读后续写：主旨升华句3（脱险型）（解析版）目录TOC\o"1-3"\h\uPart1困境类场景描写-1-一、环境描写（恶劣）-1-二、情绪描写（绝望、恐惧+挣扎）-5-三、转机描写——描写声音传来或看见了什么-8-四、情绪描写（希望+努力）-9-五、脱险描写-10-六、情绪描写（感恩+高兴）-10-七、主旨描写-11-Part2“脱险”型-11-Part3素材积累练习：根据提示填空：-14-Part4模拟题（新高考专用）-16-1．（2022·广东·汕头市聿怀中学模拟预测）-16-2．（2022·湖南·一模）-17-3．（2022·江苏·南京市第一中学一模）-19-4．（2022·江苏·模拟预测）-21-Part1困境类场景描写一、环境描写（恶劣）——波涛汹涌：当我继续往前漂的时候，一个巨浪呼啸着向我们逼近。AsIfloatedon,ahugewave(一个巨浪)whistled(呼啸而来)andapproachedus.大风从耳边呼啸而过，我们被推离海岸越来越远。Thebigwindroaredthroughourears(在耳边咆哮),andwewerepushedawayfromtheshorefartherandfarther.我所有的感觉都告诉我一个大浪就要来了。Allmysensestoldmethatabigwavewasabouttocome.(即将来临)一个看似猛烈的海浪正向我们袭来。Apowerful-looking(看似猛烈的)wavewascomingtowardsus.
(靠近我们)——鲨鱼的可怕：1.那是一条鲨鱼，一条巨大的鲨鱼，在离她不远的地方游来游去。Itwasashark,amassivesharkthatwasswimmingaround,notfarawayfromher.2.鲨鱼的下颚张开，露出一排排锋利的牙齿。Theshark’sjawsopenedwide,showingrowsofsharpteeth.——陆地上的水：雨滴疯狂地打在挡风玻璃上，天空笼罩在一片灰色之中。Splashingraindropshitthewindshieldfranticallyandtheskieswereoverhungwithablanketofgrey,.水不停地涨，仿佛要把我活吞下去。Thewaterkeptrising,asifitwould
engulf
mealive.3.不幸的是，水涌了进来，水涨到了我的腰上。【在水里行走（不可能rush,dash）】Unfortunately,thewaterpouredinandcreptuponmywaist.
——推荐句型：Thewindblows/whistles/howls/picksup/whipsthroughsth/sweepsacrosssth.风刮/飕飕的刮/呼啸而过/愈刮愈大/刮过……/掠过……Theyweregetting
drenchedbyicywater.他们被冰冷的水浇透了。Theheavyrainwasviolently
beating
againstthewindow.大雨疯狂地击打窗户。Therain
drummed
ontheroofofthebuilding.雨不停地击打着房预。Thefuriousstormis
grumbling
outside.狂风暴雨在室外呼啸着。Theicywindstarted
howling,
stinging
myface.寒风开始咆哮，刺痛了我的脸。
Aflashof
lightning
litup
thewholesky.一道闪电点亮了整个天空。8.Thesharp
claps
ofthunder
pierced
thequietnight.声声清脆的雷声划破了宁静的夜晚。Theboltoflightning
stabs
theearth.一道闪电划过天空。10.天空和海洋融为一体|theskyandtheocean
meltinto
eachother
engulfed
(包围了)uswithmyfeet
stiff/numb
(僵硬/麻木)and
shivering.尽管我们筋疲力尽，我们没有停止。咬紧牙关，我们继续游泳。Exhaustedaswewere
(尽管很累),wedidn’tstop.Grittingourteeth,wekeptswimming.
似乎过了一个世纪，我感到极度疲劳地努力游泳以保持漂浮。Afterwhatseemedacentury,Ifelt
extremelyfatigued
(非常累)whileswimminghardto
keep
myself
afloat(漂浮着的).5.他缩进大衣里，冷得脸都发紫了。Hewas
huddled
intohiscoat,hisface
bluewithcold.6
手指被冰冷的海水弄得麻木，喉咙被寒风吹得哽咽，我感到快要崩溃了。Fingers
numbed
bythe
chilly
water,throatchokedbyicywind,Ifeltonthevergeofcollapsing.7.在刺骨的寒风里，她把孩子紧紧地抱在胸前。Sheclaspedthebabytoherbosominthe
biting/cutting/piercing/sharp
wind.寒风开始咆哮，像锋利的小刀/针一样刺痛了我的脸。Theicywindstartedhowling,
cuttingmyfacelikeasharpknife/needles.9.她冷得牙齿直打颤。Herteethwere
chattering
withcold.——害怕我深吸一口气，使劲咽了下去。Itookadeepbreathand
swallowedhard
creptuponmyheart(爬上我心头)andIcouldhardlytellhowlongIcould
ploughon
(前行).4
一想到绝望，我就直打哆嗦。Thethoughtofhopelessness
sentshiversdownmyspine(让我后脊背发凉).
我被一种恐怖感淹没了。Iwas
floodedwithasenseofhorror(被恐惧感淹没).6.看到这里，我内心的恐惧感越来越强。Seeingthis,Ifeltmyfear
growing/increasing(剧增)inside.7我感到一股焦虑席卷了我的身体。Ifelt
awaveofanxiety(一阵焦虑)
sweptovermybody
distant
sound
reachedourears.(传入耳朵)2.就在那时，我的脑子飞速运转——为什么不打给911和Joe呢？Justthen,mymindraced–whynotcall911andJoe3船的声音在我们耳边回响。Thesoundoftheboat
echoedinourears.(在我们耳内回响)4就在这时，一声尖锐的哨声划破了宁静。Atthatmoment,a
shrillwhistle(汽笛声)ripped
theair(划破天空).5.当我们不知所措时，远处传来刺耳的喊叫声。Whenwewereatalossofwhattodo,therewere
rasping
(刺耳的)
shouts(喊叫声)risingfromthedistance
(从远处升起).Jason看到远处有东西在闪烁。“灯！我看到灯了！”杰森大声喊道。Jasonsawsomethingflickerinthedistance.“Lights!Iseelights!”Jasonshoutedout.我在绝望中我终于看到远处有几艘救生艇朝我们驶来。Insheerdesperation(在绝望中),Ifinallycaughtsightofsomeboatswithlifeguardsonthemheadingtowardsus
就像抓着救命稻草一样，我一遍又一遍地拨号码。Asifclutchingatstraws,
Idialedthenumberagainandagain.听到这个令人欣慰的消息，我忍不住激动起来。Hearingthe
comforting
news,I
couldn'thelprestrainingmyexcitement.(情难自抑)3.
他的话重新点燃了我心中的希望之火。Hiswordsreignitedtheflameofhopeinmyheart.4.我感到一阵自豪，欣慰地微笑着。Smilinginrelief
(如释重负地微笑),I
feltarushofpride(感到一阵自豪).
看到有船来救我们，我和汤姆高兴极了，都松了一口气。Overjoyed(狂喜)toseeaboatcomingtoourrescue,TomandI
breathedasighofrelief(如释重负地松了口气)由于在一个姿势上保持了几个小时而僵硬了，他们慢慢地展开了身体。Stifffromkeepinginonepositionforhours,theyslowlyunfoldedtheirbodies.五、脱险描写1.船终于到达了我们身边，把我们所有人都带回了岸边。Theboatfinallyreachedusandtookallofusbacktotheshore.2.Joe大声大叫，试图安慰我，让我相信这是逃离危险的最好方法。Yelling
atthetopofhislung,Joetriedtosoothemeandconvincemethatitwasthebestwaytoescapethedanger.六、情绪描写（感恩+高兴）1.当我们想象欢乐的场景是什么时，我心中有解脱，幸福写在我的脸上。Whenwepicturedwhatthemerryscenewouldbe,relieflayinmyheartandhappinesswaswrittenonmyface.2.我如释重负，不停地想整个事件。我知道如果他们再在海里，就会死了。Sighinginrelief,Icouldn’tstopthinkingaboutthewholeevent.Iknewtheywouldhavediediftheyhadbeenintheseaforanylonger.七、主旨描写1.我突然想到，帮助别人是无价的，每个人都应该是一个救生员。Itoccurredtomethathelpingotherswaspricelessandeveryoneshouldbealifeguard.这是...，的情绪第一次充分利用他，眼泪从他的脸颊上滴下来。Forthefirsttimesince…,one’semotionsgotthebestofhimandtearstrickleddownhischeeks.直到那时，我才意识到是Joe一直在照顾我。OnlythendidIrealizethatitwasJoewhohadbeencaringformethroughthickandthin.我如释重负，被内疚和悔恨所淹没。我喃喃地说，想着我应该认真对待他的警告。Sobbinginrelief,
I
.“Wearesafe!”Macsaidinapleasanttone.Whatanunforgettableexperience!Itturnsoutthatthere’salwaysawayoutofanyplightaslongaswestaycalm.最后，狼从路上跑开，消失在远处。“我们很安全！”麦克以一种愉快的语气说。多么难忘的经历啊！事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，就总有办法摆脱困境。Part3素材积累练习：根据提示填空：1.Shetried___________________(夺枪)fromhim.2.He
was
____________________________(笨手笨脚地想抓住艾尔弗雷德的手臂)anddig
my
nails
into
his
flesh.
3.In
sport,
it’s
usually
men
________________________(新闻人物通常是男性)
.
4.If
you
were
you,
I_________________________(要抓住我的免费索取的权利，现在)!
5.Success
is
now
___________________(在望).
6.She
allowed
__________________________(胜利从手中溜走了).
7.He___________________(马上就明白)Tephen
talking
about
wife.
8.He
______________________________(设法牢牢抓住了那个金属物),
get
a
firm
grip
of
it
andheave
body
upwards.
9.Attlee
extremely
intelligent
and____________________________________(对局势的把握颇为高明).
10.Use
your
mouse
__________________________________(拖动图片将其调整为新的尺寸).
11.He
barely
able______________________________________(拖着那条中毒的腿走路
)12.The
minutes
___________________(熬过去)
far
as
shopping
for
clothes
goes,
___________________(是件挺没意思的事)
14.___________________(他拖着腿),
and
he
can
hardly
lift
arm.
15.I
tried
to
___________________(走出来)morass
despair.
16.Please
concentrate
on
the
business
at
hand
______________________(不要牵扯其他问题).
17.I
don’t
want
go
back
there
and________________________(重提那件气人的事)
18.You’ll
never
home______________________________________(你走这么慢).
19.He
felt
hot
tears_______________________(掉到他的手指上)
他感觉到热泪。20.Nancy
___________________(疲惫地瘫坐到)a
nearby
chair
21.Britain
_________________________
(从第二位降到了)third
place
in
league.
22.There
___________________(垂直深渊)just
outside
window
23.If
I___________________(给点暗示)he
might
give
me
bigpresent.
24.Burning
embers
started
______________________________________(从天花板上往下掉)25.He
___________________(放低了声音)
glanced
round
door.
参考答案：1.Shetriedtoseizethegunfromhim.她试图夺他的枪。2.He
clumsily
trying
grab
Alfred’s
armsanddig
他笨手笨脚地想抓住艾尔弗雷德的手臂，指甲抠进了他的肉里。3.In
who
headlines.
在体育方面，新闻人物通常是男性。4.If
I’d
FREE
copy
right
now!
如果你是你，我要抓住我的免费索取的权利，现在！5.Success
within
our
grasp.
现在胜利在望。6.She
victory
slip
from
her
她让胜利从手中溜走了。7.He
instantly
grasped
that
Stephen
他马上就明白斯蒂芬在说他的妻子。8.He
managed
grasp
metal,
heave
他设法牢牢抓住了那个金属物，把整个身子往上提。9.Attlee