以放在同一个主体段内对比描述。
另外，留意到lightrail&metrosystems的数据远低于前面两种交通工具，所以这项用单独一个主体段写。
先写一个大致的中文提纲，理顺一下写作思路：
下面我们就可以按照前面学过的五大句型和多点数据的连接方式写出英文段落了：
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各位小伙伴在学习完小作文的系统攻略后，接下来才是最重要的一步：主动练习→获得反馈→做出修改→复习总结。链条里环节，缺一不可。
根据我十年来的经验，经过这个流程练习5-10篇后，大多数学生的写作都可以提高分。
记住，对雅思考试原理的科学认识，到练习上、考试上的运用，最后再到分数上提升的完美落幕，是一个需要质变的过程，都是在检验每位烤鸭的批判力和意志力。
我见过太多学生雅思失败的例子，听过太多学生的“感人”故事了，小白们幻想各种花里胡哨的的考试技巧，企图“巧妙地”把雅思骗过，结果是四处碰壁，受了各种骗。
而高手注重的是科学、系统的备考体系，只要对雅思的认知是正确的，那么保证努力就自然不会白费，最终成绩的实现也必然是意料之中的事。
最后祝宝宝们都考到目标分数！
题目：Nowadaysmanystudentshavetheopportunitytostudyforpartoralloftheircoursesinforeigncountries.Whilestudyingabroadbringsmanybenefitstoindividualstudents,italsohasanumberofdisadvantages.Doyouagreeordisagree
Inrecentyearstherehasbeenavastincreaseinthenumberofstudentschoosingtostudyabroad.Thisispartlybecausepeoplearemoreaffluentandpartyduetothevarietyofgrantsandscholarshipswhichareavailableforoverseasstudentsnowadays.Althoughforeignstudyisnotsomethingwhicheverystudentwouldchoose,itisanattractiveoptionformanypeople.
Studyingoverseashasanumberofadvantages.Firstly,itmaygivestudentsaccesstoknowledgeandfacilitiessuchaslaboratoriesandlibrarieswhicharenotavailableintheirhomecountry.Furthermore,bylookingabroadstudentsmayfindawiderrangeofcoursesthanthoseofferedintheircountry’suniversities,andthereforeonewhichfitsmorecloselytotheirparticularrequirements.
Ontheotherhand,studyingabroadhasanumberofdrawbacks.Thesemaybedividedintopersonalandprofessional.Firstly,studentshavetoleavetheirfamilyandfriendsforalongperiod.Furthermore,studyingabroadisalmostalwaysmoreexpensivethanstudyingatone’slocaluniversity.Finally,studentsoftenhavetostudyinaforeignlanguage,whichmaylimittheirperformanceandmeantheydonotattaintheirtruelevel.
Inmyopinion,however,thedisadvantagesofstudyingabroadareusuallytemporaryinnature.Studentswhostudyabroadgenerallybecomeproficientinthelanguagequitesoonandtheyareonlyawayfromtheirfamilyandfriendsforayearortwo.Furthermore,manyofthebenefitslaststudentsalltheirlivesandmakethemhighlydesirabletoprospectiveemployers.
Thechartbelowshowsthefiguresforimprisonmentinfivecountriesbetween1930and1980.
Writeareportforauniversitylecturerdescribingtheinformationshownbelow.
Thechartcomparesthefiguresforcriminalimprisonmentinfivecountriesoveraspanof50yearsfrom1930to1980.
Ascanbeseenfromthechart,thefiguresfortheUnitedStates,CanadaandNewZealandstoodoutasbeingreallysignificantandallthedesignatedcountriesrevealedratherdramaticchangesintheimprisonmentfiguresacrosstheboardoverthe50years.
Firstly,theimprisonmentfiguresofUKwereonasteadyrise.Weseethatin1930,therewere30,000cases,butin1980,itbecame85,000cases.Theperiodduring1940-1970sawthefastestincrease.
Second,thesituationofAustraliawasquitesimilartothatofNewZealand,butnotasdramatic.Hereweseethatin1930,thecasesforAustraliawas70,000whileNewZealandhadaveryhighnumberof100,000cases.Thenin1940,thefiguresforthetwocountriesbothdroppedsubstantially,withNewZealanddroppingbyalmost45,000cases.In1950,NewZealandwentonwithitstrendofslightdecreasewhileAustraliashowedaminorincrease.Later,in1960,bothcountriesexperiencedgreatrisesandreached70,000casesand78,000casesrespectively.Theyear1970sawaninterestingscene:thefiguresforUK,AustraliaandNewZealanddrewevenat79,000cases.Thenin1980,weseethatAustraliadroppedsubstantiallywhileNewZealandcontinueditsupwardtrend.
Third,.andCanadabothhadverybigstartingfiguresin1930,100,000casesand120,000casesrespectively.In1940,.roserapidlyto130,000caseswhileCanadadecreasedby10,000cases.In1950,thingschangeddramatically,withUSdroppingbyabout20,000caseswhileCanadarisingto115,000cases.In1960,.rosewhileCanadafellandthefiguresforbothcountrieswere118,000casesand102,000casesrespectively.Thetwocountriesbothsawsubstantialdecreasesin1970,withUSfallingto95,000casesandCanadadroppingto83,000cases.1980witnessedanastoundingincreasemarginwithUSandthefigurerosewithgreatmomentumto138,000casesandCanadaclimbedupto90,000cases.
Thusweseethatimprisonmentinthefivecountriesunderwentmanychangesacrossthe50years.
参考译文
该图表对比的是1930-1980五十年间五个国家囚禁犯人的数据情况。
总的来看，美国、加拿大、新西兰数据最为突出，而50年里，各国在这方面的数据都呈现了很大的波动性。
首先，英国的监禁数据一直处于上升中。从1930年的30,000例逐渐增至1980年的85,000例，其中1940-1970年间增长最快。
第二，澳大利亚和新西兰的状况有点相似，但没有新西兰起落幅度那么大。这里，我们看到1930年时，澳大利亚的数据是70,000例，而新西兰则高达近100,000例。接下来的1940年两国的数据都出现了很大的下降，特别是新西兰下降了接近45,000例。1950年，新西兰数据继续小幅度下降，澳大利亚则小幅上扬。之后的.1960年里两国数据都大幅上扬，分别达到70,000例和78,000例。1970年出现了很有趣的一面：英国、澳大利亚、新西兰三国的数据持平在79,000例，接下来的1980年我们看到的则是澳大利亚的大幅下跌与新西兰的继续增长。
第三，美国和加拿大起点非常高，1930年分别是100,000例和120,000例。1940年，美国大幅攀升至130,000例，而加拿大则出现了约10,000的下降。1950年，情况又发生戏剧性变化，美国降低了约20,000例，而加拿大则上升到大约115,000例。1960年，美国上升，加拿大下降，两国数据分别是118,000例和102,000例。1970年两国同时大幅下降，美国跌至95,000例，加拿大跌至83,000例。1980年美国的增长幅度大得惊人，迅猛攀升至138,000例，加拿大也上升至90,000例。
由此，我们看出，这五个国家的监禁情况在50年间确实发生了很多的变化。
题目：Inrecentyears,therehasbeengrowinginterestintherelationshipbetweenequalityandpersonalachievement.Somepeoplebelievethatindividualscanachievemoreinegalitariansocieties.Othersbelievethathighlevelsofpersonalachievementarepossibleonlyifindividualsarefreetosucceedorfailaccordingtotheirindividualisyourviewoftherelationshipbetweenequalityandpersonalsuccess
范文：
Inmyopinion,anegalitariansocietyisoneinwhicheveryonehasthesamerightsandthesameopportunities.Icompletelyagreethatpeoplecanachievemoreinthiskindofsociety.
Educationisanimportantfactorwithregardtopersonalsuccessinlife.Ibelievethatallchildrenshouldhaveaccesstofreeschooling,andhighereducationshouldbeeitherfreeoraffordableforallthosewhochosetopursueauniversitydegree.Inasocietywithoutfreeschoolingoraffordablehighereducation,onlychildrenandyoungadultsfromwealthierfamilieswouldhaveaccesstothebestlearningopportunities,andtheywouldthereforebebetterpreparedforthejobmarket.Thiskindofinequalitywouldensurethesuccessofsomebutharmtheprospectsofothers.
Iwouldarguethatequalrightsandopportunitiesarenotinconflictwithpeople’sfreedomtosucceedorfail.Inotherwords,equalitydoesnotmeanthatpeoplelosetheirmotivationtosucceed,orthattheyarenotallowedtofail.Onthecontrary,Ibelievethatmostpeoplewouldfeelmoremotivatedtoworkhardandreachtheirpotentialiftheythoughtthattheylivedinafairsociety.Thosewhodidnotmakethesameeffortwouldknowthattheyhadwastedtheiropportunity.Inequality,ontheotherhand,wouldbemorelikelytodemotivatepeoplebecausetheywouldknowthattheoddsofsuccesswerestackedinfavourofthosefromprivilegedbackgrounds.
Inconclusion,itseemstomethatthereisapositiverelationshipbetweenequalityandpersonalsuccess.
Researchindicatesthatthecharacteristicswearebornwithhavemuchmoreinfluenceonyourpersonalityanddevelopmentthananyexperienceswemayhaveinourlife.
Whichdoyouconsidertobethemajorinfluence（2012年5月真题）
Todaythewayweconsiderhumanpsychologyandmentaldevelopmentisheavilyinfluencedbythegeneticsciences.Wenowunderstandtheimportanceofinheritedcharacteristicsmorethaneverbefore.Yetwearestillunabletodecidewhetheranindividual'spersonalityanddevelopmentaremoreinfluencedbygeneticfactors(nature)orbytheenvironment(nurture).
Research,relatingtoidenticaltwins,hashighlightedhowsignificantinheritedcharacteristicscanbeforanindividual'slife.Butwhetherthesecharacteristicsareabletodevelopwithinthepersonalityofanindividualsurelydependsonwhetherthecircumstancesallowsuchadevelopment.itseemsthattheexperienceswehaveinlifearesounpredictableandsopowerful,thattheycanboostorover-rideotherinfluences,andthereseemstobeplentyofresearchfindingstoconfirmthis.
Myownviewisthatthereisnoonemajorinfluenceinaperson'slife.Instead,thetraits,weinheritfromourparentsandthesituationsandexperienceswehaveinlifeareconstantlyinteracting.Itistheinteractingofthetwothatshapesaperson'spersonalityanddictateshowthatpersonalitydevelops.Ifthiswerenottrue,thenwewouldbeabletopredictthebehaviourandcharacterofapersonfromthemomenttheywereborn.
Inconclusion,Idonotthinkthateithernatureornurtureisthemajorinfluenceonaperson,butthatbothhavepowerfuleffects.Howthesefactorsinteractisstillunknowntodayandtheyremainlargelyunpredictableinaperson'slife.
Whenpeoplemovetoanewcountry,theyshouldacceptthelocalcultureastheirown.Doyouagreeordisagree（2015年11月真题）
Itiscommonnowadaysforpeopletomovetoanewcountryasimmigrantstoseeknewopportunitiesforworkortogetmarried.Fornewimmigrants,oneofthemajorissuesistowhatextenttheyshouldacceptthelocalcultureastheirown.Whileitisimportantforthenewcomerstofollowthelocalrulesandconventioninordertoadapttothenewenvironmentandstarttheirnewlives,Ibelievethatitisbeneficialtoboththeimmigrantsandtheirhostcountriesifthenewmembersbringintheirowncultureandlifestyleforthesakeofculturaldiversity.
Tobeginwith,newimmigrantswouldmakemoresmoothtransitiontotheirnewlifeiftheyunderstandhowthesocietyoftheirhostcountriesworksandbehaveaccordingly.Toconsiderasimpleexample,whenanAmericanmovestoEngland,shewillhavetodriveontheleftsideoftheroadfollowingtheEnglishcustoms.Otherwise,shewillimmediatelyfindherselfeitherinasevereaccidentorinjailforbreakingthetrafficlaws.Bythesametoken,aMexicanwomanwhoimmigratestoAmericawillhavetotrytodevelopherEnglishproficiencyinordertobettercommunicatewiththelocalpeoplewhosenativelanguageisEnglish.Nonetheless,asIwillarguelateron,followingthelocalconventioninone'sdailylifeisonething,butacceptingthelocalcultureasone'sownisquiteanother.
FortheAmericanwhoisnowlivinginEngland,eventhoughshehastoobeyalltheEnglishlaws,shecanstillchoosetoretainherAmericanidentityandlifestyle.Forexample,shemaycookAmericanfoodathomeanddinewithherfriendsinAmerican-stylerestaurants.Inaddition,shecanstillspeaktoherchildrenwithherAmericanaccentandteachherchildrenAmericanvalues.ThisisalsotruefortheMexicanwomanwhomovedtoAmerica.
Infact,itisnowgenerallyacknowledgedthatculturaldiversityshouldbeconsideredastrengthforanationaspeoplefromdifferentbackgroundswillhaveachancetolearnfromoneanother.Forexample,theAmericanimmigrantwhocookAmericanfoodathomemightalsosharewithherEnglishneighborstheAmericanrecipesandhelpbringtheAmericancuisinetoanEnglishdinnertable.TheMexicanwomanwhotakesEnglishcoursesinthelocalcommunitycollegemayalsotutorherAmericanclassmateswhoarelearningSpanishorstudyingMexicanculture.
Inconclusion,peoplewhochoosetoimmigratetoadifferentcountrymayfacegreatchallengesandopportunitiesastheyadapttothenewenvironment.Itistruethattheyneedtomaketheeffortstolearnthenewrulesandcultureofthehostcountry.Buttheyshouldalsobeencouragedtoretaintheirownculturesandlifestylesasnewmembersofamorediversesociety.
Introduction
Thebarchartcomparesthetimespentby10to15-year-oldsintheUKontwoactivities,namelychattingonlineandplayingcomputergames.
该柱状图比较了英国10至15岁青少年的两项活动，即在线聊天和玩电脑游戏。
Overview
Bycontrast,girlspreferchattingonline.Closeto70%of10to15-year-oldgirlsengageinonlineconversationeachday,comparedtoabout50%ofthiscohortwhoplaycomputergames.Ofthegirlswhodoplayonconsoles,mostofthemplayforlessthananhour,whereasmostgirlswhochatonlinedosoformorethanonehour,andnearly10%chatforfourhoursormore.(188)
饼图：游客分析
Asamatteroffact,suchpracticecanbringmorebenefitsinvariousaspects,especiallyineconomicgrowth.Foronething,asthenewly-tappedenergycandirectlyalleviatetheenergyshortage,whichwilltosomeextentguaranteeacountry’sindustrialisationapromisingprospect,botheconomicandtechnologydevelopmentwillbespurred,offeringbetterprerequisitestoresolvingenvironmentcrisisbyexploringnewalternatives.Incontrast,thelackoffeasibleapproachestoenergyscarcitywillundoubtedlybringbotheconomicgrowthandtechnologyadvancementtoastandstill.//Foranother,thelocalsinremoteareascanalsobebenefitted,assuchapolicymustprovidethemwithmorejobopportunities,bywhichtheirlifequalitywillbebettered.
反驳：(1)开发能源→满足能有需求→保证经济发展→有资金探索新能源替换，长远看，某种程度上弥补之前可能带来的环境破破坏;(2)偏远地区更多工作机会
alleviatevt.缓解
spurvt.刺激;促进
prerequisiten.先决条件
bringsth.toastandstill静止(状态);停顿，停滞
Conclusion
Inthelightoftheabove,thefinalverdictisquitecrystal-clear.Environmentproblemsassuchatrendmaycause,thedisadvantagesoftappinguntouchedregionsforenergypaleintoinsignificancewhensetagainsttheadvantages.
重申观点
verdictn.意见;结论
paleintoinsignificance使显得不那么重要;使相形见绌
题目：Universitiesshouldacceptequalnumbersofmaleandfemalestudentsineverysubject.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree
Inmyopinion,menandwomenshouldhavethesameeducationalopportunities.However,Idonotagreewiththeideaofacceptingequalproportionsofeachgenderineveryuniversitysubject.
Havingthesamenumberofmenandwomenonalldegreecoursesissimplyunrealistic.Studentnumbersonanycoursedependontheapplicationsthattheinstitutionreceives.Ifauniversitydecidedtofillcourseswithequalnumbersofmalesandfemales,itwouldneedenoughapplicantsofeachgender.Inreality,manycoursesaremorepopularwithonegenderthantheother,anditwouldnotbepracticaltoaimforequalproportions.Forexample,nursingcoursestendtoattractmorefemaleapplicants,anditwouldbedifficulttofillthesecoursesiffiftypercentoftheplacesneededtogotomales.
Apartfromthepracticalconcernsexpressedabove,Ialsobelievethatitwouldbeunfairtobaseadmissiontouniversitycoursesongender.Universitiesshouldcontinuetoselectthebestcandidatesforeachcourseaccordingtotheirqualifications.Inthisway,bothmenandwomenhavethesameopportunities,andapplicantsknowthattheywillbesuccessfuliftheyworkhardtoachievegoodgradesatschool.Ifafemalestudentisthebestcandidateforaplaceonacourse,itissurelywrongtorejectherinfavourofamalestudentwithlowergradesorfewerqualifications.
Inconclusion,theselectionofuniversitystudentsshouldbebasedonmerit,anditwouldbebothimpracticalandunfairtochangetoaselectionprocedurebasedongender.
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一、表达倍数、分数的句型
柱状图的基本特征就是，在适当的地方作比较。
大家别忘了，剑桥雅思官方对小作文的题目要求是：Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmakecomparisonswhererelevant.（在有关联的数据之间作比较）
数据之间的比较，指的就是倍数、分数、相等这三种关系。所以，我们需要掌握各种比较关系的表达，小轩总结了三种最实用、最经典的句型：
比如分别用这三种句型来描述下面的图：
句型一：TheamountofCO2emittedfromcarsin1999wasthreetimesmorethanthatin2000.（没错，这是“A是B的3倍”的意思，不是4倍！）
句型二：In1999,carsproducedthreetimesmoreCO2than(theydid)in2000.
句型三：TherewasthreetimesmoreCO2emittedbycarsin1999thanin2000.
再来一个例子：
句型一：In2000,theaverageamountoftimespentonwatchingTVonadailybasisbyadultsinUSwastenminuteshigherthanthatbychildren.
句型二：In2000,adultsinUSspenttenminutesmoreonwatchingTVeverydayonaveragethanchildren(did).
句型三：In2000,thereweretenminutesmoretimespentonwatchingTVeverydayonaveragebyadultsinUSthanbychildren.
二、柱状图的分类和写作方法
雅思考试里的柱状图可以分为两大类，在拿到题目时就要决定是属于哪一类，因为不同的分类，写作的思路会完全不一样。
比如下面的例子：
横轴上表示的是年份，总共有male和female两个元素，我们应该把这图看作是有两条线的线形图，一条线写一个主体段，总共两个主体段。
再如：
横轴上标示的也是年份，但这个图有三元素：Gamessoftware,DVD/video,CDs，我们把这图转化为线形图后，可以就每一个元素写一个主体段。
又因为留意到DVD/video和Gamessoftware的趋势都是升高的，所以我们也可以把这两个元素合并在一个主体段，另外CDs单独一个主体段，所以总共写两个主体段。
听起来好像很抽象，小轩用一个例题来解释：
我们看到图里有两种分类方式，分别是三个国家（Japan,Brazil,India）和三种行业（agriculture,industry,servicesector）。我们在开始写之前，首先要决定好用的是什么分类标准。
就这道题来说，要么以三个国家为线索，分别写每个国家里三种行业工作的人数；要么以三个行业为线索，分别写每个行业里三个国家分别的劳动人数。这是最清晰、最有规律的，而且是最容易掌握的写法！
小轩在课上时常听到烤鸭们争吵柱状图究竟应该按照什么标准来分类，有的老师说应该按照国家分，有的范文又说应该按照行业来分。
如果细心观察这图，会发现存在一些倍数和相等的数据，比如，在日本从事服务业的人数是工业的两倍，在巴西从事农业和工业的人数相等，在印度从事农业的远比工业和农业的多，这些都是特征数据，应该在写作时有意突出。
根据这些特征，以三个国家为线索先写一个中文的提纲：
根据这个中文提纲，就可以很简单地写出全部主体段了：
题目：Somepeoplebelievethatjobsatisfactionismoreimportantthanjobsecurity.Othersbelievethatpeoplecannotalwaysenjoytheirjobsandthatapermanentjobismoreimportant.Discussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.
Itistruethatseekingforadecentjobisnotaseasyasdecadesagoduetotheeconomicrecessionandcompetitivejobmarket.Althoughsomemayarguethatasenseofsatisfactiontowardstheirjobsiscrucial,personally,Ibelievethatapermanentjobismoremeaningful.
Ontheonehand,apermanentjobcanguaranteetomeetemployee’sbasicneeds.Thisisbecausealmostnoonecanescapefromthereality.Everyday,wearefacingwithavarietyofexpenses,suchasfood,shelter,transport,billandeveneducationtuitionforchildren.Witharelativelystablejob,people,especiallythoseinmiddleagedcancovermostexpenses.Inaddition,thosewhostayinthesamecompanyorinstitutearemorelikelytogetapromotionastheyshowtheloyaltytowardstheircompany.However,thosewhochangetheirjobsfrequentlymaymeetunintendedoutcomes.Forexample,theymayfinddifficulttosupportthemselvesandraisetheirfamilymembers.
Ontheotherhand,thoseadvocatesforpursuingajobtheylovemightregardjobsatisfactionastheprioritywhenfindinganemployment.Theybelieveonlyworkingwithfriendlycolleaguesandemployersandunderaflexibleworkingtimeschedule,cantheyfulfilltheirpotentialandaccomplishalltaskswell.However,thisideaisunrealistic.Forexample,dozensofyounggraduateshavethebitterresultbecauseoftheirimmaturethought,thatisunemployment.
Inmyopinion,thereisnoperfectjobintheworld.Theonlythingwecandoistofindasuitablejobratherthanaperfectone.Thereisa10,000hourstheoryinpsychologythatpeoplewhodevotethemselvestojobsandspendmorethan10,000hoursconstantlycanbecomeexpertsinthatfield.Thistheorytellsusaplainfactthatnoonecanachieveasenseofjobsatisfactionwithoutyearsofeffortsandpersistence.
Inconclusion,peoplehavingaconstantjobaremorelikelytohaveapromisingjobcareerandwellbeing.
ThechartgivesinformationaboutUKimmigration,emigrationandnetmigrationbetween1999and2008.这张图表提供了1999年至2008年间英国移民、移民和净移民的信息。
In1999,over450,000peoplecametoliveintheUK,whilethenumberofpeoplewhoemigratedstoodatjustunder300,000.Thefigurefornetmigrationwasaround160,000,anditremainedatasimilarleveluntil2003.From1999to2004,theimmigrationraterosebynearly150,000people,buttherewasamuchsmallerriseinemigration.Netmigrationpeakedatalmost250,000peoplein2004.1999年，超过45万人在英国生活，而移民的人数不到30万人。净移民人数约为16万人，直到2003年才达到类似水平。从1999年到2004年，移民率上升了近15万人，但移民人数却少了很多。2004年，净移民人数达到近25万人的峰值。
After2004,therateofimmigrationremainedhigh,butthenumberofpeopleemigratingfluctuated.Emigrationfellsuddenlyin2007,beforepeakingatabout420,000peoplein2008.Asaresult,thenetmigrationfigurerosetoaround240,000in2007,butfellbacktoaround160,000in2008.(159)
2004年之后，移民率仍然很高，但移民的人数却在波动。2007年移民突然减少，2008年达到了大约420,000人的峰值。结果，2007年净移民人数上升到24万，但在2008年又回落到16万左右。(159)
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Thelinegraphcomparesthreecompaniesintermsoftheirwasteoutputbetweentheyears2000and2015.从2000年到2015年，这条线图将三家公司的废物产出进行了比较。
In2000,companyAproduced12tonnesofwaste,whilecompaniesBandCproducedaround8tonnesand4tonnesofwastematerialrespectively.Overthefollowing5years,thewasteoutputofcompaniesBandCrosebyaround2tonnes,butthefigureforcompanyAfellbyapproximately1tonne.2000年，A公司生产了12吨废物，而B公司和C公司分别生产了大约8吨和4吨废料。在接下来的5年里，公司B和C的废料产量增加了大约2吨，但是公司A的产量下降了大约1吨。
混合图：英国移民
Thechartbelowshowslong-terminternationalmigrationinUK.